Excellent stuff, it's good to look into Peter's mind.Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D Report Review
What a beautiful story.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I found this after clicking the 'random story' button. What an excellent follow on from the end of Deathly Hallows. I liked that Hermione wasn't ready to sleep on her own yet, and that Madam Pince was mending the library books. Excellent stuff. Report Review
Well written, a good story about the black sisters. I can see this happening. Report Review
What a cute little chapter. Report Review
A lovely story, it's always great to read Teddy/Vic stuff.Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :) Report Review
What a cool idea for a story. I always enjoy Weasley-related pieces.
I liked how you made it clear what their personalities were like from the very start; Percy reading, Charlie loving animals, Fred getting up to mischief-making etc. It's wonderful to look on them as little children, knowing what they are going to become.
You also showed the difference in age very well - you can tell what age they are by the way they think and act. Your writing style is lovely.
My favourite chapter was probably Percy's one - he was so adorable bossing his younger siblings around, and making the cake. In George's chapter, thought it was cute how he described armour as 'robes made of metal.' Awwh!
All in all, a great story, very enjoyable. Congratulations on the Dobby.
GinnyWeasley_13Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! The Weasleys, in my opinion, have such distinct personalities, and they need to be shown. :3 I am very relieved to hear there's a clear difference, too -- that's something I struggle with sometimes, having no kids of my own (bit soon for me!), so it's very much appreciated.
Percy's my favorite, as well. :D And don't you think that's how he'd see them? I know there are suits of armour in Hogwarts, but he is only three... It was fun to write, anyway. :) Thank you very much, and thanks for the congratulations, too! Report Review
What a beautiful story. You wrote it so well...I can't really put it into words. Ron and Hermione are so great together.Author's Response: Thank you so much- I really love this ship! ~writergirl8 Report Review
I like your idea for the story I must say. I think it'll be interesting to read about Ginny and co from an outsiders perspective. Report Review
i liked the fact that hermione knew what was going on all along with the pizza. very well written, perfect characterisation (is that a word? - well it is now)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Your story has so far been excellent. What a lovely idea, seeing Teddy grow up from Harry's eyes. Some parts of it have brought tears to my eyes. I loved the realness of grief in the first few chapters, as hard as it was to read, seeing our beloved characters like that. I thought Harry getting Teddy a toy wolf was a beautiful idea.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it! I really liked the idea of the toy wolf too, that's why I wrote it! I just thought it was a real cute idea and a really good way to introduce wolves to Teddy as good things. New chapter is in the queue now, so keep an eye out, it should be up soon. Thanks again for the review, much appreciated! :) Report Review
This was very good. You had Harry and Ginny both in character - it actually felt like it was them talking, rather than some silly fandom characters. I liked your ideas of the letters...it's interesting to see things from Ginny's POV.Author's Response: thank you so much for saying all this really awesome stuff! It sounded like them talking? wow thats basically the greatest compliment ever, being able to even somewhat minutely imitate the genius that is JK rowling is like... really awesome.
jackie Report Review
Just lovely. I liked the fact the George had already put dibs on the name Fred, meaning Harry and Ginny weren't allowed to use it.Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it seemed like something George would do :) thanks for reading & reviewing! Report Review
Very nice, a good introduction. I saw no flaws in your writing. The way Voldy addressed everyone was completely in character.Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you like the rest of the story as much as you liked the first chapter. Report Review
I'm really loving your Snow Patrol project :) What a cool idea. The writing for this fic was gorgeous.Author's Response: I'm so glad! It was easily one of the most fun projects I've ever taken on. Thank you so much! Report Review
What a gem. This story is lovely. I really like the way you wrote it - your writing is beautiful. Both of them were completely in character, and I liked the little bit of history about the t-shirt Harry gave to Ginny.Author's Response: Awh, thank you! I really had a wonderful time writing this one. :D Report Review
Well written; I can definitely imagine something like this taking place. It seems completely in-character for Lucius to sneak out and see another woman, and also completely in-character for Narcissa to risk everything for her baby. This story makes the reader understand Narcissa well.Author's Response: thank you so much for reading and for your sweet review. =) Glad you liked it. Report Review
The last part of this brought tears to my eyes.Author's Response: I am deeply honored to have evoked such emotion in you -- thank you for this. Report Review
This was soo sad. They're all unaware of what's to come. You wrote this well - though short, I thought it worked well.Author's Response: Thank you =D Report Review
What a beautiful story. Several parts almost brought tears to my eyes. It was interesting to read from Arthur's POV, because he's a character that we never get much insight into - he's always on the sidelines. I think the story is the perfect length, and your writing was gorgeous.Author's Response: Oh. Wow. I don't know what to say! Thanks! :) x Report Review
Very amusing. I really liked the way you wrote this - one paragraph Harry/one paragraph Ginny. Their denying at the start was very funny.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm super happy you liked it, I thought it would be more of a twist. I'm glad you liked my humor.
Lizzie Report Review
This was fantastic. You worked so well with description; it really lit up the story and made you feel you were there. I think you've got Rowena and Helga perfect - the way they would have acted and talked. I liked the name you gave to the house-elf too.Author's Response: Thank you very much, GinnyWeasley_13! I'm glad you felt like you were there and that I did justice to Rowling's characters, Rowena and Helga. I appreciate your review and your kind words :)
NRB Report Review
I liked this - it was a slightly different view on the whole idea, being inside the adult's minds rather than the next gen kids. It was good to read from two different POVs.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I almost didn't write in both POVs, but I'm glad I did.
Rachel Report Review
"Teddy bear, please eat your peas. Look how delicious and ... green they look," - hahah! That sounds like something I'd say!
I particularly enjoyed the reference to Romilda Vane having a column - for some reason, the idea of Romilda Vane having a job like that just fits.
I've really enjoyed your writing - everything flows very well. Please update soon :)
GinnyWeasley_13Author's Response: I will update soon, I promise! I went from 4 reviews to 16 and the responses are fantastic! :) Report Review
Another excellent chapter. I'm loving this story.Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
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