Ooh, excellent... I've always wanted to know how their relationship changed over the years and what it was like before... this is wonderful.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, there may be a companion to this story coming in May, so look out for it! Report Review
the pov keeps changing, so its a bit confusing, but otherwise its good!! Report Review
Love your plot and the new Hermione (although it's not what I expected lol)...to be honest with you though, you could lengthen your chapters, and put spaces between paragraphs?...just a suggestion. lol, but otherwise your story is really really really good! Report Review
I really loved your story, I read the whole thing in one sitting! Although it took me about an hour...lol, please write a sequel! I'm sure it will be great! Your ending was really moving and I'm willing to read your D/G story, even though I'm not a great fan of D/G~ I'm sure yours will be...different and better~Author's Response: O wow thank you so much. I am writting a sequel...I am almost done with the first few chapters..I just have to think of a title so any suggestions are welcome. I am really glad ur willing to try my D/G story...thank you so much! Report Review
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