great story! im always waiting for updates and check on your page almost daily. keep it up this story seems much more intense than the last 2 and im hooked.

Author's Response: Wow! Well, I only update this once a week, so you'll only find a new chapter on Wednesdays (or perhaps Thursdays, depending on what part of the world you live in). This one is definitely more intense than the others. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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that was a great story. You should another to it.
Don't stop writing! You're really good.

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good stuff.
i like that i am writing you a bottle.
10/10
post soon please.

Author's Response: Gracias! I'm glad you wrote me a bottle too. It was great encouragement to get the next chapter out.
--Chris

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I liked this story a lot namely of course for the ironic ending.
Maybe you should write a round two.

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Amazing story loved every single twist and turn every single chapter. Please keep writing you have quite the talent for it.
Congratulations on the entire tale as well as a perfect endding.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

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it didn't suck it is a good story

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

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very good you have very interesting endings to your stories.

Author's Response: thanks! I try to make the endings of each of my fics a little different so they aren't all the same! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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this story was absolutely amazing. emotional humorous climax with quite the resolution. i cant wait to read the rest of your stories.

Author's Response: wow thanks! I'm thrilled you liked it! I tried not too make it too angsty and sad... I wanted it to have the right amount. I'm glad you thought it was good! :)
*if you've posted anything, I'll find time to check it out. :)
Thanks again for your review! :)

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as you mentioned leaving on a cliffhanger gives all the reason to keep reading. please post soon

Author's Response: Merci! I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger although I don't tend to write them a lot. My chapters seem to run into mildly good stopping points.
--Chris

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great start already hooked

Author's Response: Ooh, glad to hear it :)

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definitely one of the best stories i have read so far. keep it up i may have the first read but it will not be the only person to review. very interesting and quite a twist and it is only 5 chapters long? you have talent

Author's Response: Thanks! I have chapter six up and seven in the works. I think they get a little more interesting due to new plot developments, but you'll have to decide for yourself. Keep reading.
--Chris

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