OH MY GOODNESS!! I bet Sirius feels bad right 'bout now?? haha... can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Sirius better feel bad. The jerkk. Jeeze. Who would write something like that? *looks guilty and walks away* Report Review
and you're back! haha. yeah, I guess I forgive you for keeping me waiting :P cause it ws definitely worth the wait :) I feel so sorry for Lenny :( Ok, got to go to work, I think I'm going to be smiling all day now :)Author's Response: I am back! Kinda. School sucks. Work sucks. Life in general sucks. Anyways... UPDATE MORE SCARLETROSES! Jeze. Report Review
hell yeah i'm excited!Author's Response: Good! I'm excited too! I cannot wait to see your reaction! Report Review
oh my god, you're engaged!!! Congratulations! Now that I know that that's the reason for the delay I'm completely okay with it hehe. I'm so excited about the next couple of chapters, like you wouldn't believe!! Can not wait!! I'm so glad you've found your Sirius :P Until next time
Vic :)Author's Response: :D thank you Vic! I'm so excited to plan a wedding and all that nonsense! The next chapters should be the climax of the story, you're going to love it. And hate it. All at the same time. Update coming soon, I promise ;D. Report Review
this is killing me! I just want her to confess hehehe...
Vic :)Author's Response: That would be ideal... haha ;) Report Review
I think it's just right :P
Vic :)Author's Response: yay :D. I'm glad you think so! Report Review
AH!! by far. best chapter yet. i realised that in lenny's L.C. letter she said that she heard Remus telling Sirius all those thing,, now Sirius will know that she's in gryffindor! (or did he already know that?) awesome
Vic :)Author's Response: yay best chapter :D! i wouldn't put it past Sirius to not realize the Gryffindor thing. Report Review
arghh when is he gonna figure everything out?? awesome... as per usual :)
Vic :)Author's Response: he'll probably never figure out. I haven't decided if I want him to know yet. Only kidding, love! Report Review
At first i didn't like Marlene at all but now that she's agreed to keep Lenny's secret, she's kinda growing on me. Remus is funny as well, you can so tell that he's trying to get Sirius to like Lenny. I like Lenny's determination for Sirius not to like her and not to find out. Brilliant, as per usual ;) Keep it up!
Vic :)Author's Response: hopefully you'll grow to like Marlene. She's not half bad! She will also be appearing more often, so take a watch for that ;). Remus is more along the lines of trying to get Sirius to be civil, but obviously is failing. Poor Remus. Report Review
Aww thank you soo much.. didn't I tell you that Lenny reminided me of me hehe. See great minds think alike ;) Awesome chapter... I'm happy for Lenny that she's made some more friends :)
Vic :)Author's Response: It really was a good idea! Thanks for it and thanks for reading, I really appreciate it. Like I should get down on my hands a knees and kiss your feet because you deserve it. Report Review
No one paying attention?! How could no one pay attention to this story?? It's brilliant, I must admit though, I may be a teenee tighnee, little bit biased because Lenny reminds me a lot of myself. My friends are constantly interrupting conversations that i have with myself in my head (but I suspect that that's only cause they don't realise I'm talking with... me, i guess) And I actually, for a moment there, thought that the Slytherin Quidditch team had taken polyjuice potion for the match, cause that doesn't sound like something Ravenclaw's would do, except if that was there only possible way of winning. So yeah, I really want to know what Teddy was thinking. This is awesome, keep it up and remember there are other loony people out there as well :P
Vic :)Author's Response: squeee! you dont know how excited your response made me. I'm really glad you could relate to Lenny (at least someone does). I personally think we all talk to ourselves more than we are willing to admit. Lenny's problem is that she admits it and is herselves best friend. The Slytherin thing would have been a good idea! I should've thought about that, but you will see what happened with the Ravenclaw team in the next chapter ;). Report Review
I've been reading this story from start to finish over the last couple of days and it's awesome. I love how Eva's a strong girl who isn't neccessarily a prankster. Actually she reminds me of me, funnily enough :) And about the Sirius thing... i think that he would consider that girls... weekends and gummi bears are more important than Quidditch :P Well I think that's it... I look forward to the next chapter.
Vic :)Author's Response: Ohh. gummi bears. Nom. I love it if people identifies with my characters :) Thank you for taking the time to read all the chapters, and thanks for reviewing! Much love :) xx Report Review
Hi! So I'm here :) First off I'd like to say that although I don't usually read stories that feature foreign students in it, you've managed it very well and haven't given the 'British' characters too many American mannerisms. I like the general plot so far and I like the way that Carmendy isn't falling all over James. Just a piece of advice (if I may) try not to make this story too much like the story of Lily and James the first. I really want to find out who Tommy is as I like a bit of mystery in stories ;) Well done so far and keep working on it!
Vic :)Author's Response: Oh thank you SO much! It means the world to me. I'm flattered that you think I managed it well! I'm trying hard to remain as british as I can, but I'm american. And about Lily and James, I want the feel of it, but it won't be like a perfect copy of it or anything, I'm going to make sure that they are their own people. You will have an idea about Tommy in the next few chapters, but you won't figure out everything about him for a while. Thanks a load, and keep on reading! :) Report Review
Oh My Gosh! Ok so sorry I've been lousy in reading the last couple of chapters. They were great, the way you handled it made it less confusing rather then the confused mess it could have been. You should be proud.
Vic :) Report Review
AHHH!!! NO, I want to see her memories!! Where's the next one?!
Vic :)Author's Response: Haha, sorry. But don't worry, you will be seeing some memories soon :). Hopefully the next chapter will be up in a few days. Thanks ever so for the review! Report Review
YAY!! You're back! I'd go off at you more for not updating sooner, but it takes ages for me to update on stories and I despise hypocrits, so I won't become one :) I love it and although some parts might sound cheesy to you, I can assure you that they're not and even if they do it's only a little smidgen of cheesiness and it works well with the story. IT's all col!
Vic :)Author's Response: Sorry about the late update! My laptop broke and my mom got mad at me so now she's limiting my time on her laptop, and her laptop sucks and the story is saved on my broken laptop and it's all just a mess. So I can't promise you when the next update will come, but hopefully it'll be soon! It's already written; I just need to transfer it from my old laptop. But thank you so much for your review! I think you'll like the next chapter; it was one of my favorites to write. :) Report Review
YAY! You're back!! Laura's back!! Albus' back!! I can't tell you how happy I am! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Vic :)Author's Response: Great to hear :) Yeah, I've been really busy. I got a second job which leaves me little free time to write. But I am plunking away at the next chapter between work and episodes of Smallville :D Thanks for the reviewing, it's good to hear that you are enjoying it!
~Alex Report Review
Well,she's right, she did warn him. I feel bad for her, about how confused she's becoming :( Keep going!
Vic :)Author's Response: Yep, she did :). It's only going to go down from here...
I will. Thanks so much for the review, and all of your reviews, they have really helped me continue to write. :) Report Review
I love the start of this story! What I love even more is that you've described the girl as shy, though can I offer some advice? In my opinion it would be more interesting if Marian didn't place her whole trust on Tom. This has been done a lot by a lot of people and as she was the only one "who seemed to be immune to Tom's charms" then she should have some small sense of who he really is. Though it doesn't have to be a lot. I like the start of this story so much! I hope you continue with it and please, if you don't like my advice please tell me and disregard it. However longer chapters would be very much appreciated! Can't wait to read more!!
Vic :) Report Review
Awesome! This girl sounds soo much like me (i'm a hufflepuff and annoyingly quiet as well :P) Keep going, I can't wait!
Vic :)Author's Response: Yay, I've successfully created a relatable character! I'm proud of myself, haha. x) Thanks for the review, and I hope you like how Victoria evolves throughout the story! Report Review
Hi, I just want to say that this story is soo good, it's refreshing. I also wan't to say that this story is a little freaky. It's freaky because my name is laura, I have brown hair and I'm a proud member of Hufflepuff. A little freaky, but soo so cool :) Keep going!! This is interesting and I have a feeling it's going to become even more so. Awesome!
Vic :)Author's Response: Wow, that is a little freaky! I picked the name Laura because I've always found it feminine sounding but for a very strong and independent woman. I really hope I can keep it up with this story. As of now I am trying really hard to keep it on the straight and narrow and avoid as many cliches as possible. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
AH!! I've been waiting for so long for this chapter :) This would be the best movie, and I already feel that it kind of is, because I can see it playing in my head :) I'm interested in seeing what draco and snape do next. Brilliant as per usual.
Vic :)Author's Response: Aww...thanks for such a wonderful complement! I'm glad you can see it as a movie :) Thanks again for reviewing!!! :D Report Review
OMG! She knows! I have no idea what I'd do if I had this information, I would definitely not tel everyone about Remus though, cause he IS too good of a person :) I loved it, keep going!!
Vic :)Author's Response: Yeah, def feel the same. I love Remus as a character in all fics. Report Review
UH OH! Draco knows the truth! I love it how he keeps reffering to her as 'my Becky' it's so cute.
Keep going, I'm waiting
Vic :)Author's Response: Yep, he does :). He's being very cute right now isn't he? He totally thinks of her as 'his Becky' lol :).
I shall be submitting the next chapter soon :)
Thanks for the review! Report Review
ARGHHH! I want to know what happened!! I guess I still have a while before that comes up, hey? I don't think I can wait that long though :( I'll try to be patient and not hastle you so much, but I can't give you any promises. This is my new FAVOURITE story! Keep going, you're great!!
Vic :)Author's Response: Aww thanks. I've just submitted more for validation so it should be up soon I promise. Report Review
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