I am absolutely in love with your story, no joke it is amazing. I just read it top to bottom without taking a single break. I love your portrayal of boy Dom and Teddy, absolutely perfect!
Please continue with the amazing writing!Author's Response: I'm incredibly flattered that you like it so much. I'm so pleased that I managed to capture your interest and although I didn't intend for Dom to be a male in this I don't mind if you see it that way, Lol.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story so far and I'm so pleased that you took the time to review as well ^_^. Report Review
Ah, really I am in love with your story.. for one you are writing Dom and Lorcan which are two severely underwritten characters which makes them way more exciting. Another your Dom is not in any way in love with Teddy (at least i don't think so) which i also appreciate. Your Lorcan is also not crazy and mysteriously attractive. And we all love a good hate turns to love story they make for the best drama!
Please keep up the great work! and i can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I absolutely adore getting reviews like this one, they make me feel so happy!
Weirdly, I had no idea Dom/Teddy was even a pairing when I began this story and I see no point in making sisters fight unless its for highly comedic reasons :) I'm a big fan of this story too, I'll be updating it very soon hopefully.
Thanks again! Report Review
I really really love your main character, she is pretty unique and just exciting. I wish she would just let out some emotions with Andrew sometimes though, but I know it must be hard for her, i know/hope it will happen eventually though and i am looking forward to it. Anyways as always your story is amazing, and keep up the good writing!!Author's Response: Thanks a lot, DAni is pretty different. But... thank's for the R&R anyway, I'm hoping to finnish the sixth chapter before i get back in school. (I have been working on it for like six months) Report Review
Ah, I love it really, and I can't wait for more. I am really interested to see how you work her boss into this story too, I mean I hope there is more of him since he is described as so handsome. Plus i'm excited for her lunch with James, because I love James, and you write him very well.
Keep up the great writing!Author's Response: Oh, you will see a lot of her boss in the future. And I do mean a LOT. That being said, ah, James. I love him so much, which is probably why the next chapter is going to be entirely in his point of view. I think it'll be a much needed refreshment. As much as I love Mara, I can't wait to really get inside James's head instead of just showing him on an outing with his "dearly" beloved. Thanks for the review! Report Review
please keep writing! I love itAuthor's Response: thx, ch 5 has been taking a while, it's about half done.
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