{reviewid: 2338250, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
25th April 2010:
Really great story! I know you described it as fluff but it had a bit of back story on his case which made it all the more enjoyable. Just another day in the life of HP to fill in those 19 years! Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! My first fic ever, so I have been a little nervous. I'm glad you liked it! :)
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{reviewid: 2226330, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
28th September 2009:
Really great story! Looking forward to reading your other postings!
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{reviewid: 2222125, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
22nd September 2009:
Wow! I guess we all saw that one coming. Thanks for clearing up the blood magic & Horcrux issue with Harry. I originally thought that the pain in Harry scar was Voldemorts Horcrux and your story explains that the pain is a different side effect of the blood protection and the visions were the Horcrux.
I'm still not sure how to feel about the Laura/Harry thing. Anyone can tell that Ginny and Harry are made for each other but I think the separation and Ginny trying to find herself are just helping creating this situation. Not that he's completely off the hook! I'm sure he'll have to tell Ginny but I don't know how he'll be able to work with Laura not that this line has been crossed. Should be interesting! Great job!
Author's Response: potterprof,
Thanks for the review. I'm sure there are different takes for which of Harry's symptoms came from which magical source. I wanted to clarify my interpretation of the magic to set the stage for the next phase of the story.
Harry probably will find it a challenge to work with Laura. But then again, they both have a common goal so perhaps that will help them put any personal feelings aside.
Until next time.
Mrs_Granger
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{reviewid: 2217877, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
16th September 2009:
Wow! I just have to say that this is one of the best fics that I've read. Really powerful scenes mixed with very happy times. I can't wait to see how you wrap it up. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the ending as much.
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{reviewid: 2216366, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
13th September 2009:
Great story! I like how it covered a large time span but didn't feel rushed. I could have used some more conflict with Harry dealing with the DE's but the wedding and honeymoon plots were worth it. I look forward to some other stories!
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{reviewid: 2214613, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
11th September 2009:
Great story! It was nice to see Harry play some Quiditch again and the auror plot was written very well.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2214399, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
10th September 2009:
Really great story! I actually cared about Draco's feelings in this one.something that never happens. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2213964, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
9th September 2009:
Wow! Really great story. I totally loved the interaction between Ron & Hermione and Erin. I would have loved to read a little about her hogwarts experience but I'll just have to leave it to my imagination. Thanks
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{reviewid: 2213961, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
9th September 2009:
I have to say that I was very wary about reading this "crossover" but I really enjoyed it and made for a very plausible story. I guess my only criticism would be that I think Ginny would have really railed on Harry for leaving for that long without at least telling her goodbye and she seemed a little too forgiving in the end. I did love the hagrid scene at the end. All in all it was a really good story and I enjoyed it! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for giving the story a chance despite the crossover and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree that Ginny seemed to go a little easy on Harry, but considering that she was also relieved to see him and they were at a wedding, I think she was saving it for later. Thanks for the criticism, and I agree I could have conveyed that better.
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{reviewid: 2210974, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
5th September 2009:
Really great story. I thought it was a nice family moment! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I completely loved writing this story.
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{reviewid: 2210489, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
4th September 2009:
I truly loved this story! I'm sad that Dudley died but the idea of Harry taking in an orphan and making sure that Denly had a completely different life than he did is great! I look forward to next installment. I too am curious what house Denly would be sorted into.
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{reviewid: 2208065, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
31st August 2009:
Really great story! I look forward to the last chapter and the next story. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you.
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{reviewid: 2204165, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
26th August 2009:
Really cute story! I wish there was some more Remus/Tonks stories. Keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you! cheers for reviewing;P
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{reviewid: 2202512, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
24th August 2009:
It's great to see that you were able to get another update before the down time. I like the interaction between Harry and Dudley but I'm starting to get a bad feeling that Laura's not getting out of this thing alive if she is a Horcrux since she doesn't have the blood protection that Voldemort took from Harry to keep him grounded when he allowed himself to be killed. I'll just have to see how it plays out. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: potterprof,
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the interaction between Harry and Dudley. It was interesting to me to read you take on the situation with Laura. There was a bit of blood transfer between her and her attacker at the time she got her scar. Keep that in mind as you read.
I hope you enjoy it.
Mrs_Granger
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{reviewid: 2202491, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
23rd August 2009:
Great Novel! I loved reading the saga through Ginny's view. I'll definitely check out the stories that you used for inspiration.
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{reviewid: 2201592, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
23rd August 2009:
That was a really great story! I really like how you take your time explaining some of the finer details. Great job!
Author's Response: Many thanks potterprof, I appreciate that.
tgfoy
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{reviewid: 2200375, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
21st August 2009:
Really loving this story! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Many thanks Potterprof, once the kids are back at school and real life stops intruding a bit I shall be able to get back to writing this. I will update as soon as I can.
tgfoy
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{reviewid: 2193736, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
14th August 2009:
Really great story. I'm sure anyone who's been on vacation with kids can relate to this story. It was fun to see how the HP world handles these fun times. Look forward to your next story.
Author's Response: :D Thank you! The Harry world deserved some fun I thought, so I wrote this story!
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{reviewid: 2192828, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
14th August 2009:
Great Chapter! Even though it's not a true sequel, it expands your first story so much. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, this story is a lot of fun to write. For the record I am working on a true sequel. It has been giving me fits in places but I think I had a brainstorm last night on an airplane that may just get it sorted out.
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{reviewid: 2191994, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
13th August 2009:
This was an incredible story! I'm sorry its over. I hope you will continue to write some more. Thanks for your talent and creativity!
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{reviewid: 2191486, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
12th August 2009:
Cute story:) I can just picture Molly in that store..LOL
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{reviewid: 2186708, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
8th August 2009:
This was a really great story. I hope there will be another addition to the next generation. Thanks.
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{reviewid: 2186643, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
8th August 2009:
awesome chapter!!! I'm totally loving this time travel plot. It's a shame that JKR didn't touch more on it after Prisoner of Azkaban. Great job!
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{reviewid: 2185791, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
7th August 2009:
This looks like it's going to be a great story! Thanks for adding to your collection.
Author's Response: I'm almost ready - just refining - the next chapter in the story. I'm hoping it lives up to all my readers' expectations.
I'm glad you're enjoying this one too.
-N.E.P.
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{reviewid: 2185786, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
7th August 2009:
I really loved this story and "Shattered Pieces". Can't wait to check out the next installment! Good luck on your book!
Author's Response: Thanks for the well wishes. If only my book flowed as slowly as my HP stories do.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed both of these pieces. I really had an excellent time writing them.
Thanks so much for taking the time to stop and leave a review!
-N.E.P.
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