I'm absolutely loving this! Ellis is such a believable and realistic character, in the manner that she's got realistic flaws! She's really likeable. I also really like how you've portrayed Albus so far!
I can't wait to see more of this! Update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Really? She is?
I'm glad you like it, I should be updating soon.
Thank you. ♥ Report Review
I'm completely love this story! :) I can't wait for your next update; Lonnie is completely lovable. Oddly, I can't wait to see her brother; if he's anything like Lonnie, then I can imagine that they have a lovely relationship. I know that I sometimes put characters in my stories where they're just mentioned and not really met, but still - I have hope ;)
Thank you for writing this story; it's lovely, such sweet concepts!
I'm also loving the 'Ajoke' name, that's so witty and clever! :)
I'm officially falling for all of your stories!Author's Response: I'm glad you think so :) Her brother does appear in the story, and their relationship is slightly weird.
Thank you ♥ this review has made my day. :) Report Review
Hey! I read your review and came to check out your story!
And . I LOVE IT! :)
I am really loving Freddy too, and how calm he is. I can't wait to read more on him, and James is such a sweetie!
Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for coming to check it out!
*is completely starstruck*
Thank you! Freddy and James are so adorable, aren't they? I love them so much!
thank you for the review! Chapter 2 is in the queue. You get to meet the lovely Belle... :P
-Louise Report Review
I absolutely love this story; honestly you should be proud of this chapter; it's one of my favourites!
Astoria is simply hilarious, and her relationship's wither her husband and son are so beautifully written. You're very talented!
I love the way that Draco like Lily and Astoria, Rose - that was such a lovely touch!
Pretty please update soon!Author's Response: really? one of your favourites? well, i might have to rethink my opinion on this chapter then :')
n'awwwh. thank you. i'm so glad you think so, and i'm also ecstatic that you enjoy the Malfoys so much. (I love them. I LOVE THEM.)
Draco doesn't necessarily like Lily. Astoria doesn't necessarily like Rose. They're taking sides against each other, like they always do. although it is true as well that Draco /doesn't/ detest Lily quite so much as the others. and Astoria likes Rose mostly because ROSE isn't dating her son. :')
er, i can promise an update in the next week! and i'm sorry this reply took so long. ^^ Report Review
I'm so glad that you're back! I absolutely adore this story. I love the idea of Tonk's in Hogwarts, and her friendship with Charlie, but there aren't any stories about it as good as this one!
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
PS - loved the flirting :PAuthor's Response: Aw thank you so much! An update will definitely come soon.
And I'm glad :) I tried to capture my more positive albeit ridiculous flirting situations, so I'm glad they worked for you! Report Review
This is such a brilliant chapter! The end if adorable! I love the two of them together.
Scorpius is so fly ;)Author's Response: thanks, glad you enjoyed it! Haha, never heard Scorpius described as fly before! Hopefully chapter 15 will be up soon. Thank you very much for reviewing ♥ Report Review
I really, really loved this!
I tend to fall in love with everything that you write though - the first I ever read by you being 'Breathing' - but this is brilliant! It's so well written, and I love the character's names, random, I know, but they're so cool! :)
I'm really, really glad that you write this! It's a new story for me to read non-stop! Thank you!Author's Response: Aw, thanks for reading :) I'm so happy you like it. Report Review
This is absolutely lovely! I love the way that you're written both Rose and Scorpius. They're really realistic, and not too over-done (does that even make sense? :P).
I can't believe that this is your first one (that you've posted) :O My first was no where near as good as this, let me tell you!
To get a banner, most people opt for 'The Dark Arts'. You can just google it or there is a link on the right hand side on the homepage :) there are wonderful artists there that will happily make you a banner - there are rules on that site that tell you how to go about it :)
I hope that helped! But back to the point, this is a lovely read!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, it makes sense :) I REALLY love this review! Thank you for telling me where to get a banner! I'm going to your author page now and reading your stories :) Then I'm going to request a banner. I really appreciate the review! It's always nice to get feedback from your readers so you know how good you are :) Report Review
GAH!! This chapter is absolutely heartbreaking, poor Potter, poor Vic - poor everyone! But I love Des in this chapter, the way he is still standing by Victoria, yet being so fair to everyone else - possibly apart from Layla and Sylvia :P
You've captured the teenage life perfectly in this, and I absolutely love the way that no one in this story is perfect, you have given them all have flaws, making them easier to relate to. I just love it! :D
Thank you for the quick update! Report Review
I can't believe it's taken me this long to get around to leaving a review! I just have to say it; this is honestly my favourite story on this site! It's so unique, I have never read anything like it before, and your characterisations are so real!
In my opinion, you ended it absolutely perfectly! :D
Thank you for writing this wonderful story!Author's Response: thank you sweetie, for all your lovely reviews throughout this fic. i am really pleased you enjoyed it and thank you for all the wonderful compliments. thank you for reading!
xx Report Review
Oh my gosh! Louis! :D
I can't believe he did that - I don't know whether to be completely shocked or find it really cute :P
I really like Arisa, she seems totally awesome. Please update soon! I am really enjoying this story so far!Author's Response: EEEP. Ohmygosh, you're my favourite author on this site. (I have to fangirl for a moment)
I'm glad you like Arisa. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
Hey, I'm really enjoying this so far! I have recently began reading more and more Teddy and Victoire stories, and well I saw that this one was written by you ... well, I thought I'd give it a go :P And I'm glad I did because so far ... this is awesome! :D
Please update soon!
Oh, and I love the banner :D Report Review
I absolutely love this! I can't wait to read more!
I am always looking for a story about Teddy and Vic that is unique, and I think I've found it!
Please update soon! :D Report Review
I honestly love this! And it's such a unique story too! :D
Please update soon! Report Review
I can't actually explain how much I am in love with this.
It made my 2011 so far! :D
You've totally proven to me just quite how much rubbish I write in to my stories :L - not that I actually put most of that in, but it still made me think :P
Thank you so much for writing this!
A bit of extra information, I was drinking my tea, when I read the 'I AM LORD VOLDERMORT'S DAUGHTER' this I basically spat it back out in to the mug. Yeah, disgusting, I know :P But that's just how I roll.
'Did I mention that Scotti was a seer?' - get's me every time!Author's Response: :O omg, I am so happy that you have read and reviewed my story and liked it ek!! I am totally amazed by your stories and I don't think that you could ever write rubbish in them:-). There is totally nothing wrong with a little cliche, I love it but when there is a lot it's a bit *bleurgh*. LOL, *happy dance because I made you spit your tea out*, I am going to say it was because you were completetly shocked at Scotti's amazing secret lol. Either that or you just had to laugh at the stupidity of it all =p. I think Scotti may just be the best seer to have ever graced the planet, I mean her predictions top notch =p. So happpy that you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review =D! Report Review
love this! :D I can't wait to see more.
I adore your other stories; i can't wait to see where you take this one! :D Report Review
Yay! You updated! I can't actually explain the excitement I had when I saw this at the top of my favourites page! I have been reading it since about chapter 10 (I think) and it's honestly one of my favourites. :D
Charlie was a character that inspired me to write my own stories! So thank you for that!
I love this chapter. But poor Louisa. :(
Please update soon! Oh, and I love your banners! Your gallery at TDA is lovely :)Author's Response: Thank you SO much! Seriously, that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me! Thanks for the review and if you're ever over at TDA say hello! Report Review
I am honestly in love with this! I love how you write all of your characters; your writing is flawless! You make Scorpius and Rose both seem so kind, yet somehow still so vulnerable at the same time.
Pretty please update soon! (PS, I am loving the banner too!)Author's Response: Awww thank you so much!! The banner is awesome isn't it?! Fourth chapter is just about up! Report Review
This chapter is brilliant, so exciting. I'm geared up for the next one! I love this; it's a plot idea that I haven't seen before - it doesn't happen too often any more, especially one that is as well written as this! :DAuthor's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! More coming, hopefully, if I don't get too much homework, thanks for your review! :) Report Review
I honestly loved this chapter to death! :D
Your writing is absolutely brilliant (and your banners are breathtaking :) ). There are never any mistakes and the description is wonderful.
I love Vicky in this chapter, she is so desperate to prove that she isn't dating James she just makes it worse for herself.
I can't wait for the next chapter! The way that you describe James in this is brilliant! Report Review
I am seriously loving this so far! James and Tiff have a hilarious relationship, but poor Noah, and Alex, and anyone else who is going to get caught in the way :D
All of the characters are written so well, they al mesh perfectly.
Thank you for updating so quickly! :DAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I love Tiff and James together too, they make me smile :) You're wonderful for saying those things about my characters, I get a little worried sometimes that they don't make sense.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Amazing chapter! I loved it!
This was the perfect amount of speech and description for the devastation she was causing. I love how you portray Dom.
She is one heck of a person!
Thank you for updating so soon!Author's Response: Dom is mental. She hasn't really got over Lorcan's death or the fact that Lysander murdered him or that Lysander loves her and the whole Noah/Rose/Scorpius shindig. I hoped I got the dialogue : description ratio down, I think the quietness/eeriness was important, especially in a chapter this haunting and important. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Hey! I came across this fic by accident, but I'm really glad that I did. I am loving it so far ... and, it's only the first chapter.
Please update this soon! I can't wait to read on.
And I'm totally loving Louis and Byron.Author's Response: Bahaha, Louis and Byron are a riot, aren't they? I'm really happy you liked this and thanks so much for the review!
Annie Report Review
Noo! You can't leave it there! :D
Thank you for updating! This is a lovely chapter.
It's brilliant that Sirius is awake!
Please update soon!Author's Response: Haha! I'd thought I'd leave it there. A lot happens in the next chapter, it would just be like too much.
Thank you! I'm not a fan of this chapter but I'm glad you liked it neverless.
Yep :) Couldn't keep him in a coma for too long, the characters are all too mopey without him XD
thanks so much for the review & I'll try to update soon.
xxx Report Review
I love this chapter! It's so powerful! I can't wait for the next update! Thank you for writing this!
Poor Izzi! I was almost crying at the last scene! I can't believe that it happened to her, she is such an awesome person! And Nellie - Sirius has to get better, I don't think that Nellie or James could cope with out him.
When you wrote that James dug his nails in to his leg, that seemed to make the whole thing a lot more powerful for me.
You're a brilliant writer!Author's Response: Really? Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this chapter, it's a personal favourite of mine. I just loved the different tone and showing a whole new side to the characters they didn't even knew they had. I know, I felt sad doing that to her :( But It gives her humanity back. It makes her realize that just maybe, she doesn't have to be so strong all the time.
Me neither, I really just wanted to show that Nellie was falling apart, but it made so much sense to show James falling apart, in the same way and different ways. I just thought it showed that James and Sirius were close.
Thank you so much, that's so kind! You've made my day.
Thanks so much for this review. Report Review
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