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Review #1, by smileyMaybe not everything was lost.: Maybe not everything was lost.

1st July 2009:
Hey, I liked it. =]
I would suggest adding in a little more detail, and maybe I'm just fussy, but I think it would help the story if you brushed up on the punctuation in there. Otherwise, it's cool. =]
I'm a novice banner-maker. I'd be happy to make you a banner - but of course it wouldn't be anything fancy as I'm still learning - if you'd like me to make the banner just PM me. =]

Author's Response: sweet! yeah this was just something i pretty much wrote without any thought you know? well anyway, ill look into the punctuation.
and yeah a bannner would be fantastic!
thanks for the review

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