I loved it, can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: thank you! glad you liked it =) Report Review
I absolutely can't WAIT for the next chapter, your stories are my absolute FAVOURITE! :D
104826167337/10Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I hope you like the rest! Report Review
I am FREAKING out over here, I loved the ending! I can't wait for the sequel! :DAuthor's Response: FREAKING OUT. AH.
I really hope you like the sequel :) thank you! Report Review
Please update soon?? :) Report Review
Please please please please please update quickly, i love this story! Report Review
This story is absolutely FLAWLESS. So many emotions and thoughts are going through my head.merlin, IT'S AMAZING.
Please update soon!!!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much (: Update is coming (: Report Review
Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: I'm working on finishing it today, actually! Thanks for the reviews - they made my morning! :D Report Review
NEXT CHAPTER? I THINK SO :3Author's Response: WOOOT!
Thanks for the review! Report Review
I LOVE THIS STOOORRYYY :DAuthor's Response: I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS.
Thank you! :D Report Review
Things just got INTERESTING :D Onto the next chapter!Author's Response: LOL! They did. :D Thanks for the review! Report Review
I like it so far :) To the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
James and Aria are AMAZING!
Update soon.please? :)Author's Response: akdsjljgkahgljahg
They think you're AMAZING too!
I will certainly try :)
Thank yoouu ♥
I left the review on the wrong chapter...oops XD
I went back to read it, and I thought it was this chapter...yeah XD
I really liked this chapter though:D Can't wait for more:3 Report Review
I am VERY excited for the next chapter!:D
I'm happy Faye is out of the picture, I've never liked her >.<
I was getting a little (A LOT) mad at James when he was being an oblivious jerk to the entire thing, but I don't blame him...on some level:P
I can't WAIT for the next chapter :D
1O/1O! Report Review
I just read every chapter, word for word, in one sitting.
I LOVE IT!!!:D
Please update somewhat quickly:) Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!:D
I think the storyline is just incredibly unique, and I haven't seen anything like it:)
Three things I want to say, so I don't bore you with my review :P
1) There is progress with James and Vicky^_^ *happy dances* awww:) I love them together!:D
2) I'm so happy that you made them kiss in the 5th (Was it fifth? I can't remember:P) chapter so you didn't have to make us wait^_^
3) PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!:3 I'm dying over heeerrreee:( And I read this chapter weeks ago, and this is my *insert number here*th time I've read this chapter and I'm only now reviewing:/ sorry bout that...
10/10:D Report Review
As soon as you said professional Quidditch player, I KNEW IT WAS AL! It just had to be, or I'd have to go back to another chapter to read Adele/Al again:P
Both of my favourite stories were updated today! (This story and another Al/OC) and they were BOTH cliffiesD: I reckon you guys staged a convention and did this on purpose;D
I can't WAIT to see Al's reaction...that's going to be so much fun to read^_^
Great chapter! Report Review
I. love. this. story.
New chapter soon?:3 Report Review
So you've been updating and editing a lot of chapters recently...and it gets me excited to see this story go up to the top of my favourites list...but it makes me sad because I still see that 13 chappies:(
I can't wait until the next chapter! I love this story:)Author's Response: I know and I'm sorry :( Boo for editing. Yeah, I've been going back through and working on the earlier chapters because I realize how much better I've gotten. But the next update will be a new chapter for sure, I promise! :D Report Review
:D So unique! I've never seen anything like it! Can't wait for the next chappie!:DAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! It makes me so happy that you think it's so unique!
I hope you'll like the next chapter :) Report Review
:D Just read this story in one sitting and LOVED IT:D Can't wait for the next chappie!Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D. It should be out soon! Report Review
Gah, how could I hate you for writing this? I LOVE THIS STORY:D
I found this story at 22:00...and it's now 3:00 in the morning, and I have to wake up for school at 6:30. and this was totally worth not sleeping. (Though my internet didn't work for a good 15 minutes, which had me freaking out because it stopped at a cliffie Dx)
So, James and Aggy are quite the couple, if I do say so myself. I know they aren't really a "couple" but I like to call them that:P They are a bit mood swing-y though, when it comes to them two.
And yeah...Aggy has been a bit "bratty" lately:/ But when Aggy and James argue, I'm mostly on James's side on most of the rows that they have, even though I see Aggy's side more. I don't know why...:P
But what I'm trying to figure out is why he almost saw her die and he was scared out of his mind, and then he yells at her afterwards, not even asking if she was okay...I don't know. I guess I'll figure it out sometime:P
I realy hope that you update soon because I love this story. And it stops right after they had this sort of "break up" and that's always a good thing to stop at right?D:
Now, I'm going to sleep...and sorry for my ranting. I tend to do that when I like a story a lot, I just like to get my point across:P Also it's 3:12 in the morning...yeah.
Summary: Great chapter, fantastic story, update quickly...yeah.
:D Report Review
Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
Gah, I'm at a dilemma here, please help me?:P
So I am currently gawking over Al and Ariadne on this story, who I think are really cute together and she should just kiss him in that little inclosed space...gahh.
Then you've got Artemis and James, who I've been in love with since the middle of July, when I read the story. I specifically remember this because I was on vacation and I refused to leave my computer because I couldn't get away from the computer xP Also, that mistletoe moment? I give you props on that, I LOVE that scene :D
Next we've got Al and Adele, who are practically not there right now, but half of Al and half of Adele are part of Blake, who is the cutest kid EVER, might I add. So, I hope that she sees Al next chapter.yeah.
Then for the Speaking In Rainbow, it's James and Aurora. I love that story because it's one of the most creative stories I've read, and I hope that your writer's block doesn't stay for long on that one:/ I like it:D
So many amazing stories, I just don't which one I want to have the next chapter come out for xD Gosh.
So, overall, I think you are an amazing writer and that you should keep on doing this, because you make me (along with how ever many other people read your story ((how many is that, if you don't mind me asking xP))) smile every time we read a new chapter. and yeah.
Sorry if this review is a bit weird, I've been up for about...29 hours straight? Random insomnia strikes me at the weirdest times xD
Thank you for writing, it makes me day when I see a new chapter:D
*Great chapter by the way, can't wait for the next one :D Report Review
Can't WAIT for the next chapter:DAuthor's Response: HAHA, me neither. Thanks for reviewing. (; Report Review
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