I must say, you are very good at this.
-SRAuthor's Response: Thanks a lot! Report Review
This is the second time you have left me speechless at the end of a chapter! My mind is simply blown.
-SRAuthor's Response: :DD thanks a lot Report Review
I must say, you do excel at cliff hangers. Makes me want to keep on reading. Good work :)
-SRAuthor's Response: haha thanks! Report Review
Great story. Love the clif hanger at the end of this chapter. Good touch.Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm really looking forward to read it.
-SRAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working really hard to getting the next chapter out. Report Review
I love how this has turned out so far. Honestly I think this is the best depiction of how the 19 years would go. Great job!
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Thank you! Everytime I read a post-hogwarts story whenever Ron and Harry fight Ron starts yelling and Harry just takes it. I always imagine Harry yelling at Ron and telling him exactly what you wrote. Great job, absolutely brilliant!
-SRAuthor's Response: of course.harry had to find some way to shut ron up! :D Report Review
That was hilarious! I applaud you sir, I haven't laughed that hard in a while. I give it two thumbs up.
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I don't think it was too mushy, personal opinion. I think it was great and sad. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I hope it comes out quickly.
-SRAuthor's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you so much for all your reviews! They mean so much to me and are a MAJOR confidence booster. I'll get the next chapter up as soon as possible! Report Review
Short chapter, but still good. Good way to set up for the future and what Harry may be planning. Good chapter, can't wait to read the next!
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Hahahaha, that was unexpected to say the least. I feel bad for Cho right about now, I'm suprised she managed to get away. I love that twist at the end, and I must say I quite agree with you. I love Ginny's temper.
-SRAuthor's Response: I know, poor Cho. However, all I can say is- That's what you get for messing with Ginny's man;) Thanks for the review! I love your responses. Report Review
Great chapter once again! Love the romance going on between Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. You certainly do have a way with words. Keep up the wonderful writing.
-SRAuthor's Response: I love writing romance between these characters- JK Rowling set up the best couples to work with:) Report Review
That was awesome!! Great way to pick up from all the sadness of the previous chapter. Much better in length too. Absolutely love this chapter! ;)
-SRAuthor's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I am so glad you are enjoying it! I wish I could find a better word, but THANK YOU:) Report Review
Very sad chapter I must say, but good non the less. Great job on conveying the emotions in this chapter, you really got the point across. The chapters could still be longer, but it's your story write it the way you want it to be.
-SRAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the response! I am glad you liked it and it means a lot to me that you think i am conveying the emotions well. I really want it to be as real as possible, I don't want to ignore the character's pain. Thank you for the review! Report Review
Very good first chapter. Very romantic and funny. Good job, and keep up the good work.Author's Response: thank you very much. I appreciate that you reviewed my story :) Report Review
Simply wonderful! I love this novel more than any other. This was awsome. Words simply cannot describe how wonderful this was. I would really like to know what Helga said though? But that was just magnificent, to say the least. Great job.
-SoulrockerAuthor's Response: Thank you very very much for your high words of praise. I am very glad and proud that you have enjoyed this story so much that you think it is so good.
As far as what Helga said to Ginny -> I will not say! :p you need to use your imagination for that!
Cheers! Report Review
I got one word for you. Amazing, simply amazing. Though I wanted Harry to kill Voldemort. That was an awsome chapter, can't wait for the next one.Author's Response: thank you very much for your review! I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter so much! I hope you do enjoy the last even if it might fall a bit flat Report Review
I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see Harry kick Voldemort's sorry little ass. I thought the chapter was very good actually. Makes me sad the Fawkes died, along with everyone else, but I can't wait till the next one.Author's Response: thanks very much for the review. I am glad that you did enjoy the chapter and yes, next chapter is going to be the one we have ALL been waiting for :p
I hope you enjoy it! Report Review
Yes, I actually did cry just a little. That sucks that Fluer and Bill died, along with Seamus. Aftermath of a battle is always the worst. It's also very sad to read, but I still like the chapter. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait 'till these last two chapters.Author's Response: thanks so much for your review! I am happy that you enjoyed it and a little guilty that I made you cry :p
There are three chapters left and I hope you enjoy them all! Report Review
Holy Crap! Why? I cant believe that Fawkes had to die. Oh well, It was a great chapter. Lots of action, Very good. Still it made me teary reading it, when Fawkes was going to die. I voldy to die. I know I'm kinda already saying what the end will be like, but I want him to die. Can't wait for the next chapter.Author's Response: thank you very much for your review! Yes I can understand your reaction but I am glad that you thought the action was good. and I can certainly understand your want for voldy to die! Report Review
Much better than the last chapter, not saying the last chapter wasn't good, but this was much better. I can't wait until Harry finally kills Voldy. Yes, I know that I'm jumping to conclusions, but I was to read the part where they fight so badly. Anyway, great chapter, can't wait 'til the next one.
-SoulrockerAuthor's Response: yeah I know what you mean, I was so sick of writing filler chapters that the last chapter was sort of rushed and not very good :p I just wanted to get to the action! lol. Glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and yes, the fight between Harry and Voldy is coming!! Report Review
Awsome one-shot! That was amazinng, to say the least. Very good.Author's Response: thank you very much for your review! I am so happy you found it so good! Report Review
Good chapter, though short, still very good all round chapter.Author's Response: thank you very much for your review! I am glad you enjoyed it Report Review
Magnificent chapter, to say the least. I've been waiting to read this since the last chapter came out, lol. This is probably one of the biggest suprises yet, Rita Skeeter. All round very funny, if I do say so my self. Keep it up, and I can't wait till the next chapter.
-SoulrockerAuthor's Response: thank you very much for your review! I am glad that you enjoyed it so much and I hope that you continue to do so for the rest of the story! Report Review
Awsome chapter, Very passionate and funny, I have to admit getting caught three times isn't that good. I really want to know how this is going to turn out. Great Job on the Chapter!
-SoulrockerAuthor's Response: Perhaps it is something they will have to work on!
Thanks so much for reviewing. Report Review
Again, another truly amazing chapter you've got here. I really love where this is going with everything. Anyway, great chapter I can't wait till the next one.
-SoulrockerAuthor's Response: thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it so much and I hope to update on the weekend, uni allowing! Report Review
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