Reading Reviews From Member: Lotis Payne
  
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Review #1, by Lotis PayneA New Life: Old Marriages And New Lovers

24th April 2009:
That kiss just made me favorite this story...

the characters are beautifully written, nice and rounded, especially Draco's soon-to-be-ex-wife(which I wasn't expecting... good job!)

Fantabulous story!
10/10

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, thank you very much for reviewing!

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Review #2, by Lotis PayneBreaking Tradition: Chapter Eight: FML

19th April 2009:
aah haha lol
the awkward moment prevails! woo!
I think Scorp should punch Al at the next opportunity... or just kiss her anyway.

Beautiful!
Loved it!

Author's Response: Ahahahahhah, kissing Rose in front of the overprotective, threatening cousin... THAT would be interesting :P Thanks for the read and review, I really hope you keep up with this story!

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Review #3, by Lotis PayneBirthday Wishes: The Dreaded Countdown

21st January 2009:
aw!

that just earned you a favorite. *click!* anyways...

I love Teddy in this Fic, how he's so cute and compassionate and a little embarrassed... you can almost see him debating whether or not he should kiss her when she's counting down... SO CUTE!!

a very warm, good-feelings, snuggly kind of story. LOVE IT!

Author's Response: aw thank you!that's exactly what i was going for, a story where you could just sit down, read and then feel all fuzzy inside when you were done. I LUV TEDDY too! haha i tried to make him that. thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by Lotis PayneComplications: Merry Christmas, and all that Jazz!

21st January 2009:
Qu'est-ce que c'est the "wolf" thingy? is Teddy a metamorphmagus in this, or a lycan, or both? you should really explain that better in the intro. good basic plot, but background info. could be a little better and Victoire could be a little less... spastic.

Author's Response: Hi .I can't explain what Teddy is at the moment as it is actually part of the storyline that you don't find out yet! I hope that you will still continue to read my story to find out the answer to your question. And Victoire..well, she's the way I make her, and I always imagined her to be the ditzy rebel type. Thank you for the feedback.
lauren
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