This concept is not cannon but the way you present it makes it seem appealing.
And of course, Sirius is an idiot in your story, which makes it more laughable. Report Review
Teddy stalking her at the night club, priceless.Author's Response: Haha I liked that part as well :) Report Review
I'm starting to like this Aimee character, she's really spunky and willing to make Victoire get up. The getting fired thing was predictable after the line she told her boss. The kicking Teddy in the groin, not so predictable...
Are we ever going to find out why she left England? (We know it's because of Teddy, but more details...?)Author's Response: Yes, you are definitely going to recieve all the details of why she left. I wouldn't leave you hanging like that! Report Review
So I've never read any of your other stories, but I'm liking this one so far. Victoire seems really down to earth and simple despite her heritage. I love that you were able to balance the Veela in her with her better qualities.
Good introduction.Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so! Thanks so much :) Report Review
Love the incident in the hospital, something like that happened to one of my friends before.
Laura as a bartender- perfect job for her.
I wonder what's going to happen next chapter- update quick! Report Review
I expected more drama, especially for a Christmas at The Burrow.
But since Rose left early, guess you couldn't make that happen.
Love the sarcasm from Rose. Report Review
I love Aidan at the end of the chapter. =)
And I'm surprised that she was able to contain herself from murdering Daisy.
Keep it up. Report Review
The Vegas thing just reminds me of What Happens in Vegas.
Good chapter. Report Review
Great way to twist things!
Can't believe he got married. =0
Keep writing! Report Review
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