I love this chapter so much, it's amazing. I read it three times. lol
I hate Daisy so much she's such a cow. i feel so sorry for Rose. I love Dominique and Laura.
Your new banner is awesome.
Please get the next chapter up soon, I can't wait for it.
Amazing banner. 10/10 Report Review
That was frickin awesome :D
I can't believe you had that planned all along.
That was so amazing, i love this story.
Well done.Author's Response: It was SO hard not spilling the beans or leaving too many hints . . . I jsut wanted to tell you guys SO badly. Report Review
Omg... This is amazing
Poor Sirius, I hate Peter so much.
I actually cried reading this chapter.
You are an amazing writer. I hope i get as good as you.
well done on an amazingly awesome story.Author's Response: Wow. Well, thank you for those really nice compliments. They made me smile. :D
And I'm sure you're a fantastic writer already! :D Report Review
That chapter was amazing, can't believe della forgot james' birthday. I loved the banner idea, that was just amazing. Poor della though. I hate Matt, he is so cheesey, della and james should be together.
I love this story it's amazing, try and the next chapter up soon please.Author's Response: He is a bit cheesy isn't he, i'm a little sad you hate him, but ah well i guess he isn't for everyone. I am glad you liked the banner, it was hard for me to choose how that secret would be reveled and i think i picked the best way. Anyways thanks for the review and keep on reading! Report Review
Omg You are an amazing writer.
I have just sat and read this whole story.
I cried at the end and that doesn't ever happen.
This story is amazing and I. love it.
Well done on a fantastic storyAuthor's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm so glad you liked it. It means a lot to me to hear that. I loved writing this story, and there's no better reward than hearing others liked it too. Thanks for making my day ^_^
CJ Report Review
I love your story. It's very well written.
I love the James-Mollie-Fred twist and Katie being horrible.
From LucyyAuthor's Response: Hey! I'm glad you like it :D
And like the James/Mollie/Fred twist
xx Report Review
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