This was so beautiful. It really made me cry.

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Hey!

I haven't reviewed before, but I thought I'd review for this chapter. I honestly love your story. It's funny, it's witty, it's charming. Mrs. Weasley's speech actually brought tears to my eyes. I could imagine the whole scene. Poor Hollis! Why'd you have to stick to canon? :( Fred's a darling. Sometimes, I still can't believe he died. You really did justice to his character.

Also, I actually cried while reading this scene. Let me say, I never cry while reading books or even watching movie.

Beautifully done.
Tara

Author's Response: Fred was too young and too adorable to die, and it was unbelievably cruel to kill him. JKR certainly knows how to elicit emotional responses from people. :'(

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you thought of the chapter. These reviews are so encouraging.

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Very nice. I started reading, and I love that BroomBoy & PeachGirl are actually Oliver & Ivy. I noticed that Edmund and Cassie actually seem more suited together. Haha. I love the fights, as the others have said. Can't wait to read more.

-Tara

Author's Response: thanks, im glad you're enjoying it so far. I do think that they are more suited to each other too, and as soon as they find out their alter egos are in love... hmm.. what will happen ;) love the drama! X

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