i love the story line, i would love a happy ending better, but great job!

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Wow i really like this. please continue this stry line.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I feel so bad because i haven't updated in a while but my hard drive broke and school has been hard but i promise i will try my hardest to update

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W.O.W! amazing story. i am a fluff writer myself, so i like what little you do include. and of course i am a sucker for the happy ending, but this story was fantastic! for her to get so much happiness from the dream adn for you to leave us with such heartache with the actual ending. greta job! please keep writing!

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wow i really like this. i wish you could do more with it. great job, great writing. amazing story line

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, glad you liked it! :)

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very good...i wanna know what happens next!

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Wow! this was a great story! i wish it didnt haev to end so soon. great writing. love the flash backs and such.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it.. I don't normally do flashbacks so I'm glad it worked.

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wow! what a twist! i loved it. great job

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i liked it alot. i wish you woudl make this just a first chapter...i want to knwo about Dracos recovery and how the trio accepts him, and how he changes his world. ! good job

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very funny and very good.

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you! I really appreciate your review. :)


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very good! i woudl love for it to contnue, give me more history and what happens next!

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great writing i loved this story

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very good !! i love the writeing and the story is great you shoudl really continue it.

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very good! i liked it was kind of broke back mountain esk...with the agressive passion.

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please oh please continue this sory! great start great writing... please do more to this story there are not enough hermione/George (my fav)

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Really good! A little disjointed I would have liked more development and perhaps a happy ending though I know nit all stories have them !

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing =)

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it was a nice short one. could use a bit more development. keep up the writing!

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i loved this story, amazing writing. i woudl love to know what happens next!

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good story could use more development. shoudl think abotu continuing it

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i love the arguments with their consciousness! good story which you woudl continue it.

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Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I can't wait to upload it. They aren't accepting chapters until sept 1. Chapter 3 is ready to go though.

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omg! i love it. i cannot wait for more. Gilly is a great character. i love the differnt POV's

Author's Response: OMG, I am so glad you liked it.

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This was very good i loved all the twists. i really liked the updates of their life together. well done

Author's Response: I'm so thrilled you liked L:AID. This is probably the first review I've had for this story in ages. I was certainly surprised to see it, and also very glad.

Thanks so much for your review! I really appreciate it.

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Wow this one had me crying! it was good but extremely sad. It broke my heart. well done

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wow! this was a wonderful story. Well done you! I am new to writing fan fic but i hope to get to your standard one day.

Author's Response: Awe, thank you! Beta readers help enormous amounts.

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Very good i loved this story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you did! :D Thanks for the review!

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