Well done. The ending was sad, but I understand that it had to be that way. The exchange with Tonks was wonderful. I loved how you stayed true to JKR despite the shipping.
The ending was fantastic: "Sirius was how he was always supposed to be... Free." Brilliant.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I try to write realistic Alternate universe-it's kind of a contradiction, but I like it. I love JKR's universe, but I like to play around with it a bit. If they still seem in character and everything, I guess I have done my job. :-)
Yeah, it had to be a sad ending. Unfortunately, it's kind of hard to write about that period in their lives without some sadness, unless you just take a little sliver.
I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I even get chills from it!
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I really, really liked this. The format of the five promises is really interesting. It was like watching flashback clips from a movie. The final one was particularly heart-wrenching. Great job.Author's Response: Thank you so much! You know, that was kind of what I was going for, just flashes of moments. I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for your kind words. :) Report Review
Gah! It sucks that there wasn't a happy ending! I thought there would be since Sirius told Remus that he loved him. :(
Anyway, I thought this was great. I'm not a big fan of the thoughts in () but it didn't take too much from the story. Overall, great job. Report Review
This is a great story, and I really think you should continue it with more chapters. Report Review
Excellent. James and Lily are so cute! I loved it when they danced. That was perfect.Author's Response: thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it and cheers for making the effort to review Report Review
Wow... This was beautifully tragic. I loved the end when Remus fought his feelings when he said Go but he wanted him to stay. Simply beautiful.Author's Response: Thank you. What a lovely review. I'm happy you liked it =)
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Yes, this is smut, but it's still great. The comedy is spot on, and I was laughing out loud so many times. It's not so much about the sex as it is about the relationship between Remus and Sirius.
Thumbs up to the teddy bear!Author's Response: Wee, glad you liked it! Report Review
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