:S OMG ,,,i cant wait to see what happens next do update soon :D !!!
i loved the storyy i just finished reading the other one :) !!
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:) i was wondering where i read this before lol ,,,den i remembered fanfiction net i think lol!!
awesome story :D
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5 months ?? 5 MONTHS ??? are you Kidding me ???
dat's wayy too,,,umm,,short lol !!
but hopefully if my instincts are right,,she wont die ;) *hint hint* ;) !
My favorite girl has to be Mary :P !!
Least favorite is obviously Rachel !! lol. i wish she would just dissapear xD !!!
Favorite boy- honestly ???it's a tie between sirius,James, and Nate :D !! i can't choose lol :P !!!
Lease favorite boy would be Mary's father,,arrgg idk Y lol he's just soOo annoying -.- !!!
Favorite couple i would have chosen Sirius/Mary but they arnt exactly a couple yet :P so are Lily and James,,,but it would have to be between them (: !!
and least fav couple is nate and kate -.- !! oh and it would have been rachel and sirius,,!!
AwesOmE ChaptER :D
Do update so0n i cant wait :D !!
xXxAuthor's Response: I can't tell you if she'll die or not just quite yet. Antoher 50 chapters maybe ;)
Thank you very much for answering all my questionds :D The update is in the queue, it's been long because I've been on holiday Report Review
it was really good :) !! but how did she die ??? :-|
I cant wait for the next chapter (: do update soon :D
xxAuthor's Response: Why hello, there :) Shall I tell you how she died? Okay here goes...
Ha! As if :P Gotta stay tuned for that ;) I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for the review! Report Review
OMG u finally updated :D
i was literrary shusshed by my brother as i was squealing too loud for his liking lol xD,,
I LOVED IT :D lol do update sooner,,this story made my day :D ,,,cant wait for the next chapter :D
xxAuthor's Response: aw, thank you so much. i have moments like that, too. and i was excited to finally update this. Thanks!! Report Review
I love it :-)! Psh I wish scorp and rose get together in the end already LOL xD !
Great job :) Report Review
awesome chapie :) cant wait for the next one :D
:D 10/10Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm updating today! Report Review
hehe i loved it so0o much :)Author's Response: Good to see the fun stuff back, right? :D Report Review
that was.Amazing =D
10/10Author's Response: Yay! Glad you thought so! Report Review
ur story is brilliant :D
i wanted to review last nyt but couldnt coz i had to go to bed :-/ since it was like 4 in da moring -.- !! lol i stayed up reading ur story coz it was amaaazinnng...i was laughing the whole tym xP and my mom came in my room almost a million times tell me t o shut up x-D
i abso lutely loved it,,it was so0o funny and great :D
cant wait to read the next chapter :)
i Love Nelliieee she reminds me so0o much of my self wen im hyper xD !!! haha fish finger loved dat xD !!!
anywayss UPDATE SOOON :D
me xAuthor's Response: haha, thank you. i stay up late into the night too.
thank you. i'm so happy that you like it.
your words inspire me ;D Report Review
Loved it :D
dooo update realy soon :P
xAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! i\\\'ll do my best.
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i loved this chapter (: !!!
it was good :)
xXxAuthor's Response: Yay :D glad you loved it and thank you so much.
Next chapter almost done :) Report Review
aww i wish mary and sirius would b together for once lol...loved it :)
i read it all in one day :D amazing story :)
:( sad dat shes going to die
but over all loved it ! :)
10/10Author's Response: Yay! This makes me very happy, which is impressive considering today I didn't finish school till 5 and spent all the time up to now (11.15) doing coursework in for tommorow! grr.
So glad you liked it and you read it all in one day :) Yay.
Agreed that it's really sad she has to die :(
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loved it :)
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! :]
Glad you loved it.
I'll hopefully update soon, you know, when the queue re-opens. :] Report Review
i like it so far :)
cant wait for the next chap
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im happy their together but i do hope austin and rachels are gonna b friends agen lol i like draco better too :D
:O he hasss to be in the next chappie =|
lol he has to lol 10/10 :)Author's Response: yes, yes of course, he'll be in the next chapter. I wont be able to live without him!! lol Report Review
yay =D lol
haha im happy their together :DAuthor's Response: me too!! :) Report Review
=D it was amazing :)Author's Response: And you are an amazing reviewer! Report Review
haha im in love with this story =D
xxAuthor's Response: And I love you for reviewing so much and totally making my day!! Report Review
haha lol love the "new invention" !!!
great story (=Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Report Review
a million lol !!Author's Response: lol. :D -hugs- Report Review
this story is just getting better and better :D
love it =D
10/10Author's Response: I'm so happy!!! -jumping up and down- Report Review
amazing chapter :)
good job and keep it going (:
10/10 i would rate it higher if i could xD
xxAuthor's Response: Aww. I'll definitely keep on writing because of the amount of enthusiasm you're showing! Report Review
lemme take a wild guess? a witch??
Awesome story :DAuthor's Response: lol. YES! :P Report Review
:) i love where this is going (:
10/10Author's Response: I'm glad you do so! Report Review
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