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Review #1, by valkyrie_annTidings of Rain: What Happens in a Storm.

13th September 2009:
Hello!

I enjoyed this quite a lot, even though I'm not a big fan of the H/G ship. You should reveal a bit more in the summary, it would call more attention to this great one-shot.

I'm gonna point out the very few things I found in the chapter, which were two repetitions (of the words "assorted" and "shirt", respectively), one or two commas out of place and a small typo ("she sighed., exasperated").

Apart from those very small things, I think you write beautifully - we can really get a close look at Ginny's feelings and her inner fight between opening up and giving in and keeping herself together.
Very well done, you should definitely develop this idea further! (:

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review! I took all of your grammar suggestions to heart, you should be finding an improved version of the story out shortly. :)

I find it funny that you mentioned you weren't a fan of the H/G relationships, because I usually don't find them that fascinating. If J.K Rowling came up with it, there's usually no major scheme on the part of the fan fic writer to get them together, and I do love a good plot.

As I add my old stories to this account, you should find more of the lesser characters have a say in my stories.
Thanks again and cheers!


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Review #2, by valkyrie_annHermione Granger and the Overdone Plotlines: Everything Occurs and Nobody Acts As They Should

5th September 2009:
It rips my poor little heart to evaluate this as a 10/10... xD
It's the most revolting story I've read, and yet hilarious in it's much exaggerated cliches.
Divided for the whole time I read it between repulse for the OOC-ness of every single character and laughter, I have to admit this was so well accomplished that it actually made me love it in the end.
:p
Excellent indeed.

Author's Response: Ahahahahahahahahaha.

Thanks. :) This means I've completed my mission. Mostly.

Haha, I feel the same way; I look back and I'm never sure whether to laugh because it's so stupid or cry because people actually do this for real.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, and thanks for reviewing!


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