Usually I don't go for Draco/Hermione but your summary struck me. No doubt you are a good writer, and your realistic about the fact that Draco and Hermione don't just suddenly announce their engagement after being enemies for five years. You portrayed the characters perfectly and I think you have a great skill. Keep going ^^
ShadeAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I don't like fics that do that either. I hate the ones where Hermione turns into a bimbo too. lol. Thanks for your review, and I will keep going. :)
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I know exactly what you mean. THANK THE LORD! Someone else realises that boys don't randomly burst into tears and Draco Malfoy DOES NOT BELONG WITH HERMIONE GRANGER. Thankyou for picking out some very valid faults. Well done.Author's Response: lol. Thanks, glad you appreciated it. :) Report Review
That was awesome! I loved Sirius's one the best because my friend loves him and thinks it's corny when I say 'Siriusly' xDD (Especially when her mum says it)
That was cute and funny and I loved it... Can't wait to read Snapies ^^
ShadehAuthor's Response: I have a friend who is crazy about Sirius too. I'm glad you liked this, Snape's is now up. Report Review
I really liked your use of words. The story had a good beginning to it and you use the characters perfectly. Well done ^^;
May I just ask, out of interest, when you talk about Lily's family dying, do you mean Petunia aswell?
x Shadeh xAuthor's Response: No, Petunia's not dead. She was out at the time, and its a mystery how Lily's parents were killed. (you'll find out pretty soon) So now, Petunia's is Lily's legal guardian. Pretty sad huh?
Anywho, thanks for the review! I really appreciate your support! Please keep them coming!
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Your'e detail is exellent. Most James/Lily fics I read nowadays bore me half to death, xD because the numb skulls that write them can't actually write oo;; But your fic was amazing, and I loved it. I knew from the very fast paragraph (which was really clever) I was going to love it ^^
PLEASE continue, I have a feeling this story will be extremely interesting
PS: If you have time could you please review my fic 'The deadly passion'? I would be very greatful if you could ^^; Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Yes, you're right, this'll have some Lily/James in it, but there'll be more to it. I'll continue, of course. I'll review your story, no problem. ^_^ Report Review
This was a nice, feel good story. I love Lily/James, even though I'm useles at writing them myself ^^
The only complaint I HAVE to make is the simple language, a little more detail would bring it to life. Well done, I enjoyed reading this, can't wait for more ^^Author's Response: Thank you, I will try and find some diffcult works
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