{reviewid: 2239945, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
19th October 2009:
i think hermione should return to the show
maybe it could be because of something Ron says to her when he sees her... like how Draco would never like her
just an idea
awesome job by the way
Author's Response: Thanks for your ideas! And your review :) But Ron is keeping his thoughts to himself...for now ;) :P
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{reviewid: 2189096, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
10th August 2009:
oh dont you love the odd looks people give you
i get them all the time
they're kind of funny
anyway i loved the chapter
keep up the good work
and update again soon
sunflower_love
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2187818, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
9th August 2009:
wow feel like an idiot for my last review
probably should have kept readin your authors note
im sorry
oay im still feling really dumb right now and very embarressed so im just going to your doing an aweome job and i cant wait for chapter 7
sorry
sunflower_love
Author's Response: Please don't worry about it i'm not going to laugh trust me i do things like that all the time more than your average persone to be honest i'm just glad that you're liking my story it makes me soo happy to read what you guys have to say about it so please keep reading and reviewing
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{reviewid: 2187815, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
9th August 2009:
are you really making this a ron/hermione fic
please dont
please
i know that this your story and you can do whatever you want and whatever you think works but i believe you could continue making this a great story by throwing in a bit of r/h but keeping it d/h
ill keep reading whatever way you go but i can honestly say i that i would much prefer keeping it a draco/hermione fic its not as cliche as r/h
sunflower_love
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{reviewid: 2182038, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
3rd August 2009:
heya its me again
my last review i only asked because im an adelaide chick myself so was just wonderin why you chose it
from my perspective it seemed an odd chioce and i live here
(ill point out now that whilst i say odd i mean it in a very good way i reckon its awesome)
and with the chicko thing i only pointed it out as i only know few shops that sell them as, going by the people i know, no-one eats them... mind you we dont really eat damper either (thats an outback thing) but still i think its awesome
sunflower_love
Author's Response: Hello dere.. nice 2 hear frm u again.
well, by ur last review i definitelty cud gauge dat u r frm Adelaide, it was kinda umm appareant.. Anyways, abt d setting thing well, i defnitely believe dat it cud b d best location i cud place my story in.. u may find it weird but den i've a kanck 4 diff. kinda things. n yeah, abt d food controversy well, as i said i'll luk it up n correct thru editing if need be.. Anyways, thanx 4 ur review n i hope u njoy forthcoming chappies too :) n yeah one more thing i wanna say is dat Stay Tuned please..
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{reviewid: 2181092, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
2nd August 2009:
great job on the story
although from last chapter chiko rolls aren't exactly
"famous australian food" but thats cool
quick question
can i ask why did you pick adelaide
Author's Response: Thank u 4 d kind review sunflower love. I am happy 2 know dat u r likin my story so far.. :)
Umm abt ur question, well, u sure may.. I chose Adelaide city for 3 reasons n dey r:
1) I wanted an outside location other than d typical London thing which we read abt in d books, i am not against it, its gr8 actually but just 4 a new lively feel.. :)
2) I knew i wanted sum place in Australia 'cause i think it marks a beautiful place on d world map 2 begin wid n it cud b fascinating if u c it closely
3) I did my research b4 choosing it n found out dat Adelaide city being the capital of South Australia gave a nice town feel 2 d story, which is wat i xactly wanted alongwith tourist opportunities n further research proved dat city had a rugged as well as a nice green feel 2 it. So all this added 2 d charm n i found out dat it cud b d best picturesque setting i cud place my story in :)
Abt Chiko rolls well, during one of my research sessions i got 2 know abt it, u may b rite.. dey may not b typically famous Australian cuisine.. i'll search through n probably correct it thru editing of course.. Thanx 4 pointing dat out b4 ny1 else cud *winks*
well, dats abt it, i hope i didn't xplain 2 much but i just simply cited d reasons. Anyways, thanx 4 letting me know ur thoughts abt it thru a review of course.. it was a pleasure 2 read it.. :)
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{reviewid: 2087086, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
2nd April 2009:
I loved Darrens point of view
Great job on this chapter and for making it to 60
have fun on spring break
sunflower_love
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. And, thank you! :D
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{reviewid: 2079615, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
21st March 2009:
i'm thinking there is more than one murderer
in the beginning there was one but in one of the following chapters it said they so that to me implies more than one murderer...i thought for a bit it might be seamus as he came in during the making of the list... but for some weird reason which by the way is probably totally wrong but for some reason i get the feeling this is all set up and they aren't really dead... like this is all some huge prank... although as i said it is probably totally wrong
anyway update quickly
i don't usually read these sorts of stories but yours caught my attention so please make it a good ending
sunflower_love
Author's Response: I'm glad that my story attracted your attention. The ending should be good.??
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{reviewid: 2075403, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
15th March 2009:
im really loving the story
i cant wait for then next chapter
and for you to start really getting into the plot
update quickly
sunflower_love
Author's Response: hiyo
im glad ur liking my story
sorry but im off writing on HPFF for a while
you know school and stuff
blah!!! lol
thanks 4 ur review...=D
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{reviewid: 2072678, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
11th March 2009:
At this point i don't really care about team johnny or team adam either would be good but if johnny stops being a jerk i would probably go for him...
Definetly team teddy and definetly team marauders
Also i am offically making a team vanessa and team veronica and i am rooting for team vanessa
Just so you know
great job update this and your other stories soon
sunflower_love
Author's Response: Dear sunflower_love,
Oh shoot, I forgot to make a team Vanessa and Veronica! Haha, you can be the president of team Vanessa:) Thank you so much!
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom
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{reviewid: 2051413, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
8th February 2009:
hello... great chapter...
you did a good job of conveying the lose she was feeling espically if you've never through that before yourself
and for your sake i hope you never do
it's not an easy thing to go through and you really did an amazing job of showing how she would be feeling
nice work update soon
sunflower_love
Author's Response: Yeah, I believe you're right. Kathleen isn't anything like me either as far as personality goes. So it's not like I could imagine myself going through it because I wouldn't act like Kathleen at all in this situation.
Thank you, though. I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, as depressing as it was.
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{reviewid: 2043275, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
27th January 2009:
Ohh i love suprises
Are you writing another story or something
You have to tell me
I'm all excited now
Anyway great job by the way although this chapter did seem a little on the short side... but i enjoyed it anyway
How many chapters do you think you'll write
I can't remeber if you've said or not
Update soon
sunflower_love
Author's Response: I am writing another story . . . But that's not the suprise! Don't worry, you'll find out all in good time. :)
I actually haven't said how many chapters. I don't know for sure, but I can give an approximation. (Don't take this for sure, though, I know where I am now, and I'm pretty sure how I'm going to end, but I'm not quite sure what's going on in between.)
Finishing Anna's Sixth Year (plus the summer): 10 chapters.
Anna's Seventh Year: 5-10 chapters
Damon's Party/Summer: 5-ish chapters
Fall '79 -Summer '80: 5-ish chapters
Fall '80 - Summer '81: probably less than 5 chapters
Early Fall '81 - End: anywhere from 1 to 10 chapters, depending
And then - the sequel begins!
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{reviewid: 2037955, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
21st January 2009:
I'm really sorry to hear about the death in your family
I know what it's like to lose a loved one and i hope your ok
Great update by the way i really liked this chapter and it's good to hear that you have finished the story
i can't wait to read the rest
Author's Response: I haven't actually finished the story yet, but it is all planned out.
Thank you for your condolences and I'm thrilled that you liked the chapter.
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{reviewid: 2037619, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
21st January 2009:
i really can't wait to see how this story will end
usually i have a pretty good idea as to the direction a story will go... however yours is really difficult as i 'm not even sure if hermione dreamed her whole hogwarts life or not
i hope what i just wrote made any sense to you anyway update quickly and good job with this chapter
by the way if your feeling uninspired go outside and lay on the ground so you can watch the clouds... it may seem odd but it's what i do when i have the time
Author's Response: Haha, well, I'm sorry, but I'm not giving anything away just yet ;)
What you wrote did make sense :) I will try to update as soon as I can find a free minute!
Aww, seems idyllic. I wish Norway wasn't so cold, though :(
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{reviewid: 2035989, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
19th January 2009:
I swear Aidan is the sweetest nicest boyfriend ever
I mean he knows his girlfriend was in love with Oliver and yet he'swilling to forget all that... he also didn't pester Kenna when she wanted to be alone and just aww he so sweet
Oh yeah you were right Oliver was a huge jerk in this chapter
Anyway i still want Kenna and Oliver to get together as long as Aidan doesn't get hurt he's too nice
Awesome job
Keep up the great work and update soon
Author's Response: Isn't he, though?? It's such a shame that he's not the one she wanted. Oliver is a ginormous jerk, and I refuse to apologize for him. He's still got some making up to do.
Don't worry. Aidan's a smart guy. He's going to be just fine.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing!!!
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{reviewid: 2033452, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
15th January 2009:
Wow its been ages since you update
i thought you had abandoned it
im glad you didn't though
your doing such an awesome job
Just one thing though
aren't people going to realise that kat and the others aren't in the music classes or at dinner when white magic are there... i mean like now when they are introducing white magic won't someone like James realise they aren't there because it is his sister...
Oh well can't wait to see what your going to do next
try update again really soon
xoxoxo
Author's Response: oo i will never abandon it but idk i get writers block during the day and always write at like 2 a.m. but i hate staying up late so i guess thats y :P
but that is true but the music class is instead of muggle studies too so not everyone takes that class...and yeah thats true but you i'll think a way around it :D
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{reviewid: 2030859, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
12th January 2009:
i really didn't see that one coming
Oliver Wood evil who wouldhavethough
update soon
can't wait to read the end
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad
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{reviewid: 2027757, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
8th January 2009:
love your story
update really soon
you are doing such an awesum job
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{reviewid: 2027663, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
8th January 2009:
I have to admit I'm kind of jealous
It never snows in Australia
At least not where i live
You are soo lucky
Anyway loved the story update again soon
Author's Response: Dude! I'm totally jealous! You're like the second person to go 'it doesn't snow in Austrailia.' But you live in Austrailia! It's freakin cool! :D
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{reviewid: 2023521, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
3rd January 2009:
i meant to leave a review early but i completly forgot
i'm really enjoying your story
please update asap and keep up the great work
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{reviewid: 2023462, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
3rd January 2009:
I love your story... It's just so funny
Please update soon
I only jusr came across your story
and i really want to keep reading it
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{reviewid: 2022546, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
1st January 2009:
I am really enjoying your story... its so much fun
i think i'll write a oliver/oc story
i've had an idea in my head for awhile but you've inspireed me
please update soon
Author's Response: Hi! Glad to hear that you like the humour and stuff! It was a lot of fun writing Naomi as well, especially when it comes to imagining her over-dramatic character. :D
Ooh! When you write one, I'll go check it out. Oliver/Oc stories are extremely fun to write and read :) I'm so glad you felt inspired from reading the story. :D Good luck with yours! :)
I'll try my best to update as soon as I can, hopefully not long after the queue opens. XD
Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2007808, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
12th December 2008:
...OMG...
did you have to leave it there
i want to keep reading
please update asap
great job by the way
Author's Response: Hey, thanks and good to hear from you! :)
I try to update at least once a week so keep checking regularly!
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{reviewid: 2006560, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
10th December 2008:
I'd love to see where your going with this
that is if you decide to update
i read your story ages ago and i realised i haven't left a review
soo please update
Author's Response: OMFG, I haven't been here in AGES. Sorry guys, I will be updating VERYY soon.
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{reviewid: 2005237, reviewer: 'sunflower_love'}
9th December 2008:
OMG
Tell you what that was awful
not the chapter, Reg
he told her he loved her and then killed her baby brother
update soon please
Author's Response: heeheehee the power of the writer! you gotta love it =D working on the next chapter as we speak!
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