Very Intresting way of writing. Keep it up.
Very Nice work. :)Author's Response: why thank you very very much :) i will keep it up...at least im trying know lol.
-Cassie Report Review
What a good chapter! I like how you back tracked the story. Thumbs up to you. :)Author's Response: i didn't really no how to start the story, but I did like how she was looking back on all the things leading up to where my plot began; the things that caused it, etc.Thanks for the support Report Review
Great first chapter. Written in good taste. :)Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
That was great. Good first chapter :) Report Review
That was great. I love that song.Author's Response: Right on!! Report Review
Wow, that was Odd. :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, assuming you like odd things. :) Report Review
That was Great. Keep up the good work. :)Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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