ha ha, nice. blair is going crazy. "green blur"? ha ha! i love it! please update soon! Report Review
OMG my dearest Enna! This story is still as good as always. Anywho, on the subject of A & J, I hope they are going out! That would be superly duperly awesome!!! Anyway, I love you Enna!
AKAuthor's Response: Wow K you acutally read it! Thanks! ILY!
Anyways, it is totally awesome about A & J,
isn't it? I'm so happy for them. I think they're going out...I think. Anywho, my other story, (you know the Ginny one?) should be posted soon, so check it out when it is, okay? I think I'm going to call it Vindictive. And you going to get me a banner from you friend at DA?
Lots of love,
Enna Report Review
What an amazing start to a story! I really like it so far! The only area I need to talk to you about is flow. Maybe you could make the dialogue a bit more pieced together, make it have a better flow. I really like the plot though, so, keep up the good work! It's really good so far! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
AugieAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for this generous review! I'm glad you like it! Chapter two is in the queue right now! I hope it gets validated...I'm so nervous right now.
thanks again for this lovely review!!! Report Review
Wow. That chapter was... wow. I am literally crying. That last few paragraphs made me so happy that I feel as though I am going to burst. I have nothing bad to say about this chapter. It is absoluetly positively perfect, through and through. I really hope that's not the whole story, because it is amazing so far and I want to read more! Please, if you want any more reviews, please request! I really like your writing style.
_iloveremus_Author's Response: Haha, oh no, we are quite far from the end, just wait... and the next chapter is in the queue! So I'll probably be back! I'm very moved that you literally started crying... I can't believe my writing did that! but I'm very pleased that it did. Again, sorry that I missed this earlier. :] Report Review
OMG OMG OMG! I loved this chapter SO much! Wow, you have a true gift! I love your characterization of George! I always thought that George was the more emotional of the twins, and this just proves it! I also really liked how Alana said that they need to take "small steps" to get back into their relationship! Good work! I really liked this chapter!
_iloveremus_Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so happy that you enjoy it!
I dunno if I missed these earlier, if so, I apologize! Report Review
I really liked it. It was a good first chapter, and it flowed quite nicely. I really like the part where Ernie tells Alana that George loves her, and how she reacts to it. George's characterization, especially after the war, is amazing. Of course, his twin just died, and he is supposed to be sad. You are an AHmazing writer. Keep up the good work!
_iloveremus_Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words, and I'm very pleased that you feel it's going so well.
I'm so worried about getting George wrong because he's my favorite character and I would feel horrible if I did, so you've made me a bit better on that front.
Thanks again!! :] Report Review
SEE! I TOLD YOU THAT YOU ALWAYS LEAVE OFF AT CLIFFIES! AH! THE TOTAL AGONY!!! Anywho, now that my rant is over, time to tell you what I thought *drumroll*... I REALLY LIKED IT! Oh my gosh, seriously Sirius! Ha ha! Anyway, some parts of it were a bit confusing, so, I recommend you make better transitions from part to part. Also, some of the dialogue in this chapter was teensie-weensie bit muddled (or so I could see). But, other than that, AH-mazing writing! Keep up the AH-mazing work!Author's Response: I'm sorry!!! I swear! I'm currently rewriting the chapters and I'm slow paced at it. I work on it bit by bit and yet I pop out oneshots like nothing.
this story is my under-the-bed monster. *dies* i do hope to get it done soon though! XD
Yeah I see what you mean. Thanks again for the wondeful review as always! Report Review
Ah, the joy of detentions with McBatty... which, by the way, I LOVE that nickname! I really loved how Lily kissed Jamesie-Poo in this chapter (what an amazing scene), and how shocked she was afterwards. The fight scene was very well-written. I love how outspoken Avril is. You can definetly tell that James is her brother. I also love how Sirius didn't make her stop fighting- he joined her! I loved reading this chapter!!!
AugieAuthor's Response: I love that name too.
I know a lot of writers like to have the OC's help James and Lily get together, but there's no need as they got together anyway in the actually book. ^^
So do I! I couldn't help it. I really don't see Sirius as the type to stop a girl from fighting just because he may like her or because she's a girl so why not have him step in XD too much fun for me i think, lol! Report Review
I don't see why you need to worry about your flow- this story is absoluetly wonderful! When I reached chapter three, I realized that I actually HAVE read this story before! I knew I recognized the title from somewhere! Anyways, back to my criticising, I really liked the Quidditch scene. I love how you always manage to leave off your chapters at cliffhangers, and how you have very good characterization and detail. PLEASE keep up the amazing work!
AugieAuthor's Response: Lol I'm glad to hear that and I hope you liked it so far!
Thank you so much for the great review! Report Review
Wow. First off, I must say that this story is very well written. I noticed in the request that you have never written slash before, and that surprises me. Are you sure? This story is really good for a first time slash writer.
I really liked how you made Cedric like Two-Face. He wants Alicia, but, does he really? Or does he want Ken? I thought it was wonderful how you ended it, with him rejecting Ken and instead running back into Alicia's arms. So, I'm going to assume that the two of them still see each other secretly after that (Cedric and Ken I mean).
But, overall, I really liked it. Sorry, I'm not quite that good at giving reviews yet, but, please request again with more stories! You are an amazing writer. Never doubt yourself.
Until the Rubber Ducks,
_iloveremus_Author's Response: Thank you! XD Yes, it is definitely my first slash. I generally don't touch the stuff. Thank you so much!
Thank you. I figured it would be more realistic for him to do what was popular and accepted, seeing as they are still teenagers.
Thank you so much. No, you're doing fine. I really appreciate your review. Thanks so much ♥ Report Review
AMAZING! U HAD BETTER UPDATE ASAP!
AugieAuthor's Response: Sweet, thank you. If you haven't already read the first of the series, I highly recommend that. It'll set the foreground for this story, and make it more easy to understand.
Wirting chapter two now!
KURLZ Report Review
Wow, that was. wow. Are Albus and Adhara ever gonna get together?Author's Response: thankyou. well, you'll just have to wait and see! Report Review
OMG HURRY UP AND UPDATE!
AugieAuthor's Response: I will! I'm going to add the new chapter to tonight :) Report Review
Wow, that was intense! I love Sophie/Draco! WRITE MORE SOON!
AugieAuthor's Response: I am writing, don't worry! Report Review
Wow, that was. wow. UPDATE SOON! ASTORIA'S A BITCH!
Augie Report Review
didn't u already do this chapter?
AugieAuthor's Response: yes, i did. but there were few grammatical errors in it so i wanted to change and update it. no worries, you'll know when i update! thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
amazing chappie! keep up the good work!
Augie Report Review
ARGH! UPDATE FASTER PLEASE~!
AugieAuthor's Response: :) i'll get 25 up as soon as i can! thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
OMG OMG OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! U NEED TO WRITE A SEQUEL! PLEASE!
AugieAuthor's Response: I wrote this so long ago I wouldn't know what to write a sequel about. If I ever do, I'll be sure to let you know. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Wowza wow, this story is getting better.
AugieAuthor's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it! Report Review
Mr. Lupin is a jerkwad.
AugieAuthor's Response: He was rather nasty to Remus, but don't hate him just yet. Thanks for reading! Report Review
NO! BLAKE DIED! *crying*
AugieAuthor's Response: I know, I'm sorry! I had to do it! I felt horrible when I did, but it had to be done... now I feel sad. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I love the Marauders. They rule.
AugieAuthor's Response: They do rule, they're the best characters JKR created (in my opinion). Thanks for reading! Report Review
AH! I WANT THEM TO BE FRIENDS SO BAD!
AugieAuthor's Response: Don't worry, it won't be long! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Larry's a jerk.
AugieAuthor's Response: I agree. Thanks for reading! Report Review
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