This story was a lot of fun to read! :D I loved all of the characters and I'm glad to see Rita got what she deserved. Congrats on finishing the story and I hope to see more from you! Thank you for keeping me hooked till the end! :D--NadiaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much. I was toying with letting Rita off the hook but I couldn't do it. I just think that Harry Ron and Hermione deserve a bit of peace - Ginny too.
It's so good to hear I kept you hooked. Thank you for reading and thanks for reviewing
This is so sad... the Weasleys must have gone through torture seeing Harry and Ginny like that. I hope they wake up soon.
On a lighter note, the descriptions and details you add in are very well written. I loved the Egyptian magic and how the curse was transferred to Harry. It seemed so realistic! And of course, I always had a feeling that the Ancient Egyptians who built the pyramids were wizards! Report Review
This was a really realistic and believable chapter written about the Dursleys! If I didn't know better, I would have thought this was a part of the books. Vernon, Dudley's and Petunia's characterization was spot on, and honestly, this is exactly how I pictured Harry's return to Privet Drive would be like. Kudos to you! :DAuthor's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you! The Dursleys were so much fun to write about! I'm glad you feel I captured them so well! :) Report Review
Heya! Good job, Rish! Keep the goods comin'!
-NadiaAuthor's Response: Will do! Thank you! hey that rhymes.hmm. lol thanks for reviewing Report Review
Hey Rish!!! Great job, girl!! Keep it up!!! I give it an ELEVEN, lol.
--NadiaAuthor's Response: Haha! Thanksies! Huggles! Report Review
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