This was a good chapter...it was very sad how her mother just couldn't except that fact that Avery's with child! But the proposal was very cute, can't wait for the other updates...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And I had to make it realistic, how happy would a mother be that her 18 year old daughter was pregnant? I don't think many...thanks again for the review : )

~Lauren

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I really loved this chapter, with Jaz realizing her feelings for Matt and christmas...oh it was pretty! Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Matt got his girl, Sirius got his motorcycle, Kylie got her ring... everything is kind of going all right in this chapter, isn't it?

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Ha, funny chapter...hope Remus and Liz finally find about them being penpals...update soon plz

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

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thumbs up for this chapter...so glad for the sequel, I've been misses Remus and Nyx for awhile but now it's back yay

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot. I'm really glad you liked it and that you liked the Melanism so much you read the sequel. Means a lot! Thanks for reviewing too, made me smile! Alex :)

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I really like your story...very good, can't wait for the next chapter...update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I am still working on the next chapter, but it's at least halfway done.

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Excellent Chapter...can't wait for the next...

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

~Lauren

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I really like your new story you got going on here...very interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

~Lauren

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Wewt...they make such a cute couple...happy Kat's and Al are finally together

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awesome chapter...Looking forward for the next!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the works! :) I honestly forgot about this fic haha.

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awesome chapter...can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter.


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Oh poor Jane...I hope her and Oliver work things out! Great Chapter, looking forward to the next one

Author's Response: I really like your penname. Pineapple is such an amazing fruit. /end random fruit rant

Glad you're enjoying the story!! I think her and Oliver will eventually work it out. Then again, things just keep piling up...

thank you!

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Yay! They finally kissed...so Cute..

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Whoa...that was very awesome! The whole time she was erasing her memories! Great Chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know that you liked it!

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omg...that was good...can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And sorry about the wait, but it should be up soon!

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Oh...My...God! Artemis believes that she's a Werewolf! Ha, ha! Poor Remus is probably thinking she ran from him when in fact she's running to protect him! Oh gosh, I can't wait for the next chapter...Good

10/10

Author's Response: Ooh, I like your analysis of how Remus feels. Makes me smile to hear your thoughts. Thanks for sending them, and the next chapter will be up in a few days!

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Love, love your story! Keep Updating please

Author's Response: We'll try! My beta and I have yet to start on chapter 7, but we will when we get the time!

Thanks so much for reading our story!

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Loved this chapter just very anxious to know what's going on with Artemis... Update soon

Author's Response: Hi, glad to hear more positive feedback! Thank you so much for reviewing, and the next chapter will be out soon!

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Oh no, poor Jake and Ken...
Great Chapter but now I am getting sad..

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're sad. But I had to do it. Will another chapter make you feel better? That might make you happy, as your review has done for me.

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omg awesome.I love the whole details in this chapter, you wrote is so visually well.Keep it going

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it - I tried to kind of give it a sensory overload, so I hope I managed that much!

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Omg...that was so beautiful...Lovely chapter, can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: aww, thank you very much! the next chapter should be up soon!

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Um my question is, what the heck is going to happen to RANDY? Great chapter

Author's Response: Ooh, I don't want to spoil the fun, but I can tell you that Randy will see the next chapter. Specifically what happens to him? We'll see about that next year! Thanks for another review!

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Lovely Chapter, loved the whole random gift exchanging between Melora and Sirius...Was rather cute!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it =]

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Aw come on, Mary just can't die...Isn't there a possible way you can make a huge miracle and let her live? Lol...
I love your story, it's very funny, emotional and heartful...Good work, keep it up!

Author's Response: Well, I will see what I can do! Thank you so much for reviewing :D

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OMG so mysterious but I freaking love it...Can't wait for the next chapter, you've done an awesome job!

Author's Response: Hi, glad you love it! Don't worry, next chapter is on the way. Thanks for reviewing! Makes me smile!

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LOVED IT! Keep the good work up!

Author's Response: Glad to hear I haven't lost my touch! The next chapter is already on the way! Thanks for reviewing!

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