HNGGG OH MY GOD. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS (in the best way possible). please write more ay-sap or i might just have a heart attack. 10/10!Author's Response: Hahah, yes, but I LOVE THEM :)
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SO GOOD! 10/10, I really love Reagan. There are a lot of sweary tomboys out there, but this one is so unique :) Please, please, PLEASE write more!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you think she's different from the rest. That's what I was going for! ;) Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAH othifizz. im going to start talking like that to annoy my friends from now on.
i loved this! and james is especially pratty in this one, i hope his ego deflates a little soon. i really like how i can see his personality go up and down.
and i TOTALLY did not expect ryan to be gay!!! but i like it, i think it'll come back up in the story later.
this is great! 10/10!Author's Response: Well, to be honest, I think that BOTH James and Agatha need to deflate their head a little and get over themselves... But that's just my very odd, very strange opinion.
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HOW. FREAKING. ADORABLEEE. teddy+victoire=ANVIL LOVE. please keep writing...10/10Author's Response: lol yay you liked it! i hoped you would =) Report Review
this is actually really good! although i think you have some facts wrong...barty crouch jr. didn't SHRINK moody, he had a magically enlarged trunk (like hermione's beaded bag) that would be able to fit his full-size body and more. i imagine it must have been about the size of a very small prison cell. also, i don't think voldemort would have directly asked barty to help him...a) barty would have been willing enough in the first place and b) voldemort does not rely on others...he uses them as pawns and then throws them away. instead of "you're the only one that can help me," i imagine voldemort would have said something like "do this, bartemius, and i will reward you," ONLY if barty would have been unwilling, and which i am quite positive he wasn't.
alright, sorry for this lengthy review, this story was pretty good! 8/10 (for the incorrect information)Author's Response: haha! Thanks!!
Well, that's all a matter of opinion. I don't think it ever really says HOW he was CAPTURED. You see later that Moody returns to normal size while he's down in his trunk prison. I imagined if Barty had tried the potion while Moody was still tiny, that would have made Barty a tiny-Moody-copy and Barty didn't really want to be a tiny-Moody-copy...so he waited until the shrinking spell wore off and Moody was back to normal size to yank out the Moody hairs.
And we just see Voldy a different way. He's a sociopath but he's smart. He knows he's just a creature probably attached to the back of a rat at the time. He needs Wormtail to run errands (like bring Barty in) and feed him snake venom. And while Barty probably would have been more than willing if Voldy had just asked...Voldy's a sly little thing. He didn't get Horcrux information out of Slughorn by intimidation or promise of reward. He makes you feel special and that you are a valuable commodity, and in that you will work that much harder to please him. Bellatrix was praised by Voldy (not that he thought she was worth toe cheese) and she was insanely loyal to him to the very end. Lucius Malfoy did it for the rewards, not the love, and you see what happened to him. He eventually turned on Voldy. Barty did it for the pure love of a master that made him feel needed...he couldn't have cared less about rewards. Everybody wants to feel needed...Barty just took a few too many steps down Insanity Ave. And given the two choices (Peter or Barty) I'd say Voldy felt Barty really was the only one who could pull off such a stunt.
Anyway, thanks very much for the review :) Lengthy reviews are my favourites! Sorry about the lengthy response. I just wanted to defend a few points on why I did what I did. Report Review
so cute! i agree, teddy lupin had to have been the cutest.kid.ever. hahah. vic is also really cute and innocent :) please keep writing!! 10/10...cant wait to see what they're like when she's 13Author's Response: lol i want a kid like vic when i grow up. and ill spend all my time dressing her up in pretty clothes! lol ill write the next one as soon as i get an idea! xxx Report Review
YES! finallyfinallyfinally! i love how wood is literally, chasing ava around the room. bahahahaha. i'm laughing out loud which is not a good idea 'cause i'm writing this on my phone, in the middle of the night, with the parents in the room next to me. ops.
but seriously, love this! *cute face* write a sequel? PLEASE? from oliver's POV would be really cool.
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OH CLIFFHANGER! i likey.
bellatrix is PERFECT, she's a tad less cruel in her teen years, but i like that about her - like she was MADE to be cruel. it makes me like her even more :D rodolphus is cute too, not as evil as i expected.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not very well-versed in writing cliffhanger endings, so it's good to hear that it worked out.
Aw, thank you! The amazing feedback I've been getting for Bellatrix (and Rodolphus, too) is tremendous, I can't even begin to explain how nice it is to hear! So thank you!
The next chapter is 85% plotted out in my head, I just have to get that last bit down and get writing!
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awww :) i know this is just a tutorial, but it's really really really cute. Report Review
aw! i loved this. albus is really really really cute, and so is daphne! 10/10Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that you liked it. Those two really are adorable, I agree. Thank you for the lovely review! :) Report Review
whoaaa. intense. but it's very creative, and i like the idea of "severing" the dark mark!Author's Response: Thank you! Yes this story was born of the slightly more disturbed section of my mind... but I'm pleased you thought it was creative! :) Report Review
i like this! but there are a few spelling errors and it's michael corner, not michel. but i really like this overprotective ron, it sounds like him, and i really hope hermione doesn't end their relationship!Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the way I portrayed Ron. Thanks for reviewing!
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and james potter is introduced! :D
please keep writing. can't wait to see what they're like when they get older.
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update son!
also, is teddy 2 years older than vic?Author's Response: lol i had to bring james into it somehow, coz he's just so fun =)
and yeah, he is supposed to be about 2 years older.
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this is sooo cute!!! i love the tone of the story. i adoree teddy and his "ever-present grin." keep writing!!!Author's Response: oh thankyou! i think teddy would be the cutest kid ever =) Report Review
aw, poor andy.at least she's better now. i dont get why the slytherins were chasing them.i'm 50% sure i either missed something or 50% sure it'll be explained in the next chapter. 10/10! this is one of my favorite stories!!!Author's Response: haha, don't worry, it WILL be explained in the next chapter, so no, you didn't miss anything! Actually, I'm kinda glad you were a bit confused as to that...it was an effect I was going for (kind of like to be in Andy's shoes...cuz she doesn't know why slytherins are chasing them either!)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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wow, i just read this whole story in like 20 minutes, i LOVE it! please update really, really soon! :)))
p.s. i followed your advice and got a bannerrr! thank you so much. xoxo.
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ha yay! a new chapter ;)
awww teddy+vic=soo cute. i lovelovelove it.
10/10! going to go read your new story now :DAuthor's Response: YAY!! read it! and tell me what you think!!
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1) Lysander? I think HE's the one who likes Dom, not Lorcan, he's just using him as a cover story! But I don't really think he's the Guru anymore, no.
2) see above
3) Meh...I don't know. It's probably another student.
4) He's like all intense and sexy and stuff, but I think if you tried to shag him he'd bite your head off. Heh.
5) No, I liked it! I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHO THE VAMPIRE IS! Maybe Sanguini, the vampire that that reporter brought to Slughorn's Christmas party? idk, just a guess. But loved it! 10/10!Author's Response: HOTHOTHOTHOTHOT!!!
You're really onto something. Seriously closer than any other reviewer has gotten so far. But I won't specify on what. ; )
Seriously though, awesome deductive/guessing skills. : D
Ha, thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon! Crazy busy at the moment. College aps and whatnot . . . : /
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YAY THEY KISSED!!! YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY
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OH MY GOD. AVA, OLIVER, SNOG EACH OTHER ALREADY. Love this! 10/10Author's Response: Haha, I agree. I'll see what I can do. Glad you like it and thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
love! ava NEEDS to get together with wood.SOON! 10Author's Response: i reckon. how can she resist wood? thanks for reviewing! =] Report Review
OH MY GODDD! Yes, Aggy, get together with Ryan and make James jealous!
And ha, Twilight can suck it. Harry Potter all the way, man.
10Author's Response: Yes Yes YES! Harry Potter people unite!
And I'm not sure about James getting jealous, but there's definitely going to be some interesting results to all of this... Report Review
yes, i love it! keep writing! briar is my favorite..10/10Author's Response: Heheh.. I'm very glad you like Briar. XD She's one of my favorite characters, too, and I plan to toss in an interesting subplot for her. I find her fascinating. *is clearly very emotionally attached to her characters*
... Yes, I'm a total dork. :P But haha, thank you for reviewing! Report Review
OHHH MA GOD
1. haha i loved it! was amazing
2. it wasnt the fiasco i thought it would be, and TEDDY IS JEALOUS TEDDY IS JEALOUS :)
3. i loved this one, esp the letters part.ooo how mysterious why would teddy be writing letters to vic? *wink*
10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I'm glad you liked it! : D
I figured since everybody was expecting the club to be a COMPLETE disaster, I'd shake things up and make it only a minor disaster. : )
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OMG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SOOO LONG!!! And, perfect...Frankenstein/Stud Muffin/Frizz can frame all the pranks on the Claw and then SHE WILL BE DESTROYED!!! MWAHAHAHA!
Frankenstein is really rubbing off on me, I'm sorry.
I feel bad for the Giddy One, but I'm glad Frizz isn't guilty anymore :) that woulda ruined the fun.
10/10! Please update ay-sap!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm sorry for making you wait! The next chapter will be up much sooner than this was, for sure! Ahhh, how convenient, yes! Oh, dear... Frankenstein is rubbing off on you? What have I done? I've created a monster! Muahahaha! Oh, whoops... not good. ;) Thanks again for the review! Next chapter should have LOTS of action. Report Review
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