I love little fluffy one shots like this. All those extra little moments that you can immagine happening, especially between the various couples.
Excelent writing. I enjoyed it immensly.Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I'm quite a sucker for one-shots. Thanks so much for the lovely review. :) Report Review
This was beautiful.
I could rabbit on about the imagry of the flowers, and how their pain and suffering, forshadow the pain and suffering felt by Victoire at the end. But I'd end up comming across as a pretentious pratt, so I'l lstick to my first sentiment.
Wow.Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much. I'm absolutely flattered, and you've made me laugh. :) Thank you so much for your absolutely lovely review. Report Review
Wow, an interesting concept, and pretty well written too.
Um, condensing. Should that be condescending?
I can't picture snape saying "Half ***". Actually I think Prof Snapes first sentence is off, but I couldn't give you a better one lol
Bring on the Estrogen lolAuthor's Response: Thank you. :D
Um... I dunno what you mean?
Condensing= to shorten
Condescending= to put down
Well, in my head... I'm too lazy to check if I'm right... I may be wrong...
Ahahahaha, well... um. uh I'll go over it. :P
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You know, for your longest chapter, it felt like it finished too soon.
Though I am confused about times and such over the entire story. Something for you to look at perhaps.
Great work.Author's Response: It was very tempting to just keep on writing, but I had to stop- I plotted the rest of it into the following chapter =]
About the timing, I know, I even confused myself at one part- it seems more than a week [please, I thought a month had passed and I'm the one writing it! =)] but I have stated in all chapters how long has past since the last one in both days and times. It just the time is very little for a whole 12 chapters to happen in...but I sat for ages going through each chapter with the days and times and slotting them into a calender, just so I can keep up with it myself. =p
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