wow thats good! so does that mean hes dumping her coz his dad doesnt like her? sorry thats all i have to say. am i right though?

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ok im sorry i carnt remeber which chapters but u said sirius had brown eyes, he has grey eyes and you refered to james as pads. i think you mean "prongs" but other than that im really excited for the rest of the story!!

xox
raven_crustacean

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lol tis extremely funny miss or sir or mam or dude

Author's Response: Thank you

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i love meg cabot too! shes a great writer herself. and so are you. ur a very good writer. i actually stop my project thats due in a couple of days coz i was too gripped reading ur story! its a great story. sirius and remus are EXCATLY how i imagined them. so much alike its scary. and i love henn. shes just like my best friend. a crazy maraudess. lmao. im so excited! too keep reading i mean! well id better shut up so i can do just that ;)

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yay keep writing lol. cbf review all the other chapters so i will only review if its important

x.0.x raven_crustacean

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wow that was funny and great
i really liked


x.0.x raven_crustacean

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sounds good, ima shuddup so i can keep reading tanks!!
oh and i cbf reviewing for the rest of the chapters, unless theres a good or extremely bad part i like or dont.

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wow
hurry up im SOOO excited
oh and i love the new banner


vaaarrryyy pretty!!




like how its dark and the connection between sirius and charlie seems more definite!!

x.0.x
raven_crustacean



but ima lot lika luna

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love my new banner too, even though the old one was really good too!

I might be updating very soon =D

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awesomenesss
only prob is (i think personally, others mite not feel the same..i dont know...u mite thou...since its ur stroy and all...) i just think that there isnt enough talking and it gets a little boring...coz im sitting for ages waiting for talking.
but other than that.
its very interesting.

Author's Response: Don't worry I know what you mean. The first couple of Chapter do have a lot of description in them to st the scene so that the readers really understand how the characters minds work. In the next Chapter there's more talking, and in Chapter 4 even more , promise! :) Thanks for taking the time to review!

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WOW!
THAT WAS AMAZING!
KEEP WRITING!

Author's Response: Yes Sir!! (or Mamm lol) Cheers for reviewing! :)

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tanks! vary goood!
keep writing me likey!
sorry i wont review or rate for the other chapters coz i carnt be stufffed but um. ur a very good author and i hope u do well in the future.
xox
raven_crustacean

XD

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lol to all the chapters, keep writing!!
good luck!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)

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COME ON KEEP WRITING!! PWEASE!!
i love how ur plant has a teddy, lmao

Author's Response: Hahaahahaha. Okay, third chapter in the writing.

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i think its REALLY great!! if you dont continue from chapter 2, i will hunt you down...GOT THAT! lol
great story line, plot, style, I LOVE IT ALL!

Author's Response: Ahahahaha. Thanks!

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