Wowe. Wonderful, again. Really captivating and eerie and brilliantly written - lovely vocabulary and such.
Oh yeah, remember me? You from another dimension or something like that. I was thinking of the tenth Weasley after Ginny, but now there's a whole load of next gen.'s, so it isn't as understandable.
My mindless rabble aside, this was great, 10/10. :)Author's Response: Thanks so much -- this is definitely one of my favorite stories I've ever written. I love psychological mind-twisters and dystopias and all that sort of thing, and I always thought Harry might have been just a smidge messed up, no?
Your name always makes me laugh! So similar. :D I was thinking of that sort of tenth Weasley as well, and totally forgot about Fleur in the process... Whoops.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review! ♥ Report Review
Liked it. This is a refreshing story, with well written chapters and interesting characters and entertaining dialogue. Like it.Author's Response: Hello,
Thanks (: I hope to continue writing in the same fashion.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-Tasha Report Review
This was wonderfully written. I can't even put into words how heartfelt and moving it was.
Brilliant job.Author's Response: Thank you for such a sweet review. So glad you liked it :) Report Review
This is really sweet and was very enjoyable to read. You've got Harry pretty much on-point, which I was totally relieved to see, because quite a lot of writers tweak him a little.
You should be pleased with how it has turned out; it was lovely.
10/10 :)Author's Response: Your name caused me a bit of a spasm. Hello! I don't believe we've met, but I'm experiencing all sorts of Twilight Zone sensations at the moment. :D Are you sure you're not me in another dimension, then?
Anywho. Thanks so much for reading the story! And I greatly appreciate your comment on Harry's character -- JK knows him so well, writing him is a bit intimidating, and the fact that someone thinks I've got it means a lot. Report Review
This is absolutely amazing. Everything was beautiful and captivating and intriguing and melancholy and just... wow.Author's Response: Thanks so much! It took quite a while to write but I'm glad it was worth it. Report Review
So even though it was a little jumpy and choppy at bits, I really enjoyed the dialogue and the dynamics of the relationships of the people in your story.
Why's Dominique there? Just curious.
I liked it, so I'll be back to see how James gets on :)Author's Response: Yeah, I see what you mean.
Next chapter will tell all to do with Dominique.
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"Le"? Do you work for tumblr? :O
Anyway, I loved this chapter too, and even though I haven't known her for long, I'm sad Patch has lost her Patch, it was quite cool to have a realistic reason for her nickname. I love nicknames.
Okay, I'm talking a load of rubbish.
I like the dialogue between Patch, Arisa and Louis, and the way you write Patch's thoughts is entertaining and not boring, which is good, obviously.
10/10! :)Author's Response: I don't even have a tumblr account, I'm afraid of the procrastination that tumblr is famous for. :)
I love nicknames too, this story was going to be full of weird nicknames like shoe and cash, but then I stopped myself.
Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying it. :) xx
Dun, dun, dun
The return. Of. THETENTHWEASLEY (aka, Josie).
You mad? :D
Anyway, I am - as you know - very excited to see the return of this story, and I'm really happy about the first chapter. I'm glad you didn't just make Lily say yes because that would be very boring, and you aren't a boring writer, which is good. I loved James's resolution at the end, and I like his perspective.
"I'm going to relentlessly propose to her until she gives in. It worked the first time I did it, right?" That was one of my favourite bits.
10/10 for the first chapter, and I'll be back. Obviously.Author's Response: I love you. I hope you realize this, because it's true :)
I'm glad you don't think I'm a boring writer! Sometimes I feel I get a little boring haha :P
Thank you so muchh!! Report Review
Oooh, Roxanne. That was rather nasty, and I love it. I love how horrible they're being to her, adds drama, you know.
I thought Noah-boy was up to something with her? I don't trust him.
I liked this chapter, despite how nasty it was. Nasty as in nasty to poor Afro.
And I would never abandon you :)
10/10 xAuthor's Response: FINALLY! THANK YOU! So happy that someone likes the drama and realizes that the story needs it! (: AND NOAH IS A BUTT HEAD. Report Review
I do very much like it, and it was really interesting and entertaining for your first chapter, which is definitely good. I'll be making sure to read the next chapter :)
10/10Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! Your review's are always lovely. I hope that you like the rest! :D Report Review
I quite like Minnaloushe. I love this kind of first chapter, it's so intriguing and I'm definitely excited for the next chapter.
Lovely description and imagery, by the way.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks. More will happen int he next chapter, this was really jsut a nothingness - sort of an introduction to Mini, I guess. I'm experimenting with being more descriptive, so I'm glad you picked up on it XD Report Review
Oh wow, I really liked this chapter. Especially the end, which was a really funny and light-hearted way to finish it; which I like, because it made it easier to accept that there won't be any more.
I absolutely adore this story and I've definitely enjoyed and loved reading it, so thank you so much for writing it.
10/10.Author's Response: thanks hun! i usually don't go for the happy ending, but this fic called for it, you know? glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for reading! Report Review
Oh woah, hold the train - what? Jeez, James, didn't see that coming.
Anyway, last chapter? I don't really know what to say to that, so I'll just not say anything.
Bits I liked:
-“Meriwether Buttlicker.” (that whole little scene)
-What’s your guys’ not problem?”
-“—as he goes up to put—and here’s the punchline—” (possibly a reference to the Japanese Golfer joke? Actually, I KNOW it's a reference to it, so yeah. I bet everyone's said that already - OH WAIT, THEY HAVEN'T, BECAUSE I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER MWAHAHA)
-the whole end last bit was really sweet and cliff-hangery and omg so excited for the next one!
Thank you very much for writing this; much love for you.
10/10.Author's Response: HAHAHA of course its a reference to that joke! I've just always pictured that being the ONE joke Vernon knows. Nothing else. At all. Because he's lame :)
Thanks for this awesome review, it really made me happy! Much love to YOU! Report Review
Aww, I'm smiling like an idiot.
Real happy for Charisma and James, and Freddy and Dixie obviously. I'm actually pretty glad you split up Ellie and Kyle, not because I didn't like them both together or anything, but I think it's more realistic and less cliché if they were all paired up. I like this Ellie/Nicholas thing though ;)
I love how Charisma's a teacher, and the jobs the twins ended up with, and the part with the picket fence.
I'm going to miss this. I'll miss Gabe and Freddy and Dixie and everyone :(
Thanks so much for writing this, really. I've loved reading absolutely every chapter.
10/10.Author's Response: Idiot smiling is the best.
Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you have enjoyed this story!
I totally agree with the Ellie and Kyle coupling. Even when I had written them together in Wolfsbane, I knew that they would have to be split up eventually.
I'm glad that you're liking the Ellie/Nikki thing though, that was an impromptu thing from my brain that actually worked out (for once :P).
Thank you again, especially for every single review that you have left me, they're always lovely and encouraging. Report Review
YAY YAY YAY.
Looovely chapter. Really intense and neughk and everything. I'm smiling like a complete creep right now because I'm pretty happy with the way you're writing all of this. The tension between Al and Adele is really fun to read and I love how you make us think something is going to happen but it really isn't.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Really.
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Ugh, I'm a little annoyed at James for beating up my Gabeykins (I swear I'll never say that again), but whatever, I suppose it needed to happen. I like Gabe.
Freddy isn't that bad either. He's improved. I'm glad he didn't try to apologize, because that would probably make it worse.
Anyway, last chapter?! :(
Don't know if I'm happy or sad.
10/10 as usual x.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! You have every right to be annoyed at James, he's a silly moo!
It's all good. But it did make me laugh. Gabeykins is sweet :L
I'm glad that you noticed that he didn't apologize. They're both stubborn enough to think that neither of them had to.
It's alright to be both. I'm both, happy and sad. Thank you again! I hope that the last chapter lives up to your expectations.
WOW SO MUCH AWESOMENESS GOING ON IN THIS CHAPTER I AM OVERWHELMED.
Jeez, that was very fun to read.
What a to-do to comment on.
Uh - I love the Zelda/Jag Rose is commenting on, I rather like Jag's mother (how is she so young, I think there's something off about that, what are you up to? (;), the "I'm half-cat" or whatever it was mention thing, Rose and Scorpius and I quite like Astoria in this too, Al's shrunken head, Xander's general hyper energy and just everything was great to read.
Can't wait for next chapter! 10/10 :)Author's Response: YAY, AWESOME REVIEW!
Yep, Jag's mum IS unnaturally young.and there's more to it, definitely ;) No can tell, tho! I'm glad you like Astoria and Al's random shrunken head!
Thanks so much! I'll update in...um...as fast as possible ;) Report Review
CAN'T. WRITE. COHERENT. SENTENCES.
I mean really, this chapter was just - ugh - so perfect. Seriously, I can't, this is crazy. Just lovely, lovely, lovely; Dixie's changes, Gabe being Gabe, and obviously the last part ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter, even if it does mean closer to end :(
10/10 xAuthor's Response: Coherent. sentences. are. overrated.
this. way. is. much. more. fun.
Thank you for such a lovely review! I hope that you like the rest of the story!
And yeshem, finally Dixie has got her flair back, yet calming down a little in the process. Report Review
Yay, update! :D
I love reading this story, it's very... fun to read, you know? Anyway I feel like I can relate with stuff that's going on, which is very good obviously.
I can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10 :) Report Review
I'm pretty glad you're not rushing anything, usually that would make things boring but with your ace writing skills and humour and interesting characters I don't mind at all.
This is seriously so fun and entertaining to read. I absolutely love it.
10/10 :) Report Review
Yay, first review! Jeez, I'm so childish.
Anyway, I really loved the ending, it was really sweet and light and cute. So yeah. And I love how Scorpius is getting a sibling, that was a nice touch.
SEQUEL, YUS. Can't wait.
Thanks for writing this, 10/10 :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I figured the only way for this to go on and fit into the existing storyline was to throw another baby into the mix somehow...and there you go! Report Review
That was so cute.
Really, lovely ending, brilliant of you to tie up the loose ends.
And I don't know whether to be sad or happy for you that that's another story I can stop checking up on for updates.
Anyway, I'm so glad you wrote this, and it's been a pleasure reading.
10/10Author's Response: thanks so much! glad you liked it!
and i will be writing a oneshot for them soon!
i really appreciate it! Report Review
GUESS WHO IT IS?
Okay that was kind of psycho-ish. I think I'll leave that up to Elizabeth ;)
Kidding, I really like her energy and "spunk", as you put it. I don't find her annoying, but that might be because I'm so used to annoying people on a whole other level that her tiny annoyingness doesn't bother me. Yeah, I know annoyingness isn't a word.
Anyway, I do like Al, I think you've found a good balance between Harry and Ginny and some other Potter/Weasley family members. Even though he only had a couple of lines, I loved James too. Rose is really funny and I loved how she was going to fight Elizabeth at the beginning on the train; that whole scene was really funny.
And the ending was hilarious too.
10/10, obviously. And favourited :) xAuthor's Response: I wouldn't even have noticed how psycho-ish that was had you not of pointed it out...and the fact that you did point it out only made me highly amused. You're funny :)
I'm really glad you liked this, and to have such an awesome reviewer like you is really appreciated! Thanks so much! Report Review
I was really scared that he was going to die, or that he would be demented or something after his accident. I know Aidan was horrible with the leaving them all thing, but I really didn't like what Bennett said to him, it kind of upset, but then it was necessary for her to say.
I have a seriously bad feeling that his injury might come back to him. Aaagh, that's probably just my obtuse liking for drama talking.
Anyway, LOVED this chapter. 10/10 x Report Review
I didn't even mind that it was late, because I absolutely LOVED this chapter.
Aidan's mind is so happy and carefree and it makes me smile. I really adore him. Loved his POV, I hope you do it some more.
And James was seriously starting to annoy me, and I'm glad it was Laura who managed to sort him out; I quite like her actually, I'm probably the only one who does, but whatever.
Anyway, 10/10 for a brilliant chapter. Report Review
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