Of course she has doubts! Im sorry, but i don't see how she can even think about forgiving them. They were evil to her. Pure evil. They nearly killed her! I love Al, and i hope he's changed, but she should have doubts, she should have a lot of them! LOVED the chapter!
Please update soon! :)
Becky

Author's Response: I know. She has doubts, and she has lots of them. They just haven't surfaced because she hadn't been close with Al and them yet. But now she is... and she has doubts!

I have 5% of chapter 16 done. So updating might be tough ;) But I'll try

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Wow. Just wow. I really don't have anything more to say than that. You are SO talented and amazing. PLEASE update soon!
Thank you so, so, so much for giving us this brilliant, perfect writing to read :) We owe you.
Becky

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Wow, its hard to believe how messed up they both are. I keep wanting to make this story more rounded, friendly, lovely but it isn't. Its warped, and i shouldn't try to make it anything more than it is, because Pippa and Al aren't like that, and there could never be a perfect fairytale ending for them. At least, not at the moment anyways :) I still hope though! I hope Al becomes human and Pippa becomes whole again, and no-ones broken, and they fall in love with each other. I would LOVE that to happen. But i don't think it will :( But like ive always said - this story deserves medals its so good, and you should write books! *translatio: please be an author, i want to read more of your writing!*
AMAZING chapter, please update soon! :D
Your biggest fan Becky :)

Author's Response: I know what you mean. I mean, the story just writes itself and I can't really describe that. The characters will grow happier, it's just going to take time. And yes, totally, but I already know the ending and i think it really suits the story. Wow! That would sound perfect! maybe it will happen, it might not. And wow, you're so nice Becky! Thanks so much, you've made my day! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you have a wonderful day! xxx

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Aw, PLEASE update soon! L-O-V-E-D that chapter!
100 billion/10!
becky :)
p.s you.are.amazing.

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YES! WOO! She finally told him to sod off! Well, not really but close enough :) And he deserved it! So horrible to her! She didn't EVER do anything to him! :(
Anyway, brilliant chapter!
Becky
1 BILLION/10! YOU'RE AMAZING!

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Aw, at least some things are improving! James is still such a twerp though! :(
Awesome chapter!
10 million/10!
Becky

Author's Response: hhahaa perfect description of James there :) Yes, things are getting better, but don't hold your breath ;)
Glad you liked it so much! xxx

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Aww! Poor Stella! So much horrible shizz going down in one chapter! Urgh! Haha as much as i love Al, i dont think that plan was a good idea :D Amazing chapter (Im repeating myself aren't i?) :P
Becky
1 million/10!

Author's Response: Yeah, Stella really got a bad deal this time, but hopefully things will get better!
As for Al's plan, it's a horrible one, but it might have unexpected results...
anyways, thank you so much for reviewing!! xx

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Aw poor Stella! I cant belive she thinks Stella likes Al :D James is such a git! So horrible to her for no reason! Urgh! :'( Loved the chapter though - very well written as always :)
Becky
700/10! You rock!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you liked this chapter :) yeah James needs to start being nice to her, huh? thanks for the review!! x

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Haha brilliant chapter! Seriously hilarious! I Love the James/Stella banter :D Cant wait to read more! You're an amazing writer!
Becky :)
500/10!

Author's Response: Thank you! James/Stella banter is the highlight for me :) Next chapter will be up soon!
xxx

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WOO! Go Stella! Im so glad she finally stood up to him! Hitting bludgers at them? SO risky! Loved the chapter! Jeez, only been 2 chapters and im addicted to this fic! :D
Becky
100/10! Really, really brilliant writing :)

Author's Response: Thank youu!! I'm so happy you like it! yeah, James is a bit of a maniac, and he's got to be put in his place sometimes. Anyways, thank you so much for the review! :) xx

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Wow, great first chapter! Really enjoyed it! Im hooked already :)
Becky
10/10! You rock!

Author's Response: Great! I'm so glad you like it, hope you enjoy the rest! x

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aw, SUCH a good chapter! I loved it! Sorry this review will be so short :( PLEASE update soon!
Becky :)
You.are.awesome. Just sayin'

Author's Response: Thanks, Becky!

Haha, I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 22's up and 23 should be up... soon-ish?

xxx

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Amazing chapter! Please update soon - i loved it! :)
Becky

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad to hear it! I'm trying to update a bit faster now =)

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Aw, amazing chapter! Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try :)

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Hahaha i love Emma! Such a good line :D Oh wow, a whole night with Al Potter? I actually cannot contain my jealousy right now :P
Most.Amazing.Chapter.Ive.Ever.Read.
Just saying.
PLEASE update soon! I get withdrawl symptoms when i dont have more of your amazing writing to read :D
Loved it! (As per usual)
Becky
P.S You're super brilliant!

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Hahaha she made Danny sit in the corner - you go girl! Brilliant chapter! (as always!) :D
Becky

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you! Yeah, Spencer tends to treat Danny like that :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

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Aw, such an amazing chapter! Im officially in love with James, just saying :) Loved it!
Becky

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love him too :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

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Aw, great chapter! Loved it! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

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NO! NO! That evil cow! Urgh! It was going so well! It was perfect! Damn Jaz!
Im really sorry this review will be so short, since technically i should have been out the door to school ten minutes ago, but oh well :D
BEST.CHAPTER.EVER. Just sayin'
PLEASE update soon! I love this story so much :) Ella is by far one of my favourite characters ever!
6726487236478652784562347247957925475247955364 million/10 :)
Becky

Author's Response: Hi,
I know I'm so terrible for doing that at the end! I just couldn't let them live happily every after.just yet anyway! It is my favourite chapter and was definitely a labour of love, especially trying to get that kiss scene right - there was so much pressure on it to be perfect. I will try and update asap but I have so much work to do in my last term that school has to be focus until August and the degree is finally over!
Thank you for a lovely review and hopefully you didn't miss school!

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Amazing chapter! Did Al Potter actually soften? What!?! But he's usually so cold! Loved it! PLEASE update soon" :)
Becky

Author's Response: Hello again!

Hmm, he might have, he might not have. :P I wish I could say more here, but instead I'll just hurry up and get the next chapter written. ;)

Hope you like what's to come!

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Aw, such a good chapter! Ooooh America!? Can't wait to read that! PLEASE update soon! Loved it! You rock! :)
Becky

Author's Response: Thanks! :D.
America will definitely be interesting ;D

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Aw, such a cute chapter! He likes her! He SO likes her! AHH! Please update soon! You know how addictive your writing is :)
Becky

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Aw, such a great chapter! Seriously, amazing! Hmm, is James a little jealous of Thomas' interest in Cassie? :O (I know James wasn't green or anything, but i like to think he was jealous) ;) And no! Now Scorp thinks Rose loves someone else! :'( No! *sigh* Why is love never easy? :D
PLEASE update soon!
Im so unnaturaly addicted to this story!
Becky

Author's Response: Thank you *blushes* you really are wonderful! Yes, there is some drama to ensue in the scorpius-rose department... ;)
Thanks again for the lovely review.
x
Bo

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AW! They are just TOO good together! Seriously, make them a couple already! L-O-V-E-D the chapter! Please update soon, i can't get enough of this fic! :D
Becky

Author's Response: aww, thank you :) im glad you like them... hm... they really need a couple name. jummer? jammer? sumes? eh, ill work on it :P

update will be pretty soon, thank you so much,

ellie :) xx

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Aw, great chapter! Loved it! :) I din't even realise you'd updated, but at leats now ive had 2 chapters to read! :D
Becky

Author's Response: I LOVE IT WHEN THAT HAPPENS. i wish it happened more often :p

ellie :) xx

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