nice story and nice written
it kind of reminds me of 'Hangover' ^^
Malfoy is just great, and Rose a little bit aggressive!
James is just as idiotic as I like him and I wonder where Al is! :D
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*wiping tear away*
how sweet! my heart aches for a guy like Scorpius! ;)
This story is so gorgeous!
And in the end I really thought the party should be something like a 'good-bye-I-love-you-but-I've-to-marry-this-girl~show-me-that-you-don't-hate-me-although-party'
And then this one sentence!
>They will be married in August.<
I was SO happy!
The only thing I missed was the ring! It would be gorgeous if he would have asked her!
maybe with a sentence like: "Do you want to celebrate you own engagement party?" or so! :D
but... now it isn't in this one-shot... would you do me the favor and write a second?
I would just LOVE to read it!
BellBellAuthor's Response: Scorpius, Scorpius... well, it turns out that he can be as obstinate as Draco. :D
You've no idea how happy your review made me. Especially what you thought of the party. :D as for the ring... okay, let me explain.
See, I thought it would have been so much more like a fairytale if the ending was THAT happy. And as I didn't think the first parts of the story were fairytale-like, I didn't proceed with that.
But I'll considering your request to write a second. :D Report Review
Oh my gosh!
hang on a sec, I'm just going to kill Lucius...
that f* bastard!
that's so unfair!
but you've written it so gorgeous!
it's so full of Scorpius' helpless attempts to help Rose, his hate for his grandfather and his wish to die instead of her!
uh... I think I'm going to cry now xD
BellBellAuthor's Response: Haha! Go Bell, kill Lucius!
Thank you so much! Wish me luck!
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oh my gosh!
may I beat him up!?
what the fucking helly hell? why! please, tell my why is he doing such a stupid brainless idiotic thing?
does he not see what rose feels for him?
uh. although he knows about the thing in the train he never said something!
uhhh... yes I'm freaking out!
ok... just calm down bell just calm down...
*takes deep breath*
ok I'm recovered.
well at first: sorry for writhing only one comment, but the story is so gorgeous I just couldn't stop reading, so I just skipped the commentate part and red on!
and second: sorry for my bad english xD I really hope you can understand what I'm writing xD
YOUR STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME!
although I'm near killing Scorp for that stupid idea of telling rose to go to "save" her. arg!
but well that's what good stories are doing, taking you with them.
and one last thing: I love Albus! I don't know, but he's just so sweet and funny and his speech was really cute! and I may think that after this chapter I will not kill Scorpius... I only want to beat him up! :D
so please, please, please write on!
PS: sorry again for my english :DAuthor's Response: Your english is lovely, I understood it all. I know, Scorpius is a bit of a pain. But, if you've had any encounters with the male gender, particularly of the teenage persuasion, you know they're ALL pains. Keep reading, don't give up hope. And thank you so much for reviewing! I'm working on the next chapter, I'll get it posted by the end of this week, pinky promise. :] Report Review
gosh, boys xD
that he didn't think of her at first!
really good story I'm curious to read what happens next!
hope you will write the next chapter soon!
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really beautiful although it's a sad story!
the lyrics are perfect! they truly fit!
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how sweet :)
this one-shot is really great!
I love it!
BellBellAuthor's Response: I really wasn't expecting anything when I checked my unanswered reviews, but look what I came across. My eyes lit up, seriously. Haha.
Thanks so much for making my day. I'm really happy that you liked this!
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of course it doesn't suck! I really like it, but it's short... very short...
maybe you put in more detail or probably describe Lilys thoughts why she suddenly kiss him and wants him to be her boyfriend.
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whatever the oldest one says goes!
oh I would be so happy if my family or rather my siblings think like that! :D
who! James I luv ya :)
'cause I'm a really, really big Rose/Scorp - Fan ^^
but maybe, and just maybe, you can write a second part with the reaction of the parents... 'cause that here wasn't that "big"
maybe some more curses? :)
BellBellAuthor's Response: If you like to read Rose and Scorpius pairings, you should read my Love Thy Neighbor story, I think you'd enjoy it. :) Report Review
*eyes wide in shock* *kind of laughing*
WOW. oh my gosh...
strange things happened...
ron driving? flinch with heart attack? Mrs. Flinch hitting Harry with a pocket book? Astoria with a teapot-head? Draco tied to the roof-rack? a guy named Voll Demart? Molly Weasley? Paparazzi? some kind of crazy healer and birth? very, very, VERY strange conversations? and a pic that's really funny! *surprised laugh*
wow... that seems kind of to many, to weird things in one one-shot!
BUT it's really funny! laughed whole time! *still laugh*
who! I like it really, I adore it! :D
and the whole thing would really scare me if i'd witness something like that! poor elderly people! :D
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I like it!
although it is kinda strange, that ginnys mode is changing like that. And in a few moments you can maybe describe her feelings a little bit more but otherwise I can't find any problem in the story!
And I like your start :D
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oh my god!
that was gorgeous! *smile*
and the song! beautiful!
so romantic! I want to have a marriage like that xD
hats off! Beautiful OS!
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Don't we all want a wedding like that!!?? It's all about the romance!
I'm glad you liked the story, and thank you for the review! Report Review
well... and an other time I'm sitting in front of the computer and laughing... alone
I don't wanna know what other people say if they see me like this ^^
great story, I really like your stories they are always so funny and amazing!
your ideas are so inimitable... and amusing!
of course I want a sequel!
I'm going to read it right now^^
BellBellAuthor's Response: Really, you like it? I was looking back on it not to long ago and couldn't believe I'd actually posted it. I must ask- was it the plot ofr my pitiful writing that made it amusing? ;D And I'm warning you, the sequel is a plot-less string of letters. But, hey, thanks for the review ... they're such nice surprises!
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well... I like sparkly red high heels!
I want to have some!
and the story... well it's a bit odd... and random, but truly funny
I like it!
and I hope now I wont see everywhere sparkly red high heels, but... well if i do so, it will be a dream :D
BellBellAuthor's Response: Yea, it is a bit odd, probably more. Thank you for the review! Report Review
it was gorgeous!
and the rules *laugh*
but ron. well I don't think he will murder scorp :D
well I hope so ^^
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thank you! Ron probably would've somewhat warmed up to Scorpius by the time he visited the Burrow, but we can always pretend ;D Again, thanks for the review! Report Review
how sweet *grin*
I want more!
although in the dialog sometimes I didn't know who said what...
but the idea is very sweet and beautiful, I'd like to read more of such stories :)
and... a BIG thank you to your brother *grin*
BellBellAuthor's Response: I wish I could give you guys a full version, but ... I don't know. Maybe over break I'll look at what I attempted as a beginning. And thanks for telling me about the dialouge; I had no idea. I'll tell Drew someone thanked him :) He has an account now; I believe it's called through_the_veil, or something like that. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I'm a Rose/Scorp Lover and this One-Shot... it really sweep me off my feet ^^
you say you like criticism but I've to say there isn't much, 'cause except of the few times you interchanged "you're" and "your" I really can't find failures
this One-Shot is really great and I don't understand why you just have 8 with me 9 reviews o.O
but I want to note, that a second part with Ron and Moines reaction, and of course Draco too, would be heavenly ^^
I think you'd manage that very well
and a "meeting the "parents-in-law"" would be really funny, if both Ron and Draco wouldn't freak out to badly :D
PS: I want to excuse myself if my English isn't that good ^^ I'm trying to write meaningful sentence not just a few words in false order but, uhm sometimes it really malfunctionsAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really happy you liked it so much! Ooops, i'll have to change those mistakes thanks for telling me!
I know not many people review :( But still it makes me happy that there are some nicer people (like you) that leave nice and long reviews for us authors to read :)
Everyone is saying that I should continue this story but I don't have much time on my hands... I'll see maybe in the future I will be able to make a sequel or continue this story :)
And you're english is great by the way!
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well now I know I've to be careful when my parents are going to give my boyfriend things like cologne or so...
the story is funny :)
BellBellAuthor's Response: I'm so lazy so sorry for the late reply. But thank you for my first ever review on here... :)
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smart james ^^
that's really sweet, but well... I don't know... I'm missing a kiss?
Yes I know ^^ that's not a necessity but... wha... I'm missing it ^^
but with or without kiss it's a beautiful OS :)
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Yes, I know there was no kiss! I thought about adding one, but it kinda made it a bit awkward ... anyway ...
-Lily! Report Review
well... I can just repeat what I've said in my last comment...
you are still finding the right words to create a great atmosphere
BellBellAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you! Report Review
oh, how sweet...
this sounds great. You can bring that feeling, the feeling of the sorrow and the new beginning... i think you can just find the right words...
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thank you so much BellBell! Report Review
tonks *bright smile*
I really love her character, she's yeah... different ^^
and your One-Shot is quite pretty
I like it
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! And yes, Tonks really is a fun character to work with. Report Review
how sweet *-*
oh I love that pair ^^
beautiful story, really :)
BellBellAuthor's Response: Thanks!! I think they're adorable. Report Review
how gorgeous *-*
this song-fic is really gorgeous I'm loving it!
'cause I know the movie Anastasia and i've watched it when i was... uhm... 8 or so (now I'm 14) ... and i've just forgotten how beautiful the movie was, but this song-fic had remembered me...
and the song *-*
oh, I've shuddered a few times, really i've got goosebumps ^^
a very very very beautiful and gorgeous song-fic
BellBellAuthor's Response: thank you heaps for your review!!!
goosebumps 'ey, not horror goosebumps i hope, cos this story isnt meant to do that... :P
i'm really really really glad that you liked it!!! thanks again for your review, i appreciate it So much!
p.s. i actually really really like your display name, BellBell... its pretty!!! Report Review
god I'm just loving this story :D
it's really hilarious *laugh*
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