Finally! I knew this would happen, but it's still awesome Report Review
Poor Scorpius, and Draco. This is sad, but it was great to get his POV Report Review
I really like this chapter but when is she going to tell Sirius??Author's Response: Probably never, since she made a deal with his mother to never see him again. Report Review
Only 4 more chapters! I am still shipping Rose/Scorpius BIG TIME. I look forward to all your updates though Report Review
I thought that this was a good chap, and congrats on the TIME recommendation. I like Tom a lot, although my heart remains with the Scorpius/Rose ship. Report Review
It's an interesting first chapter but, although Scorpius obviously has his faults, to me it's Rose who's coming off worse here. It's a bit much to ask someone to wait for them for God knows how longAuthor's Response: You are very right - Rose is at fault in many ways, and no matter what happens later on, she can't forget that (won't be allowed to, actually). ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
This (and Just Another Midnight Run) was such a good fic. I thought that it was very well written, and very funny. I hope that you continue to write more stories about this AU because I think that the format of having a storyline focussing on a particular case means that the series has so much scope and potential. Really awesome.Author's Response: Thank you! I am definitely planning to write more Midnight Run stories. At least one more novel and a short story/novella, maybe more if I'm not tired of Rose by then haha. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! And the first novel too. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
So glad you've updated, and that it hadn't been deleted! I'm so glad James has finally got help, quite an emotional chapter, and I liked the Aidan POV, it was different. More Ropius though! Report Review
This is good introductory chapter, cider is alcoholic though... Report Review
Seriously why? kcshvdfjhewv rieuyergfwxnoeufnze Report Review
Why would Adara not know everyone in her year? She's 6th year! Report Review
Ok so I totally didn't call drug addiction, I'm not surprised either though. Another great addition Report Review
Ok as much as I'm not Daisy's biggest fan, it is purely because she is an obstacle in the Rose/Scorpius love, I do actually feel bad for her here, Scorpius was being horrible! So glad there are somewhat regular updates now! Report Review
omg! I hope Aidan is alright, but also am glad that it was on Daisy's watch. I am also reconsidering the whole James-has-AIDS thing, I'm not sure what's going on there now... Report Review
NO! I seriously hope the Shay and Sirius are the ones to end up together, and hopefully he will tell her about Cillian soonAuthor's Response: hopefully. I'm definitely rooting for them Report Review
Another great update, the Scorpius/Rose moment in the closet was amazing!
PS (as usual) suck it Daisy Report Review
This was such a great fanfic, really addictive! I hope you get a Dobby for it, although I wish there had been a touch more verbal Rose/Scorpius love, but seriously amazing!Author's Response: Thank you! I would be very honored and extremely tickled to get a Dobby for this. That would definitely make me super happy :) Thanks so much for the review! I'm really glad you liked the story. Report Review
Please please please update! I have been reading the three stories over the last week (seriously not good, I have an exam to study for!) and they're so good! But I'm not totally sure who's is who's, sirius and james have one twin each? and what about ruby? Don't give up on this story! Report Review
Well you've been doing pretty well in terms of slang etc, but most people call pikelets crumpets, and stoush is seriously a word I had never heard before. Are you aussie?Author's Response: Hi again!
Thanks for that - I'll go through and remove the word "stoush" from the narrative. You're the first person who's picked up on that word so I appreciate it. As for pikelets/crumpets, well I was told by a Welsh person that pikelets are a particularly Welsh thing, but I'll go back and check on that too. Where I live pikelets and crumpets refer to different things but I'm happy to be corrected on this score.
As for being Aussie,well I'll admit to having lived there, but I won't admit to where I am from, I'm afraid ... I do love my anonymity and the most I've told anyone is that I'm from a Commonwealth country. Sorry about that. It was a good guess, though :D
cheers, Mel Report Review
There is no way on God's green Earth that those people wouldn't have been at least expelledAuthor's Response: Hi again! Thanks for the review!
Yes, they might have been, but then again Harry didn't get expelled for casting Sectumsempra on Malfoy, nor did Malfoy get expelled for casting an Unforgivable Curse on a third party and the near deaths of Katie Bell and Ron Weasley, so I'm of the opinion that Dumbledore was unusually lenient. As far as we know, Sirius didn't get expelled for sending Snape under the willow, either, which is also a pretty big thing. However, you may have a point so I'll go back and have another look at this chapter and see if I can't improve it.
cheers, Mel Report Review
please tell me that you aren't going to be writing Mary's speech in dialect the whole time, it is so annoying to read! Also I don't think that people from Bristol would who are Welsh are odd, it's only a 30 minute or so drive from Cardiff!Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!
You know, I've had a lot of feedback about Mary's accent and while I appreciate it can be hard to read, I am assured by more than one person that it gets easier to read as the story goes on. I have taken your concerns on board, though.
As for the Bristol/Wales thing, well I was basing that on the kids I know in the 8-10 age bracket, who will use any difference,particularly in speech or dialect, as proof that someone is different from them. Kids, in general, are mean in a lot of ways, so in this context I was thinking that you've got these two girls who say weird things in a different accent, and that the other kids would latch onto that accent as the reason they say weird things. You may or may not agree with me, but that's where I was coming from with that.
Anyway, thanks for the input, I do appreciate it.
cheers, Mel Report Review
I absolutely loved the story! I only wish Oliver and Suzie had got together a little earlier, but really I've been reading it so much. Not good really, I have exams next week and it has been great if extraordinarily counter-productive! Report Review
I liked the trial, so what if it might not completely accurate, doesn't matter. What the frick is going on with James? I'm still gunning for some terminal illness, called it ages ago. Also poor Rose! Worst birthday ever! Report Review
Scorpius is being such a squibbing squib! lol, another great update, but im still in disbelief that scorpius would go for majority custody, eurgh i really hope daisy gets kicked to the curb soon! Report Review
How is this the end of the story??? There are still so many loose ends!Author's Response: i was gonna write another story, like a follow up :/ but i never really got round to it xx Report Review
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