Reading Reviews From Member: Smeemo
  
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Review #1, by SmeemoOut of Time: Finding Time Again

8th November 2013:
Great story!! I love reading stories with unexpected pairings and evolving plot lines. Throw in time travel and well I'm hooked. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really pleased to hear that you enjoyed this story and it's fantastic that you liked it for those reasons. Those elements helped make this story a great experience to write - there's just something about time travel, complex plots, and unexpected pairings. :D

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Review #2, by SmeemoI'll Do The Dishes: Epilogue

8th March 2011:
This is the first story i have read of the next generation so to speak, and I loved it. I thought the charcaters were well written and the plot was light and loveable. I read your Albus/Snape one shot which made me check out your page. I'm glad i did, i will be adding this to my favourites =] x

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Review #3, by SmeemoBlurring the Lines: The Order

27th February 2011:
Wow i really like the difference in the tone of the story compared to Red hair and a beaters bat. Immediatley can feel the darkness in this one. Not sure about loosing fred as her boyfriend but i'll wait to see how you write it before i make a proper decision. Good luck update soon x

Author's Response: Yes, there's a definite tone of darkness in this one, for obvious reasons. I was a bit unsure how readers of Red Hair and a Beater's Bat would react to that development, but there is some background detail and explanation in chapters to come. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by SmeemoRed Hair and a Beater's Bat: Resolution

27th February 2011:
Im really glad your going to be writing a sequel story. I thought some of the one liners in this were incredibly witty and funny. My favourite had to be from the chapter 'Sleeping Dragons' where one of the ravenclaws is talking about the list and they said Athena and she said I'm flattered. Made me laugh out loud. Keep up the good work =] x

Author's Response: Thank you! I like that line too :P I like a lot of them, to be honest. I'm allowed to say that because Athena writes herself, I can't claim any credit :P Guess what? The first chappie of the sequel is already posted, have a read :D

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Review #5, by SmeemoCats and Dogs: Chapter one: The Beginning

1st July 2009:
I think the original idea is AMAZING. However i think you may have had a little difficulty getting this across? I hate posting reviews with critism in but i think this will be constructive. First i think you started off the story to quickly, there wasn't really an introduction. I think if you started off with an introduction to the fighting an example being a slytherin dropping a water balloon on Hermione. She could be walking down decribing all the other things that are going on around her. Then arriving in the hall where it even worse. I think Dumbledore needs to come across more angry, this would make it more believable that he would take such extreme action.

I also think that you may want to cut this chapter in half because it seemed to drag on a little. By doing this you can go back a perfect what you want to get across. Though i understand how hard it is to right a first chapter and get across everything you want to. Keep up the good work i hope this has been helpful.

Author's Response: thank you for the review:) yeah i will edit this chapter and put and intoduction in:) it may take some time but i hope you\\\'ll be able to wait:) please continue to read and give any more advice:) thank you i\\\'ll try to update soon:)

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Review #6, by SmeemoThe Fox and the Hound...and the Stag and the Werewolf: Some Unfinished Business

27th January 2009:
I quite like this story so far. I love the different view of the slytherins im going to fav this story and keep an eye on it good work so far. =]

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Review #7, by SmeemoThe Miss Malfoy: Bricindia Malfoy

12th January 2009:
Hey i made you a banner i dont know where to send it.

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