Oh. My. That was amazing. You are a fantastic writer! You brought me to tears, that was so awesome! Wow! Mind-blowing and heartbreaking and beautiful all at once. Just . . . wonderful! Report Review
This was brilliant. I loved the way you didn't tell who he was until toward the end of the story. And I like how you are very descriptive with them breaking apart.
Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that keeping him secret worked, as it doesn't always. ^_^ I'll definitely keep writing. :D Report Review
Throwing in a little Twilight, I see. Not a bad idea, but not a good one either. Be warned. There are people that don't like it when Twilight gets mixed with Harry Potter. Yes, Cedric is Robert Pattinson, but he is not Edward in the books and movies. Just keep that in mind Report Review
Fantastic. It only needed one word. F-a-n-t-a-s-t-i-c!Author's Response: thank you very much! that means a lot and I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Report Review
Wh..what? Where's the rest?
This was amazing so far and I know you will keep it alive. 10/10 automatically. For the humor and the jealousy. I can actually feel all the emotions going through the characters' heads!
A.M. ScottAuthor's Response: hehe, i'm in the progress of writing the next chapter so just be patient please! the next shoul be up by next weekend (july 4thish)
thank you for reviewing! ^_^ Report Review
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