I thought I should review this story considering I'm about to be the third person to favorite it and it deserves at the very least, one review.
I love reading stories about Merope and Tom Riddle. I've always found their story and that timeline the most fascinating and there are hardly any stories writtin about it. I don't know if you're continuing this story but I really hope you do. It already is an interesting read and seems to have alot of potential and I would love to read more of it.Author's Response: Well thank you for the review :P I greatly appreciate it!
I have every intention of continuing this story, until it goes up as abandoned I'm always planning to continue it :D I'll try and update soon! Thank you again for the review.
-Sarah Report Review
I really need to know what's up with James. He's always been my favorite character and I really hope we'll see a bit of the old playful James again. For chapters now I have been waiting to see what's going on with him and I'm crossing my fingers for terminal illness. I love to see my favorite characters suffer and that seems like a pretty good reason. He's acting like a jerk, sure, but everyone has their jerk moments and I honestly believe he's the most interesting character to read about because he's looked at a little two dimensional at the beginning and you never get inside his head. I think that's why alot of people cross him off as a jerk right away, but if you think of all those times where Rose has done selfish things and the only reason stopping someone from hating her is that fact you see into her head. But his attitude is obviously steaming from something and I think he didn't go to Al's because he was afriad he'd make it worse. I just hope it's got nothing to do with Laura and that the reason is a damn good one.
Also, I find it hard to believe that the judge would side with the father. Custody cases almost always side with the mother, unless she has some sort of serious problem. And due to the fact the father's family are Malfoy's and Rose is related to Harry Potter I think that almost guaranteed her win.
I've never written a reveiw before, so I'm blabbering. I don't hate Daisy(Shocking!) Yes, she's done some unpleasent things but the main reason people hate her is because she is with Scorpious. I mean, people hated her long before this whole cusdoty thing was started. Moving on to Rose, it really seems like she's maturing, I really like that. And what happened to Al and Jenny was horribly sad, I've known quite a few people who've miscarried and it's always a heartbreaking time. My really, only wish for this amazing story is that James can redeem himself and I really hope he's there for Al. And goes there on his own. Al needs his brother. Also,(I just can't stop) I still think Scorpious married Daisy for some reason other than love and their both aware of it. As for Rose and Scorpious? I once thought they were going to end up together but I'm not so sure anymore. I think they may just end up as good friends. Also, How long is this story going to be?
P.S. Sorry, for my weird obsession with James. Lol. Report Review
Wow...seriously, I don't think I have ever been this addicted to a story before. The story is BRILLIANT!!! I love every aspect of it. The humor, the drama, the romance, or more like the upcoming romance, and seriously, I don't think I have ever read a less romantic kiss. Or a more perfect one, for that matter. The kiss, in my opinion, was perfect. There was no romance in it at all and I think it was brilliant for their first kiss, completely unfeeling, yet desperate and angry at the same time. I have absolutely know idea if I am making any sense, but whatever! I have been reading this story for a while now, and I thought it would be only fair if I finally reviewed. So that was it! Sorry about my horrible rambling review. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens.Author's Response: Aaw thank you so much. I probably don't deserve your compliments anymore seeing as how i havent updated is AGES but thank you anyway. I felt a little guilty before for not giving my readers a more romantic first kiss but im so glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much for coming back and reviewing!!! i really really appreciate it. I know i shouldnt promise anything but i'll update very soon. Thanks again :D Report Review
Wow...seriously, that was brilliant. I loved how you characterized Luna and Draco. Beautiful, really beautiful. Instant favorite.Author's Response: Thankyou so much!
I'm just glad that you reviewed, that's what makes me reallly happy :)
Thankyou for reviewing,
Jess Xx Report Review
Aww..I want to give Hugo a hug. I really feel for his character. Anyway, great job. I can't wait to see what happens.Author's Response: That's so funny! SO many people have been saying the same thing! About feeling for Hugo and wanting to give him a hug! Its interesting that I am drawing the same kind of feelings from different people. Thanks for the review! You rock! Report Review
This is the most hilarious story I have ever read. Report Review
I'm really, really liking this story. It's completely original and I like how you've made Hermione's character, I think it's really realistic. But I do hope that Hermione can understand that there are losses of good people on both sides of war no matter what the war is. Then again I am a very GO SLYTHERIN! sort of person so maybe I always support them. Anyway, great story I'm really interested to see where the story will go and how all the Draco/Hermione stuff will happen.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you pointed that out, but in response I think that perhaps Hermione doesn't quite understand. At the time she's being a bit narrow-minded and focusing only on the losses she and those around her have suffered, and she's not really thinking about what people like Draco may have gone through. Report Review
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