Yup, I officially love this story too. It's rather refreshing and unique. And I'd like to see a little more Louis/Lorcan going on, if ya catch mah drift.. ;PAuthor's Response: You've given me the best compliment there is. I've seen a lot of Scorpius/Rose stories and I wanted to do something different.
The fact that you say refreshing is really flattering. Report Review
Muahahaha! I loved the Severusness! He's probably one of my favourite characters, and I love how Amelia always has the best come-backs.Author's Response: Thanks!!! I really try to do him justice :) Report Review
RAR! You have no idea how much I honestly love this story. It has the right amount of plot and subtleness. And it isn't pure romance jazz, like "She fell into their world. She saw him. They had passionate s*x on the common room floor. The End". I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! I honestly squealed a couple times thinking about it. And you really make it easy to relate with the character. But to not change how the future will turn out... That must be painful for her. EEP! I can't wait for the next update.Author's Response: And you have no idea how much your review cheered me up. I love reviews that give me insight like your did. It helps me decided where I should concentrate. Thanks! :D Report Review
No way, I had a creepy Dan once. :O
Liking this so far...Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm really glad that you're liking this story. I hope that the rest lives up to your expectations. I hope that creepy Dan has left you alone... :D Report Review
I love chanced-upon stories that are interesting!
You're able to characterize Adele and the others pretty well, that might be why I liked it so much.
UPDATE! Report Review
The sad thing is that I actually know someone like Megan. You never people like that exist, but they do, they do... AH! Update it soon, it's interesting! ;P
If there were a scene where Harry had a gay moment, I would idolize you forever. Report Review
This is a really unique idea. The fact that Dumbledore and Snape are alive is confusing, but I don't think it really matters that much. Please update soon :) Report Review
You needa update soon. This one has caught my interest. That, and I love French.Author's Response: I apologize for the tardiness. As for now, I'm putting this story on hold since I'm trying to re-write and to write more before posting, so yeah. But hopefully I can update something ASAP.
Thanks for the review :D Report Review
Oem my gosh.
What if Rose got pregnant with Scorpius again while he was still married?!?!?! Imagine all the awkward questions!! Haha, I'm reading The Scarlet Letter in English right now and I thought of this. See!! Your story is so popular that people think of it! Sorry for posting another [spastic] review, but this one is more constructive. I don't think it would please Daisy nor Jenny very much if she did get pregnant again, this was just a random impossible idea, but for some reason I'm really into stories that involve children born out of wedlock, I do it all the time in The Sims 3.
Anyway, keep getting inspired and feeding your hungry fanchildren!
~Grimmjow Report Review
This isn't really constructive at all, but I can't just not say anything anymore, you are hilarious. PLEASE keep writing. Report Review
This is a unique idea, please keep writing! ^^,Author's Response: Thankyou :)
The next chapter's in validation.
Thanks for the review,
Jess Xx Report Review
Sorry, I'm not really sure exactly what I'm *supposed* to write in a review. I'd just like to say that you (meaning Bella Portia) are doing a really great job. Snape's one of my favourite characters, and I was a little sad that Rowling didn't have more stuff about Snape in the books :*C. And thank you so much for having good grammer/spelling. It makes a story so much better. You're keeping the story very accurate as well... So basically excellent work.Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review. Reading words like yours truly make my day.
Snape is (obviously) one of my favorite characters. It is a challenge to attempt to fill in between the lines, so to speak.
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