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Review #1, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: A Temporary Fix

15th January 2016:
Please update soon!! I am so glad someone in Slytherin has now found out about Ted and Andromeda. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long! I'm currently working on the next chapter, so it should be up by the end of the week! I hope you keep reading and reviewing :)

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Review #2, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Teddy Talks

5th December 2015:
SO HAPPY THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED. It was so good and I love that it's building into a new type of tension. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for still reading! I know I've been taking forever to update, school has been overwhelming. Hope you read the next update as well :)

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Review #3, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Rabastan's Three Words, Featuring Ted Tonks Under An Invisibility Cloak

8th August 2015:
Loved this chapter!! The tension was almost unbearable, and the slow build up made it all the more enjoyable! It is true that the human heart in conflict with itself is the heart of a good story, and this has got that in heaps. Andromeda is both fearful and brave, Ted is both proud and worried and Rabastan is in love but exasperated.

I really cannot wait for the aftermath of the whole Rabastan relationship - I think he's actually a really interesting character and may be more conflicted about what he's doing than he lets on. I also can't wait for Andromeda to tell Marcy (or for Marcy to find out) what is going on. I really hope the outcome is as amazing as the build up, because I love the way the characters are evolving and they deserve a great conclusion (which I'm sure you will deliver).

I also like the way the whole story feels so claustrophobic, like they are all trapped in this small world of friends and acquaintances and everything has to remain a secret because if one person finds out, everyone will find out. The only thing I would say I would like to see is the actual power of characters like Rabastan and how deep they are getting into the duties of a death eater, but I suppose that it coming later.

Once again, great job and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review. I hope you keep reading :)

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Review #4, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: When In Doubt, Duel A Death Eater

6th April 2015:
AH! (That's me screaming by the way) That. was. awesome. I love how the tension finally bubbled over and broke. I've never imagined Ted and Andromeda like this before, as in the fic I wrote about them they were so much calmer (is that the word?), but this is such an AWESOME take on them that I love it. The only two things I would say is that I would love Andromeda to stand up for them more (but I'm sure that is coming) and I'm a little surprised the teacher didn't get more involved at the end. But I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!

Author's Response: YAY I'VE MISSED YOUR REVIEWS AND YOUR STORIES! Yeah this chapter is all over the place. When I don't know what to write I go all out for chaos haha. The teacher is a bit of a mess. I think I'll go more into that in the future hopefully. Thanks for reading :)

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Review #5, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Dead Bride

11th October 2014:
YES FINALLY!! I just want to commend you for writing an absolutely amazing Ted/Andromeda fic. It's just got better and better and better. The way you've subtly built the tension is superb, and I know I commented in one of the early chapters that some of the characters seemed a bit cardboard-cut-out but now none of them are. You've fleshed them out, you've given them depth. Hell, you've even given the best friends subplots, something that rarely ever happens in stories like this.

I'm just so intrigued with what is going to happen now - are Ted and Andromeda going to keep it secret? Are they going to be proud? Is she going to tell Rabastan to go away? Is Rabastan going to get angry? How are her sisters and friends going to take it? There are so many questions that are going round and round my head, and really that is just the magic of your story. BRAVO!

Author's Response: Yay I'm so glad you think my characters have developed! Honestly one of my writing flaws is I focus too much on the main characters that the rest of the characters sort of seem there. I really tried to develop all of them this time.

Sorry I took so long to reply, but the next chapter is in the queue. All of your questions shall be answered, I HOPE!! Thanks a lot for reviewing! :))

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Review #6, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Selfish And Somber

11th October 2014:
I think it was Bella. I just wanna put that out there !

Author's Response: Hahaha good guess, but you shall find out soon :))

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Review #7, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Duels Are Not For The Distracted

11th October 2014:
OMG I can barely type I need to keep reading! This has gotten so good, I love the way you are slowly building up the tension!!

Author's Response: Yay thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy the next few chaps :))

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Review #8, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: When Bella Writes

11th October 2014:
AH! I thought they were definitely going to kiss this time! Awesome chapter, that's all I can say!

Author's Response: Almost there, not quite there yet aha. Thank you :))

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Review #9, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Don't Let Anyone Read Your Journal, Except For The Boy You Like

11th October 2014:
ARGH!!! I thought they were going to kiss. Oh well! Hopefully after they get Jamison and Marcy together! I still can't help but feel a little sorry for Rabastan...

Author's Response: Haha I keep doing this, I keep making everyone think they're going to kiss and then they don't. Sorry about my torture methods lol :))

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Review #10, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Hide The Bruises, Hide The Secrets

11th October 2014:
BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT. Best chapter yet! Ted's soft side was revealed, Andromeda stood up for herself, Miss Faye got more involved - BRILLIANT.

I'm now really confused whether I'm meant to like Rabastan or not, but still that's Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Haha YAY! Honestly, Rabastan is a character that I have mixed feelings about, so that's how I try to write him. I guess it's working since a few people have already mentioned they also have mixed feelings haha. Thanks! :))

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Review #11, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Cake Makes Way For Conversation

11th October 2014:
Really great chapter, especially the banter between Ted and Andromeda. I worry that Ted crosses the banter/nasty line a little sometimes, and I think Andromeda is justifiably annoyed. I think the only thing you sometime need to improve on is sometimes your sentences are a little clunky because they're a bit long. Others are beautifully written though, so I just think you should check your long sentences sometimes.

Other than that, brilliant! I'm really into this story now!

Author's Response: Yeah Ted definitely likes to spark arguments, probably because that's how he gets to her. Thank you for the feedback :))

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Review #12, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: The Art Of Cheating

11th October 2014:
LOVED this chapter best one yet! I love that Rabastan is three dimensional and that Ted and Andromeda are talking to each other. I have to say I love the trickster side of Ted! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I love this chapter too, it was fun to write :))

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Review #13, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: Strangers With Cigarettes

11th October 2014:
I love that Ted is snarky. It's an interesting spin on the character. I also like that she hasn't really noticed him yet. But I suppose there's so much other stuff she's worrying about! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah Ted is definitely a little different in my story than how he's usually written. I'm excited for him to develop. Thanks!

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Review #14, by katti4493Defiant Blood, Defiant Love: A Pettigrew Party

11th October 2014:
Good start! I really liked it! Some of the characters seemed a little cut-out-villain, but I'm sure you'll develop them in later chapters! I love that Andromeda is so brave!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hope you keep reading :))

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Review #15, by katti4493Ambrosia: he could be sleeping

23rd March 2013:
Wow, intriguing start, will definitely keep reading!

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Review #16, by katti4493Wicked Lies, Wicked Love: And Just When You Thought You Knew Everything

11th December 2012:
Da dun dah! Oooh, Dark Magic is involved! I can't WAIT to read what Cissy's opinion of dark magic is. Obviously she has a sister like Bella who is utterly nuts and is totally into dark magic, and later we know Cissy sort of condones it. I love how you are drawing Lucius and Cissy further and further apart, and I have this strange feeling that at some point she is going to have to chose between her friends and him - and we know which she chooses.

Sorry, I'm rambling. Anyway, another awesome chapter and I love the mystery surrounding Drew; still don't know whether to trust him or not! I'll leave another review on the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I love that we both share such an affinity for the Black sisters! I think they are an amazing family and there is so much to learn and analyze about them. Next chapter should be up soon. I look forward to your next review xoxo

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Review #17, by katti4493The Hoppening Dare: The Hoppening Dare

28th November 2012:
Hahaha, certainly a novel story for Easter! Loved how different it was, and you even got Scorpius in there as was which was amazing! James is EVIL hahaha! I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. You are the first to notice that I made the one shot a Rose and Scorpius, yet I saved him for a surprise. I figured in a one shot, the writer can do whatever they want, and I wanted to see some audience participation. It's just , never done. I'm so happy you got a kick out of it. I keep thinking I should do something for Christmas :)

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Review #18, by katti4493Wicked Lies, Wicked Love: Epiphany, Epiphany, Epiphany

9th November 2012:
Hahaha, good chapter! It's nice to see some interaction between Narcissa and her friends! The only thing I would say is there is maybe a little issue with your narration. You seem to switch from third person to the omnipresent narrator which was a little jarring at the beginning of the chapter.

The only other (tiny, tiny thing, I'm being really picky now!) when the girls go to "wash up", they go and do their hair and make up. In Britain, that would only be used to describe washing the dishes, so I'd probably say something like "going to the loo" so we could all hang out and do our hair and stuff!!! Other than that another awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Oh dear, thank you so much for that bit of feedback! I'm so used to writing in first person that sometimes I completely mix it all up with third person. I will definitely give that a look, and same with the "wash up" bit.

I hope you keep reading and I look forward to more of your reviews! Next chapter should be up within a week or so xx

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Review #19, by katti4493Wicked Lies, Wicked Love: From Games To War

9th November 2012:
Owch! That was kind of personal, and very vindictive and sneaky of Lucius. Well, I suppose, that is why he is a Slytherin! It was also good to see a side to Narcissa where she wasn't always so sure of herself, but I suppose she's got a great revenge coming up!!!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, Lucius is quite the fellow isn't he? Just wait till you read about Narcissa's comeback! It should be coming up in the next few chapters! Thanks a bunches! xx

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Review #20, by katti4493Wicked Lies, Wicked Love: Detention With The Beast

9th November 2012:
Oooohh, what's this about Drew? Maybe he's not a halfblood but a Muggleborn? Other than that, I can't really think what else it could be.

Best chapter so far, it has really racketed up the tension and the intrigue, can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: I love your reviews! They really make me feel good about my writing! I'm glad you find it suspenseful! Thank you so so much!! xx

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Review #21, by katti4493Wicked Lies, Wicked Love: Zebra Angst

9th November 2012:
Really liked this chapter, and I loved the whole Lucius v Narcissa thing. I think its great how you've moved away from the normal thing of having Lucius and Narcissa hopelessly in love from the word go.

Only one small thing. In introducing Nixie, Vesper and Drew all in the same chapter, there was a lot of description pertaining to these characters, and it slowed down the pace at the beginning of the chapter. I think I would have waited and introduced Drew in the next chapter. Other than that one small thing, it was great!

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! My favorite love stories are the ones in which two people go from hating each other to loving each other. I hope you keep reading and leaving great reviews, they're very encouraging :)

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Review #22, by katti4493I Love You, Tom Riddle: The Problem With Stupidity

30th August 2012:
Good chapter, loved Tom just walking past and basically saying "I've seen someone die." The relationship between Sophie and her friends is really good: I'd love to see if that is going to be shaken up a bit!

Only thing is the chapters are quite widely spaced apart and you might want to edit that. Other than that, great again!

Author's Response: Yeah...Tom's a funny one :) Ah, you will see! What's being sixteen without friend drama? I've been working on that. I realized they need a bit information and be a little less choppy. I wrote the first two chapters months ago and started working again so they are a bit sketchy. The next chapters will be longer and flow better. I'll upload it as soon as my new story is validated :)
Thanks again :)

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Review #23, by katti4493I Love You, Tom Riddle: All My Friends

30th August 2012:
Again, another really good chapter. In my stories I'm so rubbish at writing best friends, they always come across as lame, uncaring or whiny. You, however, made it seem like Sophie had some really good friends and the banter was perfect.

I also really liked how you didn't have her swoon over Tom straight away, and she is a little bit aloof. You've also established her character really well.

Couple of typos (died instead of dyed) but everyone does that! And I'm really nit picking now but I'm guessing you are American (I could be wrong!) because of the phrase "meat-headed jock". It's not a very English saying! Other than that, great again!

Author's Response: Oh good, I was worried they just seemed awkward and unrealistic. Don't worry, I'm pretty bad at it too. I started another fic on here and my characters may be a little robotic if that makes sense? Yeah, Sophie is not a fan girl that's for sure. You're good, I am American, Mid-West in fact. I come with the yeah, you bets, and you knows? I didn't know people didn't say that. What would be an appropriate phrase that you recommend for future reference?
Thanks again :)

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Review #24, by katti4493I Love You, Tom Riddle: Chapter 1

30th August 2012:
Really interesting idea. I LOVE Tom Riddle stories, and I love how in this chapter you pull the reader right in with your "declaration of intent" for this story (i.e. explaining how Tom was broken by Sophie.)

I also really liked how your language was very colloquial and portrayed your character's background. There were a couple of words that I think (though am not sure) should have capital letters at the beginning such as Muggle and Muggle-born, but other than that your style flowed really well.

The only thing I would say (because there has got to be some constructive criticism!) is the paragraph where you explain how his hatred of Muggles extended from Sophie breaking his heart sounds a little implausible in relation to canon events, but it definitely could be a contributing factor. I think it would be really interesting if you explored other reasons that Tom went bad alongside Sophie's story to make him a really well rounded character.

Other than that, I thought it was a great start and I hope you keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I thought it would possibly be a cool spin off Riddle. OH, you are right. Muggle is capitalized. Missed that. Thanks, I'll change that as soon as I can. There are definitely other reasons to his hatred. Sophie doesn't know, of course, because not many knew about Tom's past, so she blames herself. I plan on including more. I have to change a few things, however. Because Tom is popular in this story and in J.K.'s he just had followers. You know? But I'll put in canon events, no worries ;)
Thanks for the review :)

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Review #25, by katti4493Just Rose: Disillusioned

26th August 2012:
Grr...Molly. I actually think Rose is in the right this time, and I do think it seems to be gang up on Rose week. Bless Scorpius though, he's being really sweet and a true friend to her.

Love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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