Reading Reviews From Member: fictionletsyoufly
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by fictionletsyouflyA Song's End: A Song's End

17th June 2010:
Wow... I like the way you describe the scene and relate the moon to Remus. The ending was sad but you worded it beautifully. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to do something different from what I usually write, so I decided to go for a darker note. I'm glad it didn't turn out like crap! :)

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Review #2, by fictionletsyouflyTo Save The Dark: Chapter One

26th September 2009:
This is a really good story! I like the concept of Hermione being a healer. It fits, and I've never seen a story quite like this one. Original is best! I hope to read more.

The only thing that is bothering me is the grammar. You probably need to proofread a little more before you post. For example:

"...his eyes were closed peacefully as he slept in a coma peacefully."


"Sighing, she looked at her half eaten lunch on the table in front of her. Sighing, she lifted the remains of it..."

Don't use the same word twice in one sentence or two sentences in a row. For the first sentence, you could have said, "...his eyes were closed serenely as he slept in a peaceful coma."

And you could completely eliminate the second "sighing".

Well, I just thought I would give you some negatives and positives! Keep on writing!

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Review #3, by fictionletsyouflyTime Stands Still: The Astronomy Tower

7th August 2009:
It's about time! Haha :) Loved it. It was beautiful.

Author's Response: I know... finally! Haha thanks for reading!

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Review #4, by fictionletsyouflyTime Stands Still: Torture

6th August 2009:
Oh my gosh! That is so sad! I almost cried! Awesome, yet again.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #5, by fictionletsyouflyTime Stands Still: The Truth

6th August 2009:
Whoa! Did not see Ron and Lavender coming... I loved the scene where Draco comforts her... It's so perfect. :)

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed that bit! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #6, by fictionletsyouflyTime Stands Still: Love and Hate

6th August 2009:
I am officially addicted to this story! It's the best one I've read in a while. I usually read the first chapter and stop, but look! I've finished five, and I'm still hanging on for more. I love the sarcasm you use in your dialogue. And so far, I have nothing negative to say... Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad I managed to hook you!

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Review #7, by fictionletsyouflyDo you dance?: Do you dance?

9th July 2009:
Very good :) It was so sweet and not to mention believable :) There were just a few grammatical errors, but that is the only reason I didn't give you a ten.

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