Reading Reviews From Member: Prongs and Lils
  
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Review #1, by Prongs and LilsThe Untold Story of James and Lily: Chapter 39 - Baby Making

6th March 2011:
AH!!! OMG! You have no idea how happy i am that you didnt give up on this story! It's been so long since u updated! You definitely did not disappoint! I love your writing style, I love your story, I love the perfection with which you describe things!! I love it i love it i love it!!! Hope everything is going great with you!! Keep writing!!!

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Review #2, by Prongs and LilsFailure By Design: Letters Again

15th January 2011:
awww! i really like this chapter! they are so freaking cute!! i'll definitely be looking out for the sequel! I think i like confessions of elizabeth goodbody. that's a good title! good luck with your other stories!!! keep writing! you do awesome work!
10/10

Author's Response: I actually went with Perks.. the other title seemed unoriginal haha. And thanks, I'm glad you like my stories :)

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Review #3, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Devil May Care

25th December 2010:
Good job! I think you did a great job writing Lucifer!! Its perfect how he seems to be right in what he says! Very persuasive!

And OMG James!!!

I like how your story is progressing!!

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Review #4, by Prongs and LilsHow to tame a Marauder: Changes in Camelot

19th December 2010:
hey! I disagree. I like this chapter too. You've done a good job in introducing everything. I'm really interested in your story, and I want to read on to see what happens next! I don't have a whole lot of time right now, but I do want to read on!!! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season! I will review/read your story whenever I find time!

Author's Response: Hi again!

I should probably explain that about a year ago, these early chapters were revised and consolidated, and the author notes are probably a relic from that time. (Note to self: When queue re-opens, go in there and change them.) So the commentary is about me trying to improve what was there, and I set myself very high standards. :)

Having said that, I'm glad I haven't lost you yet. I fully understand about time and if you happen not to come back I'll understand, but I appreciate your intention to. Thanks!

cheers, Mel


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Review #5, by Prongs and LilsHow to tame a Marauder: Return to Hogwarts

19th December 2010:
hey! it's your (not so secret) "secret santa!''

I like how you've introduced your characters in this first chapter! I think it had just enough information about your original characters, but you also were able to introduce the other characters that will be a part of your story! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story!!

Author's Response: Secret Santa? Wow, thanks! I'll be honest, I didn't expect my SS to attempt this story because it's so long, so thank you for giving it a go. And I'm the first to admit that it takes a while to get going so if you do find it dull I will understand.

Anyway, thanks so much for this review, I was so stoked when I saw my count had gone up. *beams* Yes there's a lot of introduction in this chapter but that does ease off as you go on, and I did put a lot of effort into characterisation so I'm glad you appreciated that. Thank you!

cheers, Mel


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Review #6, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Hard Thorns

7th December 2010:
D: this is so freaking sad! but it's awesomely written!

Author's Response: I never said it was gonna be all sunshine and daisies. :P

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Review #7, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Mysterious Ways

7th December 2010:
Oh no! Hagrid! OMG!! Have i told you that i love your story? Because i do :D Loving the way it flows and I'm really liking Scorpius. I mean he just seems so complex..I'm just absolutely immersed in your plot!

Author's Response: Fraid so. Someone had to bite it, I chose him. :/ I'm really glad that you are still enjoying the story. :D

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Review #8, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: What Is And What Should Never Have Been

7th December 2010:
:( that's really heartbreaking...You've gotten me to love your characters, they way you write them just makes them so relatable! *adds to favorites*

Author's Response: YAY! Favorites rule!! =D

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Review #9, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Who You Gonna Call?

6th December 2010:
I'm loving your humor and your amazing references to movies! I love movies and Star Wars is one of my favorites! Good job on the plot and the originality! I'm really enjoying it!!

Author's Response: Hehe, don't worry, there is alot more of those to come. Scorpius likes his movies. :P

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Review #10, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Stay Positive

6th December 2010:
LOL the ending was hilarious! I'm super excited to keep on reading and finding out what happens!!

Author's Response: Great! I'm glad you liked it. :D

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Review #11, by Prongs and LilsInevitable; It Had To Be You: Big News

6th December 2010:
awww! I think I like Drayde lol This was a very sweet chapter :D I like how you write their making out sessions lol It's very well written :D

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! And yay for their make-out sessions! Thanks SO MUCH for the review!

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Review #12, by Prongs and LilsThe Rising: Chosen

5th December 2010:
hey, I don't know if you remember me from the forums, but I replied to your help post on Lucifer and then I asked what your story was called so I could read it. So here I am! Reading and loving it! I'm excited to read on and see what's going to happen!

Author's Response: Great! And thanks very much for your help on the forum. It's easy to get stuck with a story like this so help is always appreciated. :D

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Review #13, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Not Strong Enough To Break

4th December 2010:
I loved it! Ha! I have indeed been converted to that dark side! I loved how well written this was! It was genuine and heartfelt and wonderful! I love your writing :D

Author's Response: Thank you Prongs and Lils!

You may be the only one of my H/G fans to successfully be a convert! Everyone else feels betrayed.

Anyway thank you for reviewing! I always love hearing from you.
~Meg


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Review #14, by Prongs and LilsOriginal Sin: Heart of Black

4th December 2010:
You did a good job writing the duel! I always have trouble writing them :D Keep on working on your story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm awful at writing duels as well. It's so hard to describe them, don't you think? Thanks so much for reviewing! :D

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Review #15, by Prongs and LilsOriginal Sin: Dark Angel

4th December 2010:
Well I'm liking your story! And Lucius can be pretty mean.. :D but, i noticed that the older students had classes with first years.. that's the only thing that I didn't really like lol Oh n I found a small typo.. towards the beginning, when Cissy introduces herself to Wilkes, she says "I'm Narcissa Malfoy" but you know her last name right now is Black :D just thought I'd point that out. lol Oh n why were you suspended from HPFF??

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, Lucius can be pretty mean at times. :P Oops, first years probably shouldn't be having classes with older students. I should try to edit that out. Omg, I totally need to edit the Malfoy part out. Narcissa is not married to Lucius right now. lol Um, I got suspended for talking about suicide and sexual stuff on my profile. :(

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Review #16, by Prongs and LilsOriginal Sin: Sleepwalker

4th December 2010:
I like the intrigue! Like what are the rules exactly? Is Cissy going to have to join up? like what's going on? lol yep I like your story :D

Author's Response: Glad you like the intrigue! Well...you'll see. You have to be invited. :) So glad you like it!

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Review #17, by Prongs and LilsOriginal Sin: Shame

4th December 2010:
hey! as promised, I'm reading your story! Well so far, I'm really interested! :D I think your story is flowing well. I liked the way you introduced your characters! :D

Author's Response: Hi! *waves* Thanks so much for reading my story! I appreciate it SO much! I hope you continue to read it. I'm looking forward to your next update as well. Btw, I've been temporarily suspended from HPFF, so that's why I haven't replied to you or anything yet. =/

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Review #18, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Sickle For Your Thoughts?

28th November 2010:
AH!!! They kissed! I was dying with anticipation for this to happen! and remember now this is the first fic i've actually stuck to thats Harry/Hermione! You did a wonderful job of writing the events leading up to this moment and the flow was just perfect! I cant wait for your next update!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will warn you there is more and more Harry/Hermione scenes so just be prepared. But I am excited that you happen to love the story. Thank you for all of your reviews. It's readers like you that make it incredibly exciting to write for!
~Meg


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Review #19, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Paris et L'amour

28th November 2010:
O.o love it! I really liked the way you wrote the end! I think it's been wonderfully written and tastefully done!

Author's Response: Tastefully done... why thank you. I'm trying to be very "tasteful" concerning the two's get together. I'm very careful with my word choices.
~Meg


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Review #20, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Interrogation of a Mancini

28th November 2010:
What is going on?! OMG I can't wait to find out what the information that Salvatore is! I can't wait to see what happens between Harry and Hermione and how Ron and Ginny are going to react! I mean I'm completely into your story!!! Love it!!

Author's Response: Again I laughed out loud with this. Haha. I totally forgot some of the crap I put in these chapters, but I do believe this is the one that is very mysterious! So yeah your first line is absolutely hilarious.

Thanks again! This is so exciting to watch you read through the story!
~Meg


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Review #21, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Pressing Encounters

28th November 2010:
I'm not really a huge Harry/Hermione shipper, but this scene was so well written, that I find myself drawn to it! I think as you said that writing Harry/Ginny sort of made you start rooting for them, me reading this has made me sort of root for Harry and Hermione. So kudos to you! :D love it!

Author's Response: Wow what an awesome compliment. Thanks!

Yay for rooting for Harmony!... I guess I should properly welcome you to the dark side! :)
~Meg


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Review #22, by Prongs and LilsFailure By Design: Jealousy (Part II)

28th November 2010:
WHAT?! OMG!! Mary did what? And then James did what?? You have to update this asap!!! by the way..i love your story :D

Author's Response: SURPRISE...
im sorry for all the drama, i had tooo.
thanks for reviewing and i'll update soon :)


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Review #23, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Dusk

28th November 2010:
:) i really love your story! Have I mentioned it before? I do.

Author's Response: Haha. Well thank you... again.
~Meg


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Review #24, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Lies

28th November 2010:
:( that's just heartbreaking... The more stories that I read with Harry in them, the more I'm starting to realize how much I care for Harry, I can take anyone else's pain but whenever Harry is hurt...he's just been through so much, that it doesn't seem fair for him to suffer more.. Props on how very well written it was tho. :) definitely one of my absolute favorite stories on here. And who the heck is "the client"? I'm definitely hooked. Great plot line, great characterizations, great writing!!!

Author's Response: Yeah I find it very hard to hurt Harry. I agree with you on that suffering thing. Man, that boy should never have to suffer again! I do love his version of heartache though. Harry's always tragically hurt, almost in a way that is like fate's cruel trick. His parents die and yet he hears his mother and father's voices when a dementor comes near him. Or he sees their ghosts shoot of Voldemort's wand during priori incantem (spelling?).

I don't know. I just love how Harry's pain is perpetually destined. The same goes with Ginny's break up with him. He finally is free and happy and wants to settle down, but cannot because his woman of choice is not yet a woman. His life is ironic.

Anyway thank you for all the compliments! I'm glad you're loving the plot line, characterizations, and writing in general!
~Meg

p.s. You'll find out the client soon enough!


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Review #25, by Prongs and LilsHave I Found You? Or Lost You?: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner-Part Two

27th November 2010:
omg I absolutely LOVE your story!!! I really really really do like it!! I'm completely excited about the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I can tell! I love hearing how you feel about it as you keep progressing through the chapters!
~Meg


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