Meep! That is amazing Em. Interesting use of Sparkle, seriously do you name all your pens? I know that you've named one of Eml's after one of Kevin's kids in Up.
Anyways keep going I'm in love with your story.

Author's Response: :D
Yes. All of them. That is Glitter, or maybe sparkle... I can't remember :S
YAY! Thanks!!

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That's so freaky good! How do you manage to write such amazing things in the middle of the night? Anyway please write more because I love it!
-Char

Author's Response: Thankyou so much dear! I'm in the middle of my assignments but I intend on doing more during the holidays or that slump in the next few weeks
-Em

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Hey it's Char! I love what you have done so far. Nat sounds brilliant and the perfect match for Sirius who no matter where you read about him you have to love. Please keep writing soon, I'll be waiting.

Author's Response: Hello Dear! Thankyou so much. A REVIEW! I'm on it!
Emk xx

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(If the thingy could do 9.5 I would put that but it can’t).
Really excellent story, I especially liked the line "Not just plain old 'I just lost my cat' confused. But 'I just left the bathroom, so where the hell are my pants?' confused." That one really made me laugh. Also interesting plot, it nice to see a story that’s a bit out of the box, but it was good because it wasn't so out there that your just like ‘what on earth’, so like I said it's really good. I also liked how you used the pace in your story. It’s also kind of addictive, (in a good way) like one of those stories that you sit down and you say “ I just read for 20 minutes “ or something like that and then when you next look up it’s 1am or something like that, so that’s really good as well, it’s not often that a story does that. These are some of the things that set it apart from the rest . The reason that it didn’t get 10/10 is well … patience is a virtue that I do not have. I’m not saying that I don’t like long story’s, quite the opposite, but the way the 2 protagonists, keep almost kissing, but don’t, (it sound really weird when you say it like that, but hopefully you know what I mean) kind of annoys me. Apart from that a riveting read, keep up the good work.

( I just went preview and whenever I put a speech mark or something like that" or this' it went really funny so if it does that again that's what they were)

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review :)

I'm happy that my prose could make you laugh :) It even suprises me sometimes, becuase my humor in real life is truly sooo far out there it isn't even funny and people view me as a raving (albeit undeniably attractive) lunatic. It's quite amusing.But I'm happy the writing pleases you.

As far as not getting the 10/10, i would say that I was sad, but frankly, I'm not : ) I've been pondering them kissing eachother, several times... But if they did kiss, then we wouldn't have all of this amazing buildup, would we? And then we wouldn't be dying for them to kiss. Trust me, i want them to kiss too, and frankly, don't understand why they don't just duke it out already, however, as I write them, they keep saying 'no' to me. Perhaps you'll understand? It's almost odd, but it just doesn't work out. I'll settle for a 9.5. The kiss will come soon (hopefully), so we'll see where it goes. I don't see this story progressing more than 50 chapters. If I'm brillaint, maybe it'll get there. But I need to stop writing you a novel and get to working on that update, shall I? haha. Thanks again, so much, for stopping by. I'm so happy you're enjoying it. There should be an update up (by the latest) next saturday.

Sincerely,

Greta

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