Hi! Sorry it took me forever to get over and check out your stories, but I saw this one first and figured I would throw in a quick review! I really like it, Rory is funny and the marauders as well! I'm looking forward to whatever you write next! Great chapter!Author's Response: Hey, thank you for reviewing! The next chapter for my other story is currently being validated but I'm glad you checked this one out! So again, thank you and hope to keep hearing from you! Report Review
So, I've been reading your story for a while now, although this is my first time reviewing (sorry it took me so long!)
I just want to say that I think your story is excellent, one of the best that I've ever read. It seems so realistic and your depiction of Sirius is one of my favorites, he's still goofy and childish at times but not all the time.
I love how your dragged the relationship out, made them falling for each other not instantaneous. Not to mention it keeps me on the end of seat every chapter wondering if it's finally going to happen! It's fantastic.
But this chapter just absolutely blew my mind!! I expected for the two of them to possible share a moment, like they have before, but for it be interrupted like it usually is. But it wasn't! Sirius finally forced himself to say something and the way he said it... I don't think you could have done it more perfectly. It was so genuine and so touching I couldn't stop myself from smiling! And Laura's reaction was nothing short of adorable haha, how she seemed to be thinking the whole thing couldn't be real, how it was just a dream!
So, I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter (don't worry, I know you have time limit, I'm not asking you to update right away haha) but I just wanted to tell you that you've done an excellent job with your story and you most definitely deserved the Dobby award you received!!Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for the review! I do love getting reviews from new people ... actually, I love all reviews, but you know what I mean. :D
And wow, what a lovely review. Thank you! I'm so pleased that you like my version of Sirius - I put a lot of work into him so it's just fantastic that it's paying off. And I'm also pleased that you like the speed of the main relationship - like a lot of people I was sick of the barely-know-each-other-to-snogging-in-three-chapter stories that are out there, so I wanted something a bit different.
As for this chapter, well it seems to be a rather popular one! If I'd known I was going to get this many reviews I wouldn't have posted it just before going away for the weekend - I'm very behind on my review responses. But better late than never, I say. :D But yes, a lot of people thought there would be yet another interruption, though I rather think that James would have hexed anyone who went near them. And from the sounds of things not too mushy either, which is also a good thing. I love fluff, but it can be laid on a bit thick sometimes.
Next chapter should be up in the next few days, so hopefully that will live up to expectations.
cheers, Mel Report Review
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