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66 Reviews Found

Review #1, by blackzeroDear Annabelle: Chapter 1

22nd May 2013:
refreshing plot. Update soon.

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Review #2, by blackzeroConfronting Temptation: Visits with Stolen Kisses

22nd May 2013:
Superb, but please Albus being Gay ? Please No

Author's Response: To be honest I could have gone anyway with Albus, I noticed when writing the chapter that if I made him gay it would kind of force him to see things in a different light which would open the door for him to get to know Scorpius instead of being judgemeantal. So after thinking about and rereading several chapters of Fighting Temptation I noticed that I never really went into Albus' love life at all so it wouldn't be completly random if he were to be gay, shocking and surprising yes, but not random. With that being said Albus isn't as big of a character in Confronting that he was in Fighting so you really arn't going to see that much of him. I will say that him coming out to his parents isn't a scene that I have planned on writing because that seems like something that he would do privately and then just mention it to Rose, but as with all of my reviews that may change just because sometimes I have ideas that I orignally had no desier to add in but I do.
Anyways the point that I am trying to make is that Albus being gay isn't a main plot line that I am going to add in or focus to much on. It is simply there as an acceptance factor that I might potentially be able to use as a doorway for the family to be more accepting of Scorpius. Once again hat may not happen because i have several ideas about the family and their reactions about Rose and Scorpius and how they may or may not accept it. But if I wanted to use the gay factor I now have the backstory that would allow me too.
I hope that that makes sense and that it helps you understand a little bit better, my biggest fear about this chapter was offending people and thats partially why it took me so long to write becaus eI kept going back and forth but eventually I had to make an excutive decision and hope people went with it. Thank you so much for reading and for the review glad that you liked the rest.


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Review #3, by blackzeroConfronting Temptation: First Encounters

17th February 2013:
Confronting has started with a bang , both chapter have been spot on, every single paragraph keeps you hooked on. Simply Splendid,

Author's Response: Thats good, I hope the third one will keep you just as hooked. Thank you so much for the review.

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Review #4, by blackzeroClash: Gold

2nd February 2013:
Two Chapters in single month...it's jackpot :D

Finally acceptance from Agatha

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Review #5, by blackzeroBang: Maybe he's different, but he's probably exactly the same.

30th November 2012:
This is one heck of a love triangle with six sides.

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Review #6, by blackzeroLove At Last Sight: Elephant in the Room

30th November 2012:
Oh James being jealous.the surface has been scratched...both still loved each other...nice plot

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Review #7, by blackzeroLove At Last Sight: Skinny Love

30th November 2012:
Excellent dramatization.

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Review #8, by blackzeroLove At Last Sight: Collide

30th November 2012:
I just started reading and found it really enjoyable.Bravo Keep up the good work

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Review #9, by blackzeroI'll love her enough for both of us: Too late to say sorry

12th October 2012:
Nice one,

Looking from Freya's father reaction, Louis is probably going to end up for time being alone with the baby

Nice chap, update soon

Author's Response: Maybe? :-D I would say but I don't want to spoil things :-p
Thanks for reading and your review! :-D I shall update as soon as I write the next chapter.


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Review #10, by blackzeroPrime Suspects: Truth Will Out

21st September 2012:
Superb,

But Harry's reaction to all this drama in the story is quite depressing, Head of Auror depart went down without a fight.

Update soon, soon and soon.

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Review #11, by blackzeroPrime Suspects: A Vile Man

21st September 2012:
Aha, truth coming out finally .

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Review #12, by blackzeroBlossoming: six

13th September 2012:
awesome again. superb

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #13, by blackzeroI'll love her enough for both of us: Life changing news

29th July 2012:
Just a prologue
Please update

Author's Response: Yep it's just a prologue at the moment, the next chapter is in the queue. Thanks for reading.

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Review #14, by blackzeroAmbiguity: Dead Ends

29th July 2012:
Ahh She sacrifice love for career and regrets it some where deep down

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Review #15, by blackzeroAmbiguity: The Girl with the Clenched Fists

29th July 2012:
A bad breakup...interesting and refreshing

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Review #16, by blackzeroAmbiguity: The Man in the Coat

29th July 2012:
Wow
Honestly there exist a sane writer who writes Teddy/Vic fic without getting Dom pregant.

Brilliant Plot. Superb.

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Review #17, by blackzeroKeeping Secrets: Enough

29th July 2012:
It's very rare to find a Charlie fic. The prologue hopes for a promising story. Update

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for the surprise review; it made my day!! :) I'm really glad you think this will make a promising story, and I certainly hope you're right! I'll update soon, and thanks again!

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Review #18, by blackzeroPrime Suspects: Day 43

24th July 2012:
Dude you rock in that suspense thing. Bloody brilliant

Author's Response: Haha thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it and that you're enjoying the suspense. It's pretty tough for me, but your reassurance is awesome! Thank you so much! :)

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Review #19, by blackzeroBeing Summer: The One where Summer Starts to Talk

24th July 2012:
Please make them say I love you too each other, Its freaking and frustrating me out. :D

Your are supreme commander in teasing cliff hangers

Author's Response: well, maybe they do love each other, maybe they don't...

and yes, i am. and very proud of it, my love. thank you!

ellie :) xx


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Review #20, by blackzeroBlossoming: four

24th July 2012:
:D Slut Name

This story is absolutely rocking

Author's Response: hehehe quite a few people agree with this, it must be a very popular name for nasty people :p
Thank you for reviewing :D


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Review #21, by blackzeroBlossoming: two

24th July 2012:
Brilliant, Original Humor

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D

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Review #22, by blackzeroBlossoming: one

24th July 2012:
Interesting and refreshing plot. Your best work :p

Author's Response: Thank you! This is probably my favourite out of all my stories right now :D
Thanks for reviewing :D


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Review #23, by blackzeroSilver Linings: Alexa: When Trusting your Instincts can be a Good Thing

28th June 2012:
Nice Story , Hope you update soon. The comic sequences are very good and natural .

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #24, by blackzeroBeing Summer: The Twenty-First One

25th June 2012:
Dear Dear you sure know how to tease your readers .

Author's Response: :O... i do no such thing! ish...

thank you! ellie :) xx


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Review #25, by blackzeroUnplanned: THE words

7th June 2012:
I just started reading it and found it to be enjoyable . How much of the story is left.?

Author's Response: thank you! I'm actually not too sure, I have the ending, and a few scenes in between, but I might get 20-25 chapters? Still very vague though, sorry :S
thnks for reviewing :D


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