So this is fabulous. I began reading it, thinking it would be a light, fluffy story; something to take my mind off finals and stuff. But no. This is not that story. You've managed to make this so much more. And it's so much better for it. I'm addicted. Seriously, I neglected my work this past weekend to read your story. I love Stac, she's great. And I love the way you've portrayed James. A lot of times, he can be shallow and flat in stories, but you've really managed to make him complex. Really, words can't describe how much I love this story. I'm dying to find out what the hell Stac actually is! All the vague hints here and there are not helpful! I'm dying for a full out explanation. Of course, I'm sure eventually, I'll get one. I need to be patient, which is, honestly, not one of my particular virtues.
So anyways, your fabulous, this story is fabulous, your characters are fabulous, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the lovely feedback *blushes* I'm not sure I deserve it all, but thank you for being so kind. I'm sorry that this has distracted you from work, but, let's face it, that's happened to us all along the way. I'm constantly getting distracted on this place!
So glad you enjoyed it and stay tuned for that explanation!
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So I love this story. I don't read a lot of next gen fic because a lot of them are really cliche. But I really love this one. It's wonderful. You're a wonderful writer. I find myself really rooting for Scorpius and find myself empathizing with his situation.
I do have one question though. You had Scorpius say to Draco "Back home, to London, **to Mars**, I donít care, you just canít be here". Please tell me I'm not crazily obsessed and that's a veiled reference to A Very Potter Musical?
Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
EmilyAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks so much! It's especially flattering to hear that you like this even though you aren't a fan of next-gen in general :D
Yes! I'm so glad someone spotted that *squee* I just love A Very Potter Musical and so I couldn't resist slipping that in there. Although being crazily obsessed with something as amazing as AVPM would be perfectly understandable xD
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You're 14? My goodness! When I was 14, I would've killed to be able to write like this. Hell, I'm 18 now and you still write better than I do! You have such a great talent! I am greatly enjoying this story and I'm so glad you forced yourself to write this chapter because I really liked it. I loved the scene with James and Sirius and the rest and I'm interested to see more of Jasper and Quentin. I cannot wait for the moment that Sirius and Euphemia meet. That's going to be wonderful, I'm sure. I wish you the best of luck with the next chapter of this as well as your original story that you're working on. Great job with this chapter!Author's Response: THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH!
If that isn't enough credence to how much I am pleased by your review, then I'll just say this: I'm finishing the next chapter because of how much you've inspired me!
I love meaty reviews with awesome grammar and vocabulary - i just love the English language - so thanks for that!
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