Very nice! A few minor errors: tense changes, word useage. But it is generally very well written and I shall undoubtably continue to read!

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chills chills chills.oh my god that was good. scratch that, it was AMAZING. I loved all the seduction and i think you picked the perfect character for the phantom to fall in love with.

sooo great. I think you should continue the story. mind if i steel your idea if you dont want to continue?


10/10!

Beatrice Scrypte
~the*raven*mistress~

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hey its me! haha im the 1 with the dream date forum on TDA. That was good but i think u should write some dramione fan fics :P haha dramione 4 ever dude! read some of my stories when you get the chance. I have a new one called Legacies

Author's Response: Ohmigosh! I think I'm making your banner :D haha. how cool.
I will read that! I love dramione but I can never get Draco's character right... Fred and George are easiest to work with since we get a sense of their personalities but not too much so there is freedom to roam with it... anyways... here I thought I'd try something new!

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OH. MY. GOD. And you say I'm brilliant?!
That was amazing! Draco's emotions...the regret...the angst...everything!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Haha, thanks, Beatrice.
(PS> YOU REALLY ARE BRILLIANT)

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haha this is great i love dramione fanfics :D if u get a chance check out mi stories!! I luv reviews! ;P

Author's Response: hey thanks!
I will for sure check out your stories as soon as I have enough time to sit down nice and comfortably, laptop in hand, and read away.
Cheers!

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wow. that was great. I loved the passionate description.

if you get a chance, check out my latest story, called The Noble House of Black. Given your writing style, i think youd like it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'll try to get around to reading it but can't make many guarantees for the near future - I will, however, make an effort! (Real life is piling up on me now >

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hey, that was pretty good. I wish ud put in moar detail, but it was still a good story. :)

Hey if u get the chance, check out my stories. I always love getting reviews! :)

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hey someone1! again! my first chapter of my new story just came out. its a different style than the hallows trilogy, but I still think u should check it out. Leave me a review and tell lots of other people to leave reviews 2!

Author's Response: thanks a bunch!

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That. Was. Awesome. I loved the clever plot of the story. Really great!!

Check out my story. It's called The Noble House of Black. Please leave me reviews!! I love feedback!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love getting reviews its my caffeine drive when I'm writing

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wow. that was deep dude. lol sry i had 2 use that word. Check out 1 of mi stories that just came out...I luv reviews!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Beatrice! Shall do, and shall review!

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that wuz really cute! hey check out mi stories, i need some reviews :) great writing!! bye!!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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dude that wuz really good. ive read a lot of ur stories and i heart all ur dramione fan fics. if u get a chance check out mi story. a new 1s coming up in a couple days 2. so u read mine and il read urs! (and leave reviews 2 boost mi selfesteem :P)

Author's Response: Thank you.

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dude, that wuz awesome. Dramione 4 eva dude! check out some of mi stories. I dont have any dramione love fics yet, but at some point i will . . . believe me . . .

Author's Response: lol I'm glad you liked it, I'd love to check your stories out. lol the suspense from your last sentence is killing me. thanks for reading and reviewing :)

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dude. that was so good its not even funny. usually i dont like dramione songfics, but this 1 was ttly awesome!

Author's Response: I'm glad you likes it, and I'm shocked that you do even though you don't like the kind of story.

Thank you very much. Don't forget to have a look at my other work.

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that wuz really good :)
i wanna c what happens with hermione/ron hermione/harry affair. really gr8 keep writing!

Hey, if u get a chance, check out 1 of mi stories. I have a new story coming up in a couple dayz 2.

Really good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'll take a look when I get a chance. ;)
~Cassie

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hey someone 1! the rest of the second chapter of mi story is validated. Ive also got a new story coming up in a couple days. check them out!

Author's Response: thank you for telling me that! i just got done reading it. ooh, cliffies! :P
cant wait for the next story!

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Aww . . . it was great .. . . wouldve loved some more detail . . . it seemed 2 short . . . but other than that it wuz gr8 i m totaly 4 dramione and I think, in this story especially, that rons a buttface who doesnt deserve her.

Author's Response: haha i know =) i love dramione i love writing & reading about them =) so thanks x

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dude . . . wered u make the banner? im @ a loss 4 websites 2 make banners . . . . tellme!

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That was really good! Are u a member of the staff LogicalRaven? Because if ur the same one thats a staff member, I know u like riddles, and i need help solving the latest HPFF riddle . . . I don't want the prize, I just LOVE solving riddles. Could u at least reply? thanks.

Always,

Beatrice Scrypte
~The*Raven*Mistress~

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dude . . . that was lolariffic! (mi own personal made up word :P) write more dude . . . like if u have time with all da validating n stuf.

oh, and just a question. Is the staff of HPFF made up of adults or teenagers? Because seriously I cannot tell. U guys seem silly enough to be teenagers, but adults can be pretty silly, too...

anyway, it was lolariffic!

Always,

Beatrice Scrypte
~The*Raven*Mistress~

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Hey, I was just wondering if I could become a member of the staff? It seems like I have all the requirements: a sense of humor, a love of IM, and a passion for reading Harry Potter stories while sipping a cappucino for hours on end. Even if I can't, I'd really appriciate it if someone would take the time to email me back. I think you have my email since I was required to add it when I made my account. Oh, and I just wanted to say hi to Logical Raven! I am a huge fan, and I love all your puzzles. (Though I've never actually solved any. I'm working on it. ;) ) Anyway, write me back!

Always,

Beatrice Scrypte
~The*Raven*Mistress~

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w8 . . . i dont get it, did she still die @ the end? Plz explain. Other than that it was good :)

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Nice! the end is funny.

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completely awesometastic! omg i cant w8 to keep reading !!! ive recently been all depresed bcus i have no new hp books 2 read and the old 1s ar getting boring . . . but now i have a ttly new thing 2 read!!!

btw, i just got da 1st chapter in mi story approved and i would gladly appreciate it if ud read it and spread the word!! reviews would b nice too . . .

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omigod! someone else on this earth that actualy uses da word flirtatious!! virtual high five! :P

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