Reading Reviews From Member: Writingisright
  
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Review #1, by WritingisrightGood Books: Good Books

2nd August 2009:
This was soo cute! I love this line = “Or else Lily’s never going to date me!” finished James, looking as though he had just figured out the mystery of the Bermuda Triangle.

it makes me laugh each time I read it :P

great writing :D

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciated it :)

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Review #2, by WritingisrightThe Missing Marauder: A New Year

2nd August 2009:
“She tried to flush my head down a toilet.” Lol Lily is amazing...I would have never expected something like that from her.

Author's Response: Haha, well she is a red head. =)

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Review #3, by WritingisrightThe Missing Marauder: The Very Beginning

2nd August 2009:
I was right got it just somehow got better :D I love how they first met and how sirius treated Lily. and how Lily treated them. It was hilarous XD

Author's Response: Thanks, they are a funny bunch.

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Review #4, by WritingisrightThe Missing Marauder: Unlocking Secrets

2nd August 2009:
I like this and am very anxious to continue reading... I also have a funny that it's just going to get better and better. (I'm adding this to my favorites..)

Author's Response: Well thank you. I'll try and read your's when I have some spare time.

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Review #5, by WritingisrightHarry Potter and the Overdone Plotline: Introductions and a Healthy Dose of Funfetti

31st July 2009:
Best. parody. ever.

don't take this the wrong way but I love you. This is hilarious and even although i am probably guilty of at least one of these things I think you do an excellent job of making fun of everything. bravo :D

Author's Response: I used so many of these cliches in my middle school writing days it's not even funny. I read back through no almost six years later and go "Shit.. what was I thinking??". But it was enjoyable enough at the time.

Thank you so much for reviewing!


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Review #6, by WritingisrightLooking for Jazz: What He Found

30th July 2009:
If anything I would work on your consistency. You have some really great parts with fantastic imagery and somewhat philosophical ideas but than there are parts where it can be a tad dry and not poorly written but not that great either. However I do love your story and your writing so if you would continue I would be extremely happy. BTW I am also adding this to my favorites so i can continue reading once you post another chapter :)

Author's Response: You're amazing. I've decided this. And you're even more amazing in light of the fact that you can constructively criticize! Thank you for saying good and bad so that I can try to make this better.
-Impossibilities


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Review #7, by WritingisrightLooking for Jazz: What She Saw

30th July 2009:
I really enjoyed the opening sequence of this with the fire and the angel and heaven and hell it all tied in beautifully. The imagery is fantastic and I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for leaving a review!
-Impossibilities


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