You should slow it down a bit. It sounds a little rushed. But overall, it had a good plot. I like it.Author's Response: okay thanks for the idea I will slow down in the next chapter sliverstarz well im glad you liked the plot and the story thanks bye ~Emma~ Report Review
I am literally bouncing with impatience! Why can't the the validation go faster?? I really like your story. I have read other stories with Jasper and Hermione but yours is the first one I've read. It's gotten me addicted.Author's Response: Haha, that's what I keep saying!!! ;D Thank you sooo much, silverstarz! Hopefully 7 will be up sooner than later! Report Review
I like it a lot. I hope you update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks a lot I'll try xoxo pure angel Report Review
I hope you update really soon. Watch out for those tiny spelling mistakes.Author's Response: thank you for the review silverstarz I have the third chapter waiting to be valadated soon so i will look out for the tiny spelling mistakes. bye ~Emma~ Report Review
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