This is really good you should write about the events that got Lily and Sirius. I would enjoy seeing what you come up with:)

Author's Response: Yes, I was thinking about doing that. I think I might give it a go if I get the chance. Thanks for your review! :)

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Thanx for updateing so soon:). I reallylove youre story its so sad about alices parents:(. Its good that she and frank was there to show her that he is going to be there for her. Keep the Lily and James action going i lke how there relying on eachother and Liy seeing how much of a great guy James is. Well anyways have fun on youre trip and if you a chance to write that would be cool if you dont thats ok just dont keep me waiting to long lol ;). HAVE FUN!

Author's Response: i am so glad you liked it!!! it is sad about alice's parents but unfortunately not everyone can have a fairy tale ending :(
thanks for reviewing!!
L

PS
btw i had a blast on my trip so thanks!!

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this chapter is so good and sad iam crying no joke i love youre story

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry - didn't want anyone to cry over it. If you keep reading, you'll see why it had to happen. I'm really glad you like it so far!!!

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I love your story when are you going to update? this was the first story i read on this site and i fell in love with it good job:)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: awww, i'm happy to hear i was your first story here on HPFF. i will do my best to update soon, but i am stuck in BAR prep for most of the summer and my life just keeps getting crazier. as soon as things settle done a notch or two, i'll find the time to write. have no worries as i do intend to finish my story. ;)

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i love your story its amazing when will you update? Whats going to happen they go with the order to investigate?! please update as soon as you can

Author's Response: Chapter 5 is waiting, so it will update within a week! Yay! I'm glad you are enjoying the story, I love writing it.

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i cant wait for some hayle sirius action :)!

Author's Response: thanks!!... :D

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OMG this is awesome and sad at the same time please update

Author's Response: I'll try to update soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
-love-
LM

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This is so awesome and freaky in so many levels i love it! Hows out to get lily? is it viviane? PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU GET A CHANCE

Author's Response: Ohh, I'm glad you think it's freaky *heehee* You'll have to keep reading to find out ;] You'll se ;] Thanks for reading and reviewing!

--Tomi

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sirius likes aria that much is obvious iam anxious to see how you set them up because she likes him back. but is lily going to go out with amos? Please update as soon as you get a chance please

Author's Response: Is it obvious? You never know whats going to happen when Sirius Black is involved ;)

Chapter nine is done - I'm just waiting for it to be edited by my beta. Hopefully it wont be too long for you.

Thanks for the review!

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I love youre story its so awesome PLEASE UPTDATE as soon as you get a chance

Author's Response: I will try to update as soon as I can. Thank you for reading.

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What did telly hear james tell lily? PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!! you have an awesom story :D

Author's Response: Dear summerluv12,
Thank you so much! An update will come soon I promise;)
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom

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i love your story please update as soon as possible

Author's Response: thanks...and i'll probably stop writing until next week because of easter holidays...right now i'm swamped with school work so just be patient!!

~lauren};].


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Update soon i cant wait to see what happens

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i love your story when are you going to update

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i like how the girls are outing the maruders please update ASAP

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