Reading Reviews From Member: Smeemo
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by SmeemoOut of Time: Finding Time Again

8th November 2013:
Great story!! I love reading stories with unexpected pairings and evolving plot lines. Throw in time travel and well I'm hooked. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really pleased to hear that you enjoyed this story and it's fantastic that you liked it for those reasons. Those elements helped make this story a great experience to write - there's just something about time travel, complex plots, and unexpected pairings. :D

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Review #2, by SmeemoI'll Do The Dishes: Epilogue

8th March 2011:
This is the first story i have read of the next generation so to speak, and I loved it. I thought the charcaters were well written and the plot was light and loveable. I read your Albus/Snape one shot which made me check out your page. I'm glad i did, i will be adding this to my favourites =] x

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Review #3, by SmeemoBlurring the Lines: The Order

27th February 2011:
Wow i really like the difference in the tone of the story compared to Red hair and a beaters bat. Immediatley can feel the darkness in this one. Not sure about loosing fred as her boyfriend but i'll wait to see how you write it before i make a proper decision. Good luck update soon x

Author's Response: Yes, there's a definite tone of darkness in this one, for obvious reasons. I was a bit unsure how readers of Red Hair and a Beater's Bat would react to that development, but there is some background detail and explanation in chapters to come. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by SmeemoCats and Dogs: Chapter one: The Beginning

1st July 2009:
I think the original idea is AMAZING. However i think you may have had a little difficulty getting this across? I hate posting reviews with critism in but i think this will be constructive. First i think you started off the story to quickly, there wasn't really an introduction. I think if you started off with an introduction to the fighting an example being a slytherin dropping a water balloon on Hermione. She could be walking down decribing all the other things that are going on around her. Then arriving in the hall where it even worse. I think Dumbledore needs to come across more angry, this would make it more believable that he would take such extreme action.

I also think that you may want to cut this chapter in half because it seemed to drag on a little. By doing this you can go back a perfect what you want to get across. Though i understand how hard it is to right a first chapter and get across everything you want to. Keep up the good work i hope this has been helpful.

Author's Response: thank you for the review:) yeah i will edit this chapter and put and intoduction in:) it may take some time but i hope you\\\'ll be able to wait:) please continue to read and give any more advice:) thank you i\\\'ll try to update soon:)

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Review #5, by SmeemoThe Fox and the Hound...and the Stag and the Werewolf: Some Unfinished Business

27th January 2009:
I quite like this story so far. I love the different view of the slytherins im going to fav this story and keep an eye on it good work so far. =]

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Review #6, by SmeemoThe Miss Malfoy: Bricindia Malfoy

12th January 2009:
Hey i made you a banner i dont know where to send it.

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