i love all things combining doctor who and harry potter in any way, plus im a dark and twisty person and like angst every now and then, great story, ill defanatly read it againAuthor's Response: Doctor Who and Harry Potter are the best! :) Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Your a ravenclaw, and a Doctor who fan? I bloody love you :D Great story, I love how it stars Luna's kids, love itAuthor's Response: I am a Ravenclaw and a Doctor Who fan :P I take it you are too? You can be my new best friend :P Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it, hope to see you back when I update! :) Report Review
interesting, i like it. do you want a banner for this story? i notice your just starting out so you probably dont have a dark arts account. if you want i can make you a banner. email me at sa_in_the_usa@hotmail(dot)com if you want, if not, cant wait for the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: Aw, that's such a sweet offer, I'll definitely email you! Haha, this review made my day, thank you! x Report Review
i rather like it, its an odd idea, but it works, i cant wait to see where it goesAuthor's Response: Haha, it is! And thanks for the review! (: Report Review
thats so weird, i dont know how i would feel if i was her, it would be so confusong to like someone who turns into a kind of mentor Report Review
It's good, but i have one major problem with this chapter, you start out writing in the third person point of view, then switch to first person, then back to third: i do this a lot too, so don't worry, but you really have to watch for that because it's quite confusing and takes away from the story, after you right a chapter go threw and make sure it's all in the same point of view, i normally check to see that all the 'I's and 'me's are in quotation marks, other then that it's great, a tad bit slow, but you can only expect that from the first few chapters, I can't wait to see where it goesAuthor's Response: OH MY GOODNESS! Thank you for pointing that out to me! To be honest, when I began writing this story, I wrote this in first person and by the time I changed my mind I had already written four chapters! Thank you so much for telling me! Oh yes! Things are about to speed up very quickly! Thank you for reading and thank you for the feedback! :) Report Review
:D great job, can't wait for more :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Chapter three is currently awaiting validation! Thank you for your continued readership, even only two chapters in! :D Report Review
ill make a banner for you if you want, email me sa_in_the_usa(at)hotmail(dot)comAuthor's Response: Okay Really? Thanks. Mine's bubser12(at)hotmail(dot)com so I'll send you an e-mail. Thank you so much :)
-Arya Report Review
i love it! i must have more! so favoritedAuthor's Response: Thank you so much oh goodness! :) Next chapter currently in waiting! Report Review
what?! you can not just end it like that! more, i demand it more more! Report Review
it was good, though im not a big dramione shipper, if you still want a new banner email me sa_in_the_usa(at)hotmail(dot)com and ill make you one, idk im not that good, you can look at the ones on my page "rain" "losing innocence" and "thorns and roses" were done by myself, they arent great but they arent terrible either Report Review
all i have to say is this is one of the most powerful fanfictions it ever read, it was strangely poetic yet i didnt get the feeling you were trying to hard or laying it one to thick. i have no doubt that if you pursue it you could be a best selling auther someday. i love that you explore the human aspects of tom riddle, because people often forget how easily he and harry could have switched, in the end nothing separates them but their choices, in the end thats all that defies any of us. i generally dont like this kind of story, where its just talking, but this was beautifully written and spectacularly exicuted. i give you 10 out of 10 Report Review
feel vaguely satisfied that uncle vernon got torchured, i know i shouldnt, but i do, imma terrible personAuthor's Response: Oh i get it! You're not a terrible person. it makes sense. thanks for the review!! Report Review
o wow, thats all i gonna say is wow Report Review
it gives me the tingles, epic as everAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
intease dude really good as alwaysAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
hm its good i feel bad for emma and ginny, i would right more but im dead tired, i spent the day at the Mall of America, which is huge and required a lot of walking so my brain is to fuzzy to give a well thought out reviewAuthor's Response: Thank you;) I'm happy for any review. Report Review
sorry its been like a million years since i reviewed.i dont know how to rate this chapter, it was well writen, but still the idea of voldemort doing the hanky panky makes me gag a littleAuthor's Response: Haha, thank you:) Yeah, I know how you feel about Voldemort... Report Review
oooh i like it! i dont like how mean she is to ginny but i like her guilt and i can sympathize with her, ive hated my best friend over a guy that she had and i wanted, i dont think i would beat her up over it, but it did cause weeks of mean words and clipped conversations, your a great writerAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!:) Report Review
oh, im upset now, awesome writing, but im mad at emma nowAuthor's Response: I'm really glad you like it!:) You can be mad at Emma:p Report Review
ugg, harrys an ass in this chapter, but still very goodAuthor's Response: I know h e is :p somehow I managed to make Harry an ass and Draco kinda nice...
Thank you:) Report Review
hm, this is intresting it urges the reader forward, i shall read onAuthor's Response: Thank you:) Report Review
Oh, I like Luna and Neville together, but now that I think about it, Rolf and Luna would be so intresting, can't wait to read onAuthor's Response: Aw, I really like Luna and Neville together too! But I am trying to stay somewhat canon. ;) Haha, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, hun!! I greatly appreciate it!
Jazz Report Review
:O WOW, omg, fan-fricken-tastic, omfg, I...er.gaaa.I love this chapter what else can I say...I'm going to go google the most epic word ever and that won't even to able to describe this chapter!
I love how Sirius is such a ladies man he even has a goddess swooing over him
I can't wait until Harry gets to see sirius!
I knew the names Elysuim and Tartarus sounded familliar but I couldn't think of where from :D lol, My english teacher would have been diapointed in me, we studied Greek and Roman mythology for a whole semester last year lol, its very JKR to throw that in there, it gives the story a real canon element even though it's non-canon :D
If I had to grade this chapter on a scale of one to ten I would give it fifty billion, yeah, it's pretty rockin. Basically and generally awesome
Sorry, ubber long review o.O I'll stop babbling now :D have fun on vacation, wear sunscreen (I know first hand, I got the worlds worst case of sunburn yesterday at the beach)Author's Response: Hahaha, I couldn't help it..I always thought of him that way. Some people think its cliche, but we all know he was devilishly handsome so how can he NOT be a ladies man, you know? :P
Ahhh I can't wait for Harry and Sirius' reunion as well, it's going to be nice to finally have that written.
Lol, don't worry, your English teacher will never know! :P Yeah, I thought it was JKR-like, as well to throw in some Greek mythology.
And don't apologize! I LOVE long reviews! They make my day. :)
Thanks, I'll definitely enjoy vacation, and wear a lot of sunscreen, lol. Hope your sunburn is feeling better. :P Report Review
"Merlin knows, Sirius would advocate the excessive consumption in his honor"
LOL I love that part :D
Great chapter, i can't wait to read the next chapt, i'll defainatly check out your website when I have time (though time is hard for me to get right now) again i really hope this won't be a Malfoy/Ginny story
Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens in the ministry:)
ps the anagram idea was awsome i would have never thought of thatAuthor's Response: Hahaha, thank you. My friend who betas for me particularly liked that part, as well.
Don't worry, it is NOT a Malfoy/Ginny story..it's listed as Harry/Ginny! Malfoy is just in there to bring up some interesting things, haha.
Awesome, I hope you do check out the site (when you have time, of course!)..it's still in the works, but I'm having a lot of fun putting it together.
Ahhh thanks, I've had the anagram thing planned for so long, so it was awesome to finally write it! I'm glad you liked it. :)
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