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Review #1, by vengeanceLunar Phases I: Waning Moon: Regret and Ambush

26th November 2012:
Eep, how have I forgotten to review the last few chapters? They were all wonderful, of course.

And wow, I just love your writing style. It's excellent. It flows so well and is just perfect, for lack of better words. (You're the writer, not me!)

The story is going really well, and i'm intrigued as to if Remus will remember - or if seeing Myra will jog his memory.

I hope your NaNoWriMo went well, and I hope you can get the surgery if you need it. I know i'll struggle with one update a month, but that's okay. It'll be a good part of my month ;)

Thanks for sharing your fabulous work x

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you liked them!

NaNo went to... Well, you get the picture. Cats and work and life just got in the way... So I haven't written anything worthwhile in ages, but I'm hoping to turn that around while I have some time off at Christmas.

I sent the next chapter to my betas a couple of days ago, hoping I can get it up on the 24th. But because of the queue closure it will hopefully be out around New Years.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by vengeanceLunar Phases I: Waning Moon: Revelations at Hogwarts

4th August 2012:
Excellent chapter, as usual. I love that Myra and Remus are partners for patrolling, and I love the little chat that Sirius had with her. (And the snogging line!)

The sneak peak for the next chapter has made me awfully curious, so I look forward to seeing how that conversation goes.

And the september first thing makes complete sense. I never understood it either. Maybe they just go back and start on whichever day of the year it is - even if it's a friday! It wouldn't make sense, but yeah.

This is definitely one of my favourite Remus/OC stories. Thoroughly enjoying it, thank-you :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And that you're excited about the next chapter, because I am too :)

Yeah, it does make sense that they go back and start on wichever day September 1 is on, but, if I remember correctly, I've read that it's always Sunday when they're rushing for the train... Maybe the magical world is nice that way, the days and dates never change...

One of your favourites... Oh, you make me all tingly inside :)

Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #3, by vengeanceMy Not-So-Imaginary Friend: XVI: This Has Been in My Family for Generations

28th July 2012:
In a way, I'm super excited that Marta and Remus are finally together - however, I'm so worried that something else with Benjamin is going to happen, or there will be some sort of plot twist or something. I just hope Marta and Remus can be happy together, finally!

Author's Response: I was also super happy when I wrote this chapter! But you think I'm going to have a plot twist? Really? *whistles* Well, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing!

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Review #4, by vengeanceFate, Maybe: Chapter Ten

28th July 2012:
I'm so, so, so excited to see this story updated. I honestly love it so very much. I think the whole concept is super interesting, and I think the way you have the characters reacting is perfect. Oh gosh. I really want to see Prisoner of Azkaban to see Sirius and Remus' reactions about themselves! (I know, I know, I'm getting a bit ahead here :P)
But honestly, I love this so much. Your characters are excellent, this is excellent. Please keep going :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'll be honest, the idea of them reading Prisoner of Azkaban is one of the reasons I wanted to do this story :P I just think it would be so interesting to write!

I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story and thanks again - reviews like this are what keep me going :)

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Review #5, by vengeanceLunar Phases I: Waning Moon: Of Firewhiskey and Freefalls

19th July 2012:
Hestia's home sounds amazing, and oh gosh, thankfully Myra didn't spill Remus' secret under the influence of firewhiskey!

You write so well. You seem to be able to write any situation perfectly. This is definitely one of my favourite stories. It's interesting, it's marauders era, it's exceptionally well written. It's just excellent :)

I'm very intrigued to see the next chapter. I can't wait to have some more Remus! Even Remus-themed thoughts ;)

Author's Response: You're too kind :) Thanks for making my day with that review :D

The next chapter should be out within two weeks :) It got sent to the betas yesterday. And it does include Remus :)

Thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by vengeanceMy Not-So-Imaginary Friend: XV: One Would Say It's a Family Business

13th July 2012:
Just wanted to say that I adore this story. It's so well thought out and interesting. I'm thoroughly intrigued and can't wait to see what happens! Also, your characters are excellent and I love them all. I promise next time I review it'll be better x

Author's Response: It's always good to hear words of praise and appreciation! I do my best to plan ahead. I hope that when the next few chapters go up, I won't be the only one thinking they're still good. Thank you so much for reviewing! Anything is good in my book!

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Review #7, by vengeanceLunar Phases I: Waning Moon: Blue Moon

11th July 2012:
Just a quick review to say I enjoyed the chapter. I swear I'll leave a better review next chapter when I've got more time. Of course, the story is excellent. I adore it. x

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the review, and I hope to hear from you again! Chapter 16 should be out this weekend :)

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Review #8, by vengeanceBrave New Hope: The Way Home

26th April 2012:
Okay, so I spent all yesterday and the night before that reading the entire 'Brave New' series. I can't remember everything I wanted to say last night (by the time I finished reading, I went straight to sleep) but I really love what you've done.

I love the way the story has developed through the generations. I love how what Harry does goes mostly along with the books. You write your characters excellently, and I feel like you've done them all justice.

I love Izzy finally realising how she feels about George, and i'm glad Ginny knows. I just hope George and Izzy both realise that they like each other. Mia and Sirius are wonderful, as are Tonks and Remus. And i'm honestly hoping that you don't follow the book with Tonks and Remus... I don't think I could handle that.

Before I start writing a story as a review, I'll end with: Everything is perfect. I love your twist on everything, and i'm glad I found the series and spent so long reading it all. I look forward to seeing what happens :)

- Jaid x

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
It's always lovely to get new readers, especially ones who like your work :D
I'm so glad you like the characters - I'll have to confess I have excellent critics that stir me back into the right direction when I show signs of going out of character or writing them in a "bad" way. Sticking closely to canon also helps.
I'm very happy that you like Izzy's relationship with George - they're slowly growing into their feelings but it won't be a whirlwind thing. I find having them taking it slow makes it all much sweeter.
I'm glad you find the fic perfect, though honestly I very much doubt it actually is. Hope you keep on reading it even though my updates aren't as often as they probably should...

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Review #9, by vengeanceThe War: Bittersweet

15th April 2012:
I'm loving this story. You've captured each character so perfectly. Your writing style is excellent. You've brought Hermione back! (I love Hermione/Remus) This story is just a massive combination of everything Marauder Era I love. I can't wait to see me. To see Lily with James again, hopefully :)

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Review #10, by vengeanceDawn and Dusk: A Promise

6th April 2012:
One of the most perfect stories. I love it, and wish it had been finished. I wish I knew how this story went :)

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Review #11, by vengeanceLunar Phases I: Waning Moon: Invisible

1st April 2012:
I have spent my day reading this story, and I absolutely love it! I love your Remus, I love each of your characters, everything is just perfect

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying it! And that you like how I portray the characters :)
Thank you so much for the review! I expect chapter 11 to be out within two weeks!

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Review #12, by vengeanceA Building Love: Chapter 12

31st March 2012:
Please don't abandon this story, I adore it!
Your characters are great, your story-line is great, everything is just great :)
I'm not very good at reviews, but I do adore your story and I look forward to seeing it updated :D x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Don't worry after all th feedback I've decided I am definitely sticking to the story and by the way your review has definitely contributed to that decision so thanks a lot! Trust me there's no such thing as a bad review... (unless you tell me you hate the story) but I actually am so happy with the review and it's honestly made me very happy! Thanks and I hope you continue to read and review! Jenna :) x

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Review #13, by vengeanceFate, Maybe: Chapter Nine

27th March 2012:
I was a bit hesitant about reading this story at first, but my gosh, I absolutely love it! You write wonderfully! This story is amazing, and I'll keep my eye out for any other updates :)

I hope uni is going well! Uni work drove me absolutely crazy, never any time for anything else :P

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Review #14, by vengeancePlay: Six Months is the New Practically Forever

19th February 2012:
Okay, so I just sat here and read Game, and now Play. Sorry for not reviewing as I read, but I just had to read this story without stopping. I have loved every part of it. I think Oliver is wonderful, and the same with Rona. The story has kept me glued to my laptop (thus late to work) but it's been great :) I'll keep my eye out for an update and look forward to more glorious work from you :D

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! ^__^ Game's super old now, but it's where my writing began. Thank you so much for your review :)

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Review #15, by vengeanceAll they want for Christmas...: Planning

20th July 2011:

The dresses all sound gorgeous, and I'm so intrigued to see what the wedding is like! (But I'm so worried about Lucius!)

Hermione's spell is wonderful, hopefully it'll come in handy when Lucius/A Parkinson appears ;)

I love how the wedding will be muggle and magic and that both sides can attend :)

I'm looking forward to everything! :D


Author's Response: The wedding is still 2 months away!! Calmmm yo self!

I'm obsessed with Wedding dresses. She actually tried on the exact one that I want. See if you can guess which one it is?

I had a lot of trouble coming up with the spell. I had a major brainstorm moment. The spell translates from latin to "love shield" :)

I'm excited for everyone to read the ending!

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Review #16, by vengeanceAll they want for Christmas...: Proposing

27th June 2011:
Just wanted to say the chapter was absolutely lovely. I love how Draco proposed the first time and Hermione was just thinking about work, heh. But the chapter was so nice, and Hermione and Draco are so wonderful together :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you think they're good together! I'm very excited for the next few chapters! They shall be epic!

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Review #17, by vengeanceAll they want for Christmas...: Living

14th April 2011:
Narcissa and Draco in this chapter actually bought tears to my eyes. However, I am glad that Narcissa will always love Draco - even if he's with Hermione.

I do love that Hermione got a job, and it's a job that sounds very interesting.

You're a great writer, and I enjoy this story very much :)

- Jaid x

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love that you had an emotional response to the chapter, because I know I did! And I wish I had Hermione's job! I thought it sounded so much more exciting than something dull in the ministry.

I hope you keep reading and enjoying!

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Review #18, by vengeanceJust Dance: Scavenger Hunt, Part Two

14th April 2011:
I just love Fred Weasley!

Hopefully their plan works out, though I can just imagine something going wrong x]

Looking forward to the update! and, I hope school gets better :)

- Jaid

Author's Response: Oh, with Fred you can imagine the many things going wrong ;P Also, thank you for understanding about the school thing. I hope it gets better too!

♥ thanks for the review, Jaid!

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Review #19, by vengeanceTrapped.: Cinderella

11th April 2011:
It's been so long since I've logged onto this website, but I'm so glad to see this story updated :)
I love it a lot, and i'm loving the Regulus/Ivy action :D

I look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter :)

- J

Author's Response: I just updated! Thanks for the review.

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Review #20, by vengeanceThe Courage to Change: Heroes

26th October 2010:
I just respect Draco so much, and even Lucias appears alright to me in this chapter. I'm really glad he helped his son, and I really dislike Bellatrix! I am so glad Draco found Hermione, and even Harry! I imagine Ginny will be very pleased with Draco when she finds out. However, I do hope that Draco is okay. Bellatrix truly is a psycopath! Haha. I do also hope that Lucias is alright! Actually, that everyone is alright, haha!

I cannot wait until the next chapter is updated :)

Also! This is my 100th review! Yay! -dances- :)

- Jaid

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews! And congrats on your 100th!! :)

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Review #21, by vengeanceThe Courage to Change: Pieces

26th October 2010:
Firstly, I loved Bill and Ron's little chat!
Secondly, I loved Snape in this chapter and I loved that Draco was able to attend his mothers funeral safely thanks to Snape and that he was able to save Luna and Ollivander!
Thirdly, the whole mutual break up thing made me sad :(

But still, it was a great chapter :)

- Jaid

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Review #22, by vengeanceThe Courage to Change: Discoveries

26th October 2010:
I felt I should leave another review :)
I'm loving this story very much as I read along and this chapter was nice - I love that Luna helped out and asked about the Diadem! I am also glad that Hermione found it and destroyed it. Your Hermione and Draco are great!
I felt so bad for Ron, finding out the way he did but I suppose it was time for him to find out!
Time for me to continue reading :)

- Jaid

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Review #23, by vengeanceThe Courage to Change: Doubts

25th October 2010:
I was reading through this story at school today (instead of doing my school work, oops) and I really liked it, pretty much straight away.

This chapter is great, it's very long, however it kept my attention the entire time. I love the way you've decided to portray each character, and the fact that Harry hasn't returned is interesting.

Draco is amusing and his thoughts of Hermione are generally cute.

The best part of the chapter was definitely the "Worm eye on me" part. Very amusing!

I shall continue reading on now :)

Wonderful work

- Jaid

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Review #24, by vengeanceMagnetism: Resentment

23rd October 2010:
Okay, I have finally read through this story and it's hitting 12:30am. Anyway, I pretty much love this story. It's interesting and different to most other Dramione stories (no Head Girl/Head Boy storyline!) which makes me like it even more! Raglow always seemed suspicious and now my suspicion has been confirmed. I do look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapters, I will be keeping an eye out for the update :)
It's just such a wonderful story! :)
- Jaid

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Review #25, by vengeanceMagnetism: The Highest Tower

23rd October 2010:
Aw, I absolutely love the interaction between Hermione and Draco! :)

- Jaid

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