i really love your story! you write really well :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) x Report Review
Greaat first chapter! just one question on this bit.
" As long as you do the same for me." I answered.
" Deal" I said.
is one of them meant to be HE said rather than both of them her? i look forward to readin the rest :DAuthor's Response: Oh lol yes, and sorry I'm only just now getting back to you. I'm glad you like my story, and thanks for the awesome review!!!
~Deja Report Review
this is really good, really sensitive on such a sensitive topic. people dont really realise how serious self harm is and you've put this in a lovely way with a hint of hope.Author's Response: Thank you so much! This means a lot to me because it's the first really angsty thing I've written and completed. Keep looking back for more stories, I now have more time to write.
Becca300 Report Review
quite short, but i like the idea.
I also really liked Ron's speech, it seemed really heart-felt.
I look forward to reading the rest :) xAuthor's Response: thanx this is my first review so excited about writing more Report Review
This is a really really good begining, it was really gripping, it made me feel really bad for Draco, i am looking forward to reading the rest. Report Review
That was some really good and powerful writing and i think it is a beautiful and realistic (in terms of Harry Potters world) story.Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's always great to hear from readers and know your work is appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for stopping by. Report Review
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