I truly loved this one, and can't wait for the next one! Keep it up :)Author's Response: Don't worry I will. Thank you so much for all of your reviews. Report Review
Hmm... I like the dialogue, but it is a bit quick, it's hard to tell what they're doing while they're talking. Unless, of course, they're just plain looking and talking to each other ^_^
Loved it, nonetheless, and am pleased that they are, at least, speaking to each other! :DAuthor's Response: Yes, pretty much they are just sittintg at the table, I think Hermione is eating some muffin, I will have to go back and maybe add some more action. :) Thanks Report Review
Ooh, Ronniekins is back ^_^
I had had the horrible feeling that he was dead!
Very shocking, indeed.
And considering that Ron was in this chapter, the memory wouldn't have been really needed anyways!
Anyways, once again, I love it. :)Author's Response: So glad that you like it, I hope that you continue to do so :) Thanks again for reviewing Report Review
I don't know, that was my first thought!
I'm definitely going to keep reading, I love this story, keep up the amazing work!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I wont say anything, you will just have to wait and see :) Report Review
Just by reading this, it does sound like you've been in love before :)
It's a nice change from those people who write love stories and obviously have no idea what it's like.
Once again, amazing job :)Author's Response: LOL, yes I am old and have been in love more than once (thankfully I am happily married now, and will hopefully not have to live through what Hermione is now going through) :) Glad that you like it, and I hope you continue to do so :) (P.S. I am not really old, just a little bit) Report Review
I like this, it's very well written! Good job, I'm definitely going to continue to read :)Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad that you are enjoying :) Report Review
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